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（giving reasons）,Paragraph writing in task-based writing：,分析原因,Fast food is becoming popular in China, especially among children. There are several reasons for its popularity .First , it is very convenient and saves a lot of time to eat fast food. You just go into a fast food restaurant, order your food, and then you can either eat there or take it away. Second, its popularity is also due to the comfortable environment and the quality of food in fast food restaurants.,主题：分析洋快餐在中国受欢迎的原因。,一、段落模版：明示现象/观点 列出理由( 建议),指出现象 Fast food is becoming popular in China, especially among children. 分析原因 (引出)There are several reasons for its popularity. (逐条列出) First , it is very convenient and saves a lot of time to eat fast food. You just go into a fast food restaurant, order your food, and then you can either eat there or take it away. Second, its popularity is also due to the comfortable environment and the quality of food in fast food restaurants.,主题：分析洋快餐在中国受欢迎的原因。,一、段落模版：明示现象/观点 列出理由( 建议),(1)The reason why. is that (2)There are three reasons for (3)There are several reasons that contribute to. (4)My views are based on the following reasons. (5) There are several reasons why. First of all, .Secondly,.Finally,. (6) Reasons for this are varied. Some people think.Others think. (7)I firmly support the view that. because . In addition,. (8) The reasons (for this) can be listed as follows. /The reasons for this are as follows. To begin with,. In addition,. (9)I think so becauseMoreoverperhaps (10)I have several reasons to support my opinion. First of all In addition,二、句式模版：,三、超级仿写,(2009广东) Jackie is perhaps the most easily annoyed koala (考拉) at the Featherdale Wildlife Park in southern Australia. All the koalas there are unhappy and complaining. You would be too if you were used to night activities and someone kept waking you up all day while you were trying to sleep it off. Thats rightsleep it off. The average koala is always half asleep because it feeds on the leaves of a special kind that makes it sleepy. The reason why Jackie and her fellow koalas are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep is that they can be hugged and photographed by tourists, who make the trips to Featherdale and an increasing number of other national parks for just that special experience. Whatever department in the Aussie government in charge of such things is now moving to make the practice illegal, which is understandable. How would you react, my friend, if you were trying to sleep off a dozen times and some round, furry creature smelling of grass kept waking you? 【写作内容】 1. 以约30词概括短文的主要内容。 2. 以约120词就“该不该禁止游客和动物拍照”进行讨论，包括以下内容要点： （1）人们在参观动物园时为什么喜欢和动物拍照？ （2）假如你处在那些动物的位置，你会有什么反应？ （3）你认为是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照？,段落写作1：人们在参观动物园时为什么喜欢和动物拍照？,注意： 1.段落模版：明示现象/观点 列出理由( 建议) 2.活用句式模版。,Many tourists love to take photos with animals when visiting wildlife parks.,句式模版：(1)The reason why. is that (2)There are three reasons for (3)There are several reasons that contribute to. (4)My views are based on the following reasons. (5) There are several reasons why. First of all, .Secondly,.Finally,. (6) Reasons for this are varied. Some people think.Others think. (7)I firmly support the view that. because . In addition,. (8) The reasons (for this) can be listed as follows. /The reasons for this are as follows. To begin with,. In addition,. (9)I think so becauseMoreoverperhaps (10)I have several reasons to support my opinion. First of all In addition,_（毫无疑问）that many tourists love to take photos with animals when visiting wildlife parks._ (其理由如下）._（首先），some people want to remember their enjoyable and unforgettable experience with the animals by taking photos with them._（其次）, animals like koala and panda are so lovely that many tourists can not help hugging them and photographing with them .,There is no doubt,The reasons can be listed as follows,For one thing,For another,One possible version:,写作段落2：你认为是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照？,I believe that taking photos with animals should be banned. The reasons for this can be listed as follows. For one thing , animals are lives, too and they have the rights to live in freedom and happiness. No one is to take their rights away. For another, taking photos with animals may lead to some unexpected dangers. Terrible virus carried by animals can spread to visitors and visitors may also be hurt by animals attacks. All in all, taking photos with animals should be banned considering the good of both animals and visitors .,(yes),写作段落2：你认为是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照？,As far as I am concerned, I disagree with the idea that it is illegal to take photos with animals and it is mainly because tourists pay for tickets to visit the wildlife parks and it will be a pity for them if they cant have a photo taken with an animal. Moreover, more tourists will be attracted to the wildlife parks if they are permitted to take photos with animals. Therefore , wildlife parks can set some special time, which can both satisfy tourists and protect the animals.,No .,【写作内容】 1. 以约30个词概括学生不愿告诉老师内心想法的原因； 2. 以约120个词就“现代师生关系”这个主题发表你的看法，包括如下要点： (1) 你是否愿意告诉老师你内心的想法，为什么？ (2) 你希望你与你的老师之间的关系是怎样的？ (3) 如何才能建立这种关系？,Write the topic sentences better,(1) 你是否愿意告诉老师你内心的想法？为什么？ Yes. While some students might have doubts, I am willing to share inner thoughts with my teachers. Personally, Im willing to share my true feelings with my teachers. Regardless of the generation gap, Im willing to communicate with my teachers about what I actually think in detail. However, in my opinion, I think its of great significance to tell and I will surely do it.,No. Like most of the students, I dont want to tell my teachers of my inner thoughts. To be honest/frank, Im one of those who are unwilling to tell my teachers of everything in my mind. As for me, it seems a little difficult to exchange inner thoughts and ideas with teachers. The survey deeply impresses me and I wouldnt choose to share all my ideas either. Personally, Ill follow the 96.7% of the students and wont tell my teachers my inner thoughts.,The passage narrates that koalas who are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep are unhappy and complainingfor tourists taking photos. The author appeals to us to be more kind to animals. The reasons why tourists like taking photos of the animals in the zoo perhaps vary from people to people. Some think it a happy reminder of their visit to the zoo or the animals, while others may consider it just sort of fun to have. But anyway they may not share the deep feelings of the animals. If I were in the same position as the animal in the zoo, my reaction would be very severe strongly against being photographed. No having peaceful surroundings to sleep, dont you suffer restless and fidgets. No doubt we do and so do the animals. I think it necessary to ban tourists taking pictures with animals, making a comfortable environment for them to live and regarding them as our friends, so as to found harmonious relations with animals.,The generation gap between students and their teachers is becoming more significant with only 3.3 percent out of a survey group of 1,000 students from 30 key middle schools in the city saying they would be willing to tell their teachers of their inner thoughts. In todays educational environment, teachers are positioned to be the authority figure for learning instead of becoming good friends in the life of students. As only students with good marks in exams are considered the “apples in the eyes” of the teachers, most students think their teachers to be partial（偏心）. “I feel sad to hear such remarks,” said Yu Yi, a well-known special-class teacher. She recalled that in the past, teachers and students would play basketball together or comment on novels while sitting on the grass during a break. But today, study and good marks are the only topics of conversation between students and teachers. “Schools are not only the place where knowledge is imparted（传授）, but also where students are taught how to be an upright person,” Yu said. “The success of a person is not merely determined by intelligence but also by emotional state.” Yang Xiong, director of the Juvenile Research Institute, said the educational system which focuses on examinations should be held to be substantially responsible.,
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