七年级英语下册 Unit 11 How was your school trip同步作文指导课件 （新版）人教新目标版.ppt

单元同步作文指导,Unit 11 How was your school trip?,本单元以“学校旅行”为话题，主要描述期间所发生事情的经过及自己的感受。具体到书面表达中要求同学们会写关于学校旅行的文章，此类文章以记叙为主，要说明事件的时间、地点、人物、经过和结果。在写作中，要分清主次，详略得当；另外，由于是写一篇印象深刻的经历，故文中应有描述性的句子，比如描述人物的心理、感受、天气状况等。 教材中出现的能用于此类作文的句型： Today I went on a school trip.今天我参加了学校旅行。 I think todays school trip was terrible.我认为今天的学校旅行很糟糕。 We took the train to the museum.我们乘火车去了博物馆。 We visited the science museum and it was really interesting.我们参观了科学博物馆，那真的很有趣。,I went to the gift shop and bought some lovely gifts for my parents.我去了礼品店给我父母买了一些可爱的礼物。 They werent expensive.它们不贵。 All in all，it was an exciting day.总的来说，是激动人心的一天。 I didnt like the trip at all.我一点也不喜欢这次旅行。,昨天你刚经历了一次学校旅行，请以“My School Trip”为题，写一篇60词左右的作文，记述你昨天的活动和感受。,My School Trip It was sunny yesterday.My school went to the zoo.It was really interesting.We went there by bus.The zoo is very big.At the zoo，I saw lots of animals and I took many photos.I learned a lot about animals.My classmates and I also went to the gift shop and bought some gifts.They werent expensive.It was an exciting day.,【点拨】本文属于以叙事为主的记叙文。写作时首先要审明题意，围绕“我的学校旅行”组织材料，发挥想象，交代清楚时间、地点、人物、过程、结果等，要注意在记述当天活动的同时，还要写出自己的感受，正确运用人称和动词时态。,上周六你们班同学在老师的带领下，参观了博物馆。请根据下列提示写一篇短文介绍，活动的过程和你的感受。要求：短文必须包括所有提示点，不少于60词。 提示：1.出发时间(8：30 am.)。2.交通方式(bus)。3.路上所用时间(about twenty minutes)。4.活动内容(see old things，listening to the guide，watch videos)。5.返程时间及感受(5：00 pm.，tired，happy and excited)。,One possible version： Last Saturday our teacher took us to the museum.We left at 8：30 am. by bus.It took us about twenty minutes to get to the museum.In the museum，we saw many old and interesting things.We also listened to the guide.He told us the history and the stories of the things.And we watched videos about the museum，too.We got back at 5：00 pm.We were tired but happy and excited.,单元常见错误诊断,病号1：Did you came late for class again today? 【处方】在含有实义动词的一般过去时的句子中，变为一般疑问句，应在句首加助动词did，同时句中动词应用原形。故原句中came应改为come。 病号2：What was your school trip? 【处方】询问“怎么样”应用句型“Whatbelike？”或“Howbe？”，故原句应改为“What was your school trip like？”或“How was your school trip？”。,病号3：Everything were about robots in the museum. 【处方】everything为不定代词。不定代词作主语，谓语动词必须用单数。故句中were应改为was。 病号4：He bought_to_me a new bike. 【处方】“给某人买某物”应表达为“buy sth.for sb.”或“buy sb.sth.”故原句中应去掉to。,