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佳作赏析 议论文利弊分析类,(2011厦门外国语学校高三月考) 近日，本市的一些公园内纷纷竖起禁止遛狗的标牌。假如你是李华，你就这一现象对公园内游客的看法进行了问卷调查，得出以下结论。请用英语写一篇短文， 介绍你的调查结果， 并说明自己的观点或建议。,上一页,上一页,注意： 1.根据提示的内容适当展开，以使行文连贯；勿逐字翻译。 2词数：120左右。 3开头已写好，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：禁令 ban 和谐 harmony Recently, I have done a survey about whether it is reasonable to forbid walking the dogs in the local parks. _ _ _ _,1话题特点：这篇书面表达属于议论文中的利弊分析类。试题给出了写作框架但并未给出具体的写作细节。根据议论文的特点。考生应该就所给信息中谈到的现象发表自己的观点并阐述理由。 2. 写好此类文章要注意： (1) 利弊分析类议论文的特点。时态较统一，多用现在时；尽可能指明信息来源；常用语气委婉的句子。 (2) 详略得当。本文重点应该写自己的观点以及自己持这一观点的理由。 (3)适当地增加细节以便使文章显得丰满、充实；恰当地使用连词及过渡词，以使行文连贯、流畅，避免出现句子简单堆砌、罗列的现象。,上一页,3. 写作内容： (1)阐述信息中所提到的现象。 (2)不同的人有不同的观点：正反方观点陈述。 (3)就这一现象发表自己的观点：自己是赞成还是反对，原因是什么，并提出建议。 4常用的句式表达： (1)文章的开头： Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over the issue that. It is a new thing that. When asked about., different people will offer different opinions. .is becoming more popular in ., especially among.,上一页,(2)正反方观点陈述： Some people argue that.while others firmly hold that. Some people think that., while others take the view that. There are several reasons for.First，.Second，. (3) 表达个人的观点： 如果现象有利也有弊： In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in .Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive points. 赞成某一观点，可以列出双方的理由，然后表明自己的观点并阐述自己的理由： However，as to me，I agree on the view that.because. 直接表达个人观点： In my opinion，I think. As far as I am concerned I agree to.,(4)总结全文： In a word, we can see clearly that. In conclusion，I think that. To sum up，. Therefore， Moreover，.Lets make our good efforts，and.,Recently, I have done a survey about whether it is reasonable to forbid walking the dogs in the local parks. Some people who are in favour of the ban say that it can help keep the environment clean as well as prevent the children from getting frightened or even bitten. In addition，they regard it as an effective way to prevent people from some diseases spread by pet dogs.However, other tourists hold a different view. They claim that the ban will make the tourists get less fun.Besides, as a result of the ban, not only may those elderly tourists lack company when walking in the park alone, but the harmony between human beings and animals will be affected.,上一页,From my point of view, as long as the pet owners can take good control of their dogs and be aware of their responsibilities at the public places, we should allow walking the dogs in our local parks so as to let more people benefit from the pleasure brought by them.,文章要点齐全，写作层次清晰，紧扣要点框架并适当添加细节，行文连贯，句式多变，能够正确运用各种复合句，对持不同观点者的理由描述得恰当得体，同时表明了自己的看法和原因，并提出了建议。 (1) 短语类：in favour of，regard it as an effective way，hold a different view，as a result of，take good control of,上一页,(2) 句子类： 宾语从句：Some people who are in favour of the ban . 状语从句：as long as the pet owners can take good control of their dogs. 其他句式：help keep the environment clean as well as prevent. not only.but. so as to let more people benefit from the pleasure. (3) 过渡语：in addition，however，besides，from my point of view,习作过关 如今大城市在节假日里不允许燃放炮竹。有些人反对这么做，有些人赞成这么做。请你对此现象写一篇英文短文并发表自己的观点。,上一页,上一页,注意1.适当增加细节说明人们赞成或反对的理由。 2词数：120150。 参考词汇：燃放炮竹set off firecrackers _ _ _ _ _,【参考范文】 Now it is not allowed to set off firecrackers in big cities on festivals.Some people are against it.But I am for the idea. Some people think setting off firecrackers is a traditional way to celebrate important festivals, especially the Spring Festival.It can show peoples happiness，their feelings and the festive mood.And people can enjoy the beautiful scenery of fireworks.,上一页,On the other hand，as we all know，setting off firecrackers may cause a lot of trouble.It may bring big fires and air pollution.And it will do harm to peoples eyes and hearing.If firecrackers are not set off correctly，they can injure or disable people or even cause death.This will bring great sorrow to the family.,From these we can see there are more disadvantages，so I approve of not setting off firecrackers，and we should seek other ways to show our happiness.,同学们,来学校和回家的路上要注意安全,同学们,来学校和回家的路上要注意安全,
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