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可以套用的高考读写任务的语篇模块是不存在的，但通过分析历年高考题和模拟题的各个要点，我们发现是有一定规律可循的。先将要点分类，再根据不同类型去探求要点段落的写法，总结每类要点可套用的句式和段落结构，这对提高写作能力是行之有效的。,叙述经历,这类要点中常含“以你或你朋友的经历说明(感受或观点)”“讲述一次你或你朋友的经历”，前者所述经历一定要紧扣你要说明的感受或观点，后者所述的经历故事多与阅读材料中的故事相类似。 叙述经历一般包括记叙文的基本要素,即某人在何时何地因何原因做了何事，结果如何，或者说，起因、经过和结果。,1. 我有一次相似的经历。三年前，因此，这次经历带给我 I had a similar experience of Three years ago, Therefore, this experience brings me 2. 我曾经有一次的难忘经历。去年夏天， I had an unforgettable experience of Last summer, ,3. 我永远也不会忘记我的经历。我记得当我 I will never forget my own experience of I remember when I was 4. 我永远不会忘记我自己的一次经历。我清楚地记得曾经有一段时间 I will never forget my own experience of I can well remember that there was a time when,5. 读了这个故事后，我情不自禁地想起 After reading the story, I cant help thinking of 6. 我突然想起我的朋友李明的一次相似的经历。 It occurred to me/It struck me that Li Ming, a friend of mine, had a similar experience.,7. 这个故事让我想起一次类似的经历。 The story reminds me of a similar experience. 8. 该文让我想起自己的一次的经历。两年前，我 但是当 结果 The passage reminds me of my own experience of Two years ago, I But when As a result 9. 从这次经历中，我学到了/知道了/意识到 From this experience, I learn/know/realize that,高考链接,叙述一次想家的经历(时间、地点、原因)。 (2011广东高考) The passage reminds me of my own experience of feeling homesick. When I was 10 years old, I depended on my parents for everything. However, they once sent me to my uncles home in another city because they were too busy to take care of me. At that time, I did miss my parents and feel lonely.,首先，引出经历：我曾有过一次难以忘怀的经历，那次确实伤害到了我的父母。 然后，叙述经历：was addicted to playing computers/asked me to do homework/ shouted rudely at/realized that I was wrong,要点特训,1. 叙述你因做了对不起父母的事而后悔的经历。,(引出经历) I once had an unforgettable experience that I did hurt my parents. (叙述经历) I remember when I was fifteen years old and I was addicted to playing computers. One day, I chatted with my friend about some interesting things on the Internet.,Then, my mum had asked me to do my homework many times, so I felt annoyed and finally shouted rudely at her. After that, I realized that I was wrong and regretted having done that. I shouldnt have treated my parents that way.,首先，引出经历：我自己确实有过帮助别人的经历。 然后，叙述经历：took a bus/tried to drive an old lady off for having no money to buy a ticket/paid for her/thanked me and praised me,2. 叙述一次你或你的朋友助人的经历。(包括时间、地点和起因),(引出经历) I did have my own experience of helping others. (叙述经历) On an extremely hot day two years ago, I was taking a bus home. But when I was thankful that I could take the bus so soon, an old lady in rags came into my sight. The bus driver tried to drive her off for having no money to buy a ticket, and then I paid for her without hesitation. As a result, the old lady thanked me a lot and everybody in the bus praised me too.,首先,写出主题句：我突然想到我也上过一堂难忘的班会课。然后，说明事情发生的时间、地点、经过和结果(in the first class / in the classroom / show us beautiful pictures / encourage us to tell stories /give us encouragements/ become confident)。,3.叙述你经历的一堂难忘的班会课。,It occurred to me that I once had an unforgettable class meeting. The story happened in the first class when I was in Senior One. When the class began, a young man came into our classroom. He showed us many beautiful pictures from which we learned how to form good habits in the new school. Then, he encouraged us to tell short stories about our interesting school lives. He gave different encouragements to different students. From then on, I became confident about myself.,仿真模拟,The author talked about her first day as a waitress, which made her tired and decide to give up. However, the words of praising her good service cleared up her tiredness and changed her mind. There is no doubt that praising is of great significance to people. With others praise, people will realize what he or she does is worthwhile, which is beneficial to encourage them to move on. I will never forget my own experience of being praised.,When I was a primary student in Grade Five, I got higher marks in an exam. In class my headteacher said I had made great progress and asked my classmates to clap for me and learn from me. It was the first time that I had been praised by a teacher in class. Honestly, this experience made a big difference to my future study. It was not until then that I realized the fun of studying and decided to study harder.,
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