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,分类写作,八、道歉信,celebrate the precious moment 庆祝这珍贵的时刻 the final examinations 期末考试 be around the corner 即将到来 appointment 约会 accept sb. sincere apology 接受某人真诚的道歉 a face-to-face talk 一次面谈 for my healths sake 为了我的健康 keep to sb. word 遵守承诺 further ones studies 进修；继续学习,【必备词语】,pick sb. up at the airport 到机场接某人 fix another time for 安排另外一个时间 much to my regret 让我感到很遗憾 miss the opportunity 错过机会 wish the activity to be a great success 祝这次活动成功 places of historical interest 名胜古迹 consider my situation 考虑我的情况 forgive 原谅,【必备词语】,1. Im terribly sorry I couldnt reply to your email in time. 十分抱歉我不能及时回复您的邮件。 2. I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of answering your letter in time. 我十分抱歉没有及时回信。 3. I sincerely apologize again for my mistake. 我再次为我的错误真诚地道歉。 4. It is much to my regret that I missed the chance to get together. 错过了在一起的机会，我感到很遗憾。,【好句朗诵】,5. Once again, please accept my sincere apology. 请再次接受我真诚的道歉。 6. Anyhow, I sincerely hope that we can fix another time for . 如论如何，我真心希望我们可以再找一个时间 7. I have been looking forward to it. 我一直都在期待着。 8. Im awfully sorry for the sudden change of plan and feel it a great pity to miss the opportunity. 对突然的改变我感到十分抱歉，对错过这个机会感到很可惜。,【好句朗诵】,1. I am so sorry for my mistake and I am now writing to apology for my carelessness.,1. apology改为apologize,2. Much to my regret I was unable to keep my promise to attend your birthday party last Saturday so I had to stay at home to look after my sick mother.,2. so改为because,【单句改错】 每句只有一个错误,3. I feel terrible sorry for missing the chance of attending your graduation ceremony.,3. terrible改为terribly,4. I very sorry to inform you that I did not manage to complete the book report you assigned last week.,4. very前面加am,5. Please forgive me for my careless and the inconvenience that I may have caused.,5. careless改为carelessness,【单句改错】 每句只有一个错误,6. Again, I do hope that you can understand my situation and accept my apologize.,6. apologize改为apology,7. I am really sorry, but Ive lost the book that you lend me when I stayed with you in June.,7. lend改为lent,8. I would like to buy a new copy of that book and post them to you.,8. them改为it,【单句改错】 每句只有一个错误,9. My mobile phone ran out of battery, because I didnt get your text messages.,9. because改为so,10. I got the message you leave at the hotel when I got back there late on Thursday.,10. leave改为left,【单句改错】 每句只有一个错误,【2013山东卷改编：未及时回复而道歉】 假如你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回封邮件： 1. 未及时回信的原因； 2. 你假期的打算（如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等）,【真题满分佳作赏析】,满分佳作（一） Dear Tom, Im terribly sorry I couldnt reply to your email which you sent me a week ago immediately. I was so occupied with the final exams. As for the coming summer holiday, I will first do a part time job in a fast-food restaurant. Not only will I earn some money but I will also gain some social experience through it. And then I will go on a trip to Sichuan, where there are a great number of places of interest. Finally, Ill go to Yaan to work as a volunteer. There is no doubt that children there are badly in need of help. I hope what I will do will make a great difference to them. Best wishes. Yours sincerely, Li Hua,满分赏析 先用Im terribly sorry对未能及时回信道歉，terribly加强了道歉的语气。 接着简单讲明原因；be occupied with sth./doing sth.(忙于某事/做某事)的运用体现了作者的语言功底，不是用简单的词汇busy，可给评卷老师留下好印象。 Not onlybut also 连接并列句，属于本书在“写作基础”部分训练的句型。注意：not only在句首，谓语动词要用倒装形式；gain some social experience的运用也体现了作者平时注意积累语言素材。,满分赏析 运用了where引导的定语从句修饰地点，使句式避免简单化；places of interest(名胜古迹)也运用得当，考生需注意积累，否则只能生造出中式英语。 运用了There is no doubt that(毫无疑问)这样的万能句型；be badly in need of help(急需帮助)这一短语也给评卷老师眼前一亮。 make a difference(起作用、产生不同)这一短语也是增分点。 本篇句句高级、词词地道，怎能不拿满分？,满分佳作（二） Dear Tom, How is everything going? I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of answering your letter in time. You know, Ive been preparing for the final exams these days. Now, I am writing to tell you my plans for the summer vacation. To start with, doing a part-time job is my dream because not only can I earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my horizons. In addition, it is a fabulous choice to visit some famous scenic spots in order to enjoy some appealing scenery. What is more, I will do some voluntary work to enrich my life. I sincerely apologize again for my mistake. By the way, whats your plan to spend your summer vacation? Yours sincerely, Li Hua,满分赏析 第一句为朋友式的日常问候，符合朋友间书信的特点。 I feel terribly sorry for 用来引出道歉的内容，句型运用得当。 本段用了to start with, in addition, whats more等连接词，使行文连贯；not onlybut also也是必须学会运用的高级句型；broaden my horizons也体现了作者平时勤于积累，能给阅卷老师留下良好的印象。 It is a fabulous choice to(是极佳的选择)一句是难得的高级表达；appealing(吸引人的)一词也体现了语言能力。 最后一段，作者再次用I sincerely apologize again for表达了真诚的道歉；并询问了对方的暑期计划，符合真实交际情境。,【模拟真题1：道歉不能赴约】 作文原题 假设你是李华，前天是你的外国朋友Anne的生日。你本答应要参加她的生日聚会，但你当时正忙着准备期末考试，忘了赴约。请写封信向Anne表达你的歉意，说明原因，并提出补救的方法。,【模仿翻译】,作文翻译 亲爱的Anne， 我十分抱歉我未能参加你前天的生日派对。 你邀请我去生日派对真是太有心了。我理应来与你庆祝这珍贵的时刻。但是期末考试就在眼前，所以我忙于准备考试，以致我忘记了约会。我希望你能理解我的情况并原谅我。有没有可能我和你在考试后进行一次私人的见面？ 我十分遗憾错过了相聚的机会。请再次接受我真诚的道歉。 你真诚的， 李华,Dear Anne, I am indeed very sorry that I didnt attend your birthday party the day before yesterday. It was nice of you to invite me to your birthday party. I should have come and celebrate the precious moment with you. But the final examinations are around the corner, so I was so busy preparing for the exams that I forgot the appointment. I hope you can understand my situation and forgive me. Is it possible for you and me to have a private meeting after the examinations? It is much to my regret that I missed the chance to get together. Once again, please accept my sincere apology. Yours truly, Li Hua,【模拟真题2：道歉不能赴约】 作文原题 假如你是李华，你和你的外籍老师Mrs. Brown约好明天下午要一起讨论你英语学习中遇到的问题，但是你临时有其他的事而不能赴约，请你给Mrs. Brown写一封道歉信。内容包括： 1. 对她表示歉意； 2. 说明原因：你的医生打电话给你，通知你明天下午去医院谈体检结果； 3. 你想与Mrs. Brown另约在本周六。,作文翻译 亲爱的Brown夫人， 我非常遗憾地告诉您明天下午我将无法和您见面讨论我英语学习的问题，因为我要在同一天看医生。 今天早上，我的医生打电话给我，希望和我面对面讨论我前些天进行的健康检查结果。为了我的健康，我必须说我可能会失言了。您可以考虑我的情况并理解我吗？ 我的确希望和您进行讨论，因此如果我们可以在星期六见面，我将无尽感激。我保证会按时到达。 你的， 李华,Dear Mrs. Brown, I am terriblely sorry to tell you that tomorrow afternoon I will be unable to meet you to talk about the problem about my English study because I have to see the doctor on the same day. This morning, my doctor called me, hoping to have a face-to-face talk with me about the result of my health examination on the other day. For my healths sake, I have to say that I may fail to keep to my word. Would you please consider my situation and try to understand? I do hope to have a discussion with you, so I would be very grateful to you if we could meet on Saturday. I promise to be there on time. Yours, Li Hua,【2010山东卷改编：因故不能赴约而道歉】 假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你和在上海上学的英国朋友Tom约好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件： 1. 表示歉意； 2. 解释原因； 3. 另约时间。 Dear Tom, Nice to hear from you. Sincerely yours, Li Hua,【全真考场】,【2010山东卷改编：因故不能赴约而道歉】 Dear Tom, Nice to hear from you. But Im sorry to tell you that I cant make it to Beijing with you next weekend as we planned beforehand. You see, a couple of days ago, my cousin Li Ming, who has been to Australia to further his studies, called and said that he would be coming back next weekend, and I will have to pick him up at the airport. After all, its been more than one year since we saw each other. Im terribly sorry for that. Anyhow, I sincerely hope that we can fix another time for a trip to Beijing, when I will show you around the places of historical interest there. Looking forward to hearing from you. Sincerely yours, Li Hua,【模拟真题：道歉不能参加活动】 假如你是李华，国际学校的教师Paul邀请你星期六参加该校举行的“中国文化日”活动。但你的爷爷突然生病住院，你要和父母一起去医院探视，不得不拒绝他的邀请。请根据下列要点用英语给Paul写一封电子邮件。 要点： 1. 谢绝邀请； 2. 说明理由； 3. 预祝活动成功。 Dear Paul, Yours, Li Hua,【模拟真题：道歉不能参加活动】 Dear Paul, Thank you very much for inviting me to attend the “Chinese Culture Day” to be held at your school this Saturday. I have been looking forward to it. I believe it will give your students more ideas about Chinese culture. However, much to my regret, I shall not be able to make it now. My grandpa suddenly felt ill and is in hospital. I will visit him with my parents on Saturday. Im awfully sorry for the sudden change of plan and feel it a great pity to miss the opportunity to be with your students. I wish the activity to be a great success and hope I will have another chance to join you in the future. Yours, Li Hua,Thank You!,
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