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1112014届高考英语一轮复习全方位配套训练人教版必修一Unit 1 Friendship短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Passage 1There was a time when Zhang Yi and I was good friends,but now we are like stranger.On his first day in our class two years ago,he had no one to talk.I was the first one to say hello to her,so we became friends.Zhang Yi did well in math or he was always ready to helping me with it.One day last month,I told him about that I would be away from school for two days to see a friend.But he told my father about it and that made me angrily.Now,I know I was wrong.I decide to say sorry for him，because I dont want to lose so a good friend.答案：There was a time when Zhang Yi and I waswere good friends,but now we are like strangerstrangers.On his first day in our class two years ago,he had no one to talkwith/to.I was the first one to say hello to herhim,so we became friends.Zhang Yi did well in math orand he was always ready to helpinghelp me with it.One day last month,I told him about that I would be away from school for two days to see a friend.But he told my father about it and that made me angrilyangry.Now,I know I was wrong.I decide to say sorry forto him，because I dont want to lose sosuch a good friend.Passage 2When I was in high school，most of my friend had bicycles.I hoped I could also have it.One day I saw a second-hand bicycle,that was only one hundred yuan.I asked my father the money.But he said he could only give me half of the money.He should find the other half myself.So I went to sell newspapers after the school.My father was pleased if I showed him the money a month after.He gives me the other fifty.You can imagine how much happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle.答案：When I was in high school，most of my friendfriends had bicycles.I hoped I could also have itone.One day I saw a second-hand bicycle，thatwhich was only one hundred yuan.I asked my fatherforthe money.But he said he could only give me half of the money.HeI should find the other half myself.So I went to sell newspapers after the school.My father was pleased ifwhen I showed him the money a month afterlater.He givesgave me the other fifty.You can imagine how much happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle.Passage 3Of all my teachers,Mr.Zhang is the one who impresses me most.Though he is 40,but he looks very younger for his age.Hes one of the most popular teacher in our school.Comparing with other teachers,Mr.Zhang pays more attention to his methods of teaching.He tries many ways of make his classes lively and interesting.In her opinion,we should not only know “what”,but also understood “why”.So,instead of giving us answers immediate,he encourages us think by ourselves first.With his help,weve learned how to analyze and solve problems.What a wonderful world of “why” he leads us to ! He is so an excellent person that we all admire him very much.答案：Of all my teachers,Mr.Zhang is the one who impresses me most.Though he is 40,but he looks very youngeryoung for his age.Hes one of the most popular teacherteachersin our school.ComparingCompared with other teachers,Mr.Zhang pays more attention to his methods ofto teaching.He tries many ways of make his classes lively and interesting.In herhis opinion,we should not only know “what”,but also understood understand “why”.So,instead of giving us answers immediateimmediately,he encourages us to think by ourselves first.With his help,weve learned how to analyze and solve problems.What a wonderful world of “why” he leads us to ! He is sosuch an excellent person that we all admire him very much.Passage 4They are some good things about open education.This way of teaching allows the students to grow natural,and to develop their own interests in many subjects.Open education allow students to be responsible for his own education,as they are responsible for what they do in life.Some students dont do good enough in a traditional classroom.The open classroom must allow them to enjoy learning.Some students will be happy in an open educational school than in traditional classroom.They neednt worry about grades or rules.For students worry about these things a lot of,it is a good idea to be in an open classroom.答案：TheyThere are some good things about open education.This way of teaching allows the students to grow naturalnaturally,and to develop their own interests in many subjects.Open education allowallows students to be responsible for histheir own education,as they are responsible for what they do in life.Some students dont do goodwell enough in a traditional classroom.The open classroom mustmay allow them to enjoy learning.Some students will be happyhappier in an open educational school than ina traditional classroom.They neednt worry about grades or rules.For students who worry(或For students worryworrying) about these things a lot of,it is a good idea to be in an open classroom. 111
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