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写作专题,StepTwo分类突破,谋篇布局,第9讲记叙文,第10讲应用文(1)书信,第11讲应用文(2)建议信,第12讲应用文(3)通知、海报、活动介绍,第13讲提纲类(1)正反观点型,第14讲提纲类(2)利弊对比型,第15讲提纲类(3)解决问题型,第16讲“看图写话”记叙类,第17讲“看图写话”咨询类,第18讲“看图写话”漫画类,第19讲图表类,第9讲记叙文,记叙文是最常见、最基本的写作文体,它以真实的社会生活、自然景物为材料,以记人、叙事、状物、写景为主要内容,以叙述、描写或对话为主要表达方式,通过形象表达思想的一种文体。一、写记叙文必须注意以下几点:1.主题要鲜明。首先要认真审题,对题目所给信息,不论是短文还是表格,不论是文字还是图画,都务必仔细分析、反复推敲,确定选择典型事例、反映主题。,2.内容要完整。一般说来,记叙文包含六大要素:when(时间),where(地点),who(人物),what(事件),why(原因),how(结果)。文章要有始有终,确保内容的完整性。3.情节要合理。按照事情发展的先后顺序,使用恰当的过渡词,使文章连贯、自然、详略得当。4.用词要恰当。描写事件时,切忌词不达意,影响理解。要牢记常用动词词组和经典句型。5.记叙事例中的时态通常是一般过去时。,二、记叙文写作要点1.活动的时间、地点、人物;2.表明事情开端;3.叙述事情的发展/活动内容一;事情进一步发展/活动内容二;事情发展的高潮/活动内容三;4.事情的结束;5.表明个人的看法或感受;6.总结全文,再次抒发自己的感情。,经典语篇,在班级活动中,当你的想法与大多数同学不一致时,你是坚持自己的观点并说服别人,还是尊重大多数同学的意见?请你以“WhenIHaveaDifferentOpinion”为题,用英语写一篇100120个词的短文。要求如下:1.从以上两种做法中选择一种;2.以具体事例阐述你选择的理由。WhenIHaveaDifferentOpinion,(2015浙江),佳作欣赏1,WhenIHaveaDifferentOpinionWemayhavedifferentopinionsinorganizingclassactivities.Wemayhavevariouswaystodealwithsuchasituation.WhenIhaveabetteridea,Iwouldchoosetosticktoit.Bydoingso,Icannotonlysharegoodideaswithothersbutalsolearntoexpressmyselfclearly.Oncewewerediscussingwheretogoforanouting.MostofmyclassmateswantedtogotoaparkwhileIhadanideaofgoingtoanicerplace.Imanagedtopersuademyclassmatesintoacceptingmyidea.Wedidhaveagoodtimethatday.Goodopinionsareworthstickingtobecausetheycanbenefitusall.,WhenIHaveaDifferentOpinionWemayhavedifferentopinionsinorganizingclassactivities.WhenIhaveadifferentopinion,Imaychoosetogiveitupandrespecttheopinionofthemajority.Themainreasonformychoiceisthatbeingbroughtupinacultureemphasizingcollectivism,Itendtosacrificemyowninterestforthegroupbenefit.Oncewewerelefttodecidewhethertohaveapicnicina,佳作欣赏2,parkorgotoamuseum.Iwouldlovetogotoamuseum,butmostofmyclassmateswantedtogoforapicnic.Withouthesitation,Idecidedtofollowthemandwedidhavelotsoffunthatday.Sometimesgivingupalittlecanmeangettingmore.,即时训练,(2013浙江)请以“OneThingImProudof”为题,用英语写一篇100120个词的短文,记述一件你自己认为得意的事情。要求如下:1.记述事情经过;2.简要说明你感到得意的原因或从中得到的启示。注意:文章的标题已给出(不计入总词数)。OneThingImProudof,参考范文,OneThingImProudofLastsummerIspentonemonthinCaliforniaasavisitingstudent.Ihadtostudyataschoolandstayatahostfamily.Thereweresevenpeopleintheirfamily,includingtheparents,foursistersandonelittlebrother.Duringtheonemonthstay,IhadtoadaptmyselftotheirAmericanlifestyleandhelpthemunderstandthebestpartofChineseculture.Withmygreatefforts,theyallbecamemybestfriends,orratherIhadbecomeamemberofthefamily.,Ihaveprovedthatfriendshipcanhelpwhileinadifferentcountry.Inaword,beingabletowintheirfriendshipinaveryshorttimeisthethingthatIamproudofmostinmylife.,返回,第10讲应用文(1)书信,书信写作旨在考查学生在实际生活中应用英语的能力,体现了学习英语的实用性。书信种类很多,它包括笔友信、感谢信、慰问(候)信,祝贺信、鼓励信、介绍信、自荐信、询问信、应聘信、联系信、求职信及其答复信、邀请信及其接受邀请的信、读者请求的解答信及其答复读者的信等。书信格式一般不作考查内容(开头和结尾已给出),重点考查考生的谋篇布局、遣词造句能力。总的说来,写英语书信时有以下几点须注意:,1.信件开头要开门见山、直入主题。常用语句是(1)Imwritingto.;(2)Idliketo.2.信的正文是信函的主体部分。在高考作文中应该按照题目要求把题目的要点表达清楚;使文章逻辑清晰、语言通顺;可以根据需要分为若干个段落;要确保没有遗漏内容要点。3.注意根据收信人的年龄身份不同,信的语气也应不同,对朋友要亲切自然,对领导或长辈要委婉。,高考书信开头语段:(1)Learningthatyouareorganizingthisactivitytosharebooksworldwide,IamwritingtoapplyforitforthesimplereasonthatIlovereadingandIownalargenumberofbooks.(2015重庆)了解到你在组织这个在全世界分享书籍的活动,我正在写信申请参加。理由很简单,我爱读书,而且我有很多书。(2)DearPeter,IdliketoaskyoutowriteanarticleforourschoolsEnglishnewspaper.(2015全国)我想请你为我们学校的英语报写一篇文章。,(3)DearChris,Howisitgoing?IrememberweplannedtovisitYunnaninJuly.Butnow,becausemyleftfootwasinjured,Icannotgowithyouasplanned.(2014北京)一切都好吗?我记得我们原本计划七月去云南。但是因为我的左脚受伤,我不能按计划和你一起去了。,(4)DearAmericanguests,Onbehalfofourschool,Iwouldliketoexpressourwarmwelcometoyou.WeareluckytohaveyouhereinthemiddleofourEnglishWeekactivities.(2014陕西)我代表学校,表达对你们的热烈欢迎。我们很幸运有你们参加我们的英语周活动。,(5)DearChris,ImLiJin,monitorofClassOne,GradeEleven.Imverydelightedtolearnthatyourecomingtoourclasstostudywithusasanexchangestudentnextterm.Welcometoourclass!(2014天津)我是李津,11年级1班的班长,我很高兴得知下学期你要作为一名交换生来我们班和我们一起学习。欢迎来到我们班!,(6)DearMr.Wang,Knowingthatourlibraryisgoingtobuybooks,Idliketogivesomesuggestions.(2014浙江)得知我们图书馆要买书,我想给一些建议。(7)DearTom,Howareyoudoing?IwonderifyoucouldsellsomeChineseknotsforme.(2013新课标全国)你好吗?我想知道你是否能为我卖一些中国结。,(8)DearTom,ImsorryIcouldntreplytoyouremailwhichyousentmeaweekagoimmediately.Iwassooccupiedwithgoingovermylessonsformyfinalexam.NowIamwritingtotellyoumyplansforthecomingsummerholidays.(2013山东)我很抱歉没有立刻回复你上周发来的邮件,那时我正忙着复习功课准备期末考试。现在我写信告诉你我的下一个暑假计划。,(9)DearPeter,Howareyoudoing?ImwritingtotellyouthatmyuncleLiMingisgoingtoyourcityforaconference,andIveaskedhimtobringyoutheChinesepaintingyouveaskedforbefore.(2013新课标全国)你还好吗?我写信想告诉你我叔叔李明要去你住的城市开会,我已经请他捎去你以前曾向我索要的中国画。,经典语篇,(2015陕西)假定你是李华,在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事。请阅读启事,并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应征邮件。VolunteersWantedOurannualEnglishFestival,whichwillbeheldonJune1517,2015,isnowlookingfor20studentvolunteerstoprovideserviceforTalentShow,SpeechContest,andEnglishDebate.Ifyouareinterested,pleasesendanapplicationemailatyourearliestconveniencetoMsChenatchenlaoshi.,写作要点:1.表达写作意图;2.陈述应征目的;3.说明应征条件(性格、能力等)。写作要求:1.邮件词数不少于100;2.开头和结尾部分已写好,不计入总词数;3.可根据情况增加细节,使行文连贯。,DearMsChen,ImLiHua,astudentfromClass2,Grade3.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourstruly,LiHua,佳作欣赏,DearMsChen,ImLiHua,astudentfromClass2,Grade3.Iamwritingtoapplyforthevolunteerpositionstatedinyournotice.Ithinkitsaperfectopportunityformetofurtherdevelopmyabilities.Forthepasttwoyears,IhavebeenanactiveparticipantofournationalannualEnglishfestivalandplayedanimportantroleinit.Asadiligentstudentinmyclass,IhaveagoodknowledgeofEnglishandcanexpressmythoughtsandopinionsclearlyandfluentlywithforeigners.,Inaddition,Iamanoutgoinggirlwhohasrichexperienceinorganizingschoolactivities.Once,Itookpartinanationalhostessspeakingcontestonbehalfofourschoolandwonthefirstplace.IwouldappreciateitifIamofferedwithanopportunitytodisplaymytalent.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourstruly,LiHua,即时训练,(2015北京)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,请给你的美国朋友Jim写一封邮件,告诉他你打算参加龙舟训练营,希望他一起参加。邮件的内容包括:1.介绍训练营的相关内容(例如:时间、地点、参加者等);2.说明你打算参加的原因;3.询问对方的意向。注意:1.词数不少于50;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。,参考词汇:龙舟训练营DragonBoatTrainingCampDearJim,Yours,LiHua,DearJim,Imwritingtotellyoumyexcitingplanforthesummerholiday.IwanttojoinaDragonBoatTrainingCamp.Iwonderifyoudliketogowithme.ThiscampwillopenonJuly20th.ItoffersteenagerslikeyouandmeachancetoenjoysportsandlearnaboutChineseculture.Ifyouareinterestedinit,letmeknowandIllsendyoumoreinformation.Hopetomeetyouatthetrainingcampthissummer.Yours,LiHua,返回,参考范文,第11讲应用文(2)建议信,一、写作要点1.建议信的内容:作者就有关问题进行分析,并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。2.建议信的对象:(1)写给个人,就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点;(2)写给某个组织和机构,就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。注意:建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、理由充足,具有合理性和说服力。语气和用词要恰当,如果收信人是长者,则宜采用严谨、谦虚、正式的语言;如果对方是亲密的朋友,语言就可以亲切自然一些。,二、文章结构1.开门见山,点明写信的目的是提建议。2.讲清楚提建议的理由及应采取的具体措施,层次分明。3.呼应开头,指出所提建议的意义,并发出号召或提出希望,礼貌结束全文。,三、常用句型1.开头(1)Idliketogiveyousomeadviceontheproblemyouarefacedwith.(2)Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning.(3)Itismypleasuretoofferyousomeadviceon.2.正文(1)Mysuggestionsareasfollows.(2)MayIsuggestthatyou.(3)Ireallyhopethat.,(4)Whatabout.?(5)Howabout.?(6)IfIwereyou,Iwould.(7)Itwouldbebetterif.(8)Whenitcomestosuchasituation,Iwouldliketosuggestthatyou.,3.结束语(1)IfyoucouldtakewhatIsuggestseriously,youwould.(2)Ifyoucantakemysuggestionsintoconsideration,.(3)Ihopetheywillbehelpful.(4)Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/ideashelpful/useful.,四、写作模板Dear,Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto,andIwilltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestionshere.Inmyopinion,youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:Firstly,.Secondly,.Whatsmore,.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposalsuseful/helpful.Goodluckwithyour.Yourssincerely,,经典语篇,(2014安徽)为了帮助中学生健康成长,某中学英文报开辟了“HEARTTOHEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie,收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰:近日容易发脾气,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下:1.表示理解并给予安慰;2.提出建议并说明理由。,注意:1.词数120左右;2.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;3.信的开头和结尾已为你拟好,不计入总词数。参考词汇:tempern.脾气,情绪HiWorried,Imsorrytoknowthatyourehavingsuchabadtimeatthemoment.Yours,Jamie,佳作欣赏,HiWorried,Imsorrytoknowthatyourehavingsuchabadtimeatthemoment.Thetruthisthateveryonewillhaveoneofthoseperiodswhenthingsseemtobegoingwrong,soyoudonthavetoworrysomuch.Theimportantthingistolearntocontrolyourtempersothatyoumaynotdoorsayanythingyoullregret.Herearethreeusefultips:,First,talktosomeoneyoutrustabouthowyoufeel.Thisisagoodwayoflettingyourangeroutwithouthurtingothersoryourself.Second,gooutdoorsandplayteamgameswithyourfriendsasphysicalexerciseisaneffectivewaytogetridofanger.Andthird,remainoptimisticaboutyourfuture.Suchapositiveattitudetowardslifecanbehelpfulinliftingyourspirits.Ihopeyoullsoonfeelcalmerandcarryonasnormal.Yours,Jamie,即时训练,假定你是李华,贵校在学生中征集意见,询问学生是否赞成开设iPad课堂(iPadclassrooms)。你支持开设iPad课堂。请给校长写一封建议信,要点如下:1.资源丰富;2.促进交流;3.利于环保;4.其他理由。,注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。DearHeadmaster,WehavebeenaskedaboutouropinionsonopeningiPadclassrooms.Yourssincerely,LiHua,DearHeadmaster,WehavebeenaskedaboutouropinionsonopeningiPadclassrooms.Iaminfavorofthisplanforthefollowingreasons.Tobeginwith,everyonelearnsdifferently.StudentscancustomizetheiriPadwithmaterialsthatfittheirlevelandlearningstyle,andthustailorittodifferentneeds.Moreover,whenconnectedtotheInternet,studentscaninteractwithteachersandclassmatesaboutwhattheylearnmoreconveniently.Forthesakeofenvironmentalprotection,,参考范文,openingiPadclassroomsisagoodwaytosavetreesthatwehavebeencuttingdownforpaper.Mostimportantly,Ibelievestudentswilldeveloptheirinterestsinthesubjectsbyenjoyinganewwayoflearning.IhopeyouwouldtakemyideasintoconsiderationandwelookforwardtoattendinganiPadclass.Yourssincerely,LiHua,返回,第12讲应用文(3)通知、海报、活动介绍,一、写作基本要点1.交代活动的主办单位和时间;2.概括描写活动的内容;3.交代活动的主要目的;4.活动的具体地点、时间及持续时间;5.参加人员的主要任务;6.说明活动的参加条件;,7.交代参加的联系方式;8.发出呼吁,诚邀参加。注意:写作语句注意肯定、否定,祈使句的应用和主动句、被动句结合使用。,二、通知开头语1.口头通知开头语(1)MayIhaveyourattention,please?(2)Attentionplease,everyone.Ihaveanannouncementtomake.(3)Bequite.ThereissomethingimportantIhavetotellyou.(4)Ihavesomething(important)totellyou.(5)Imgladtotellyousomethingimportant.,2.其他常用语句(1)Everyoneshouldbethereontime.(2)Besurenottobelate.(3)Pleasebepresentontime.(4)Everyoneisrequiredtobepresentontime.(5)Besuretoattenditontime.(6)Everybodyisexpectedtoattenditontime.(7)Allteachersandstudentsarerequiredto.(8)Ourschool/TheStudentUnionwill/isgoingtohold.,(9)Alecturewillbegivenat7:00thiseveningin.(10)Pleasetakeyournotebookswithyouandbesureontime.(11)Thosewhoareinterestedinitarewarmlywelcome.,三、高考语段(1)ThiscampwillopenonJuly20th.ItoffersteenagerslikeyouandmeachancetoenjoysportsandlearnaboutChineseculture.(2015北京)该营地将于7月20号开放。它提供给像你我一样的青少年一个享受运动、了解中国文化的机会。(2)Asscheduled,wehaveEnglishTalentShowtoday.ThepurposeofthisprogrammeistodevelopourinterestinEnglishlearningandpracticalabilitiesinlisteningandspeaking.Theprogrammeconsistsofthefollowingactivities:recitation,singing,wordspelling,storytellingandsoon.,TheShowwillbeginattwooclockthisafternoonattheStudentCentre.Dearguests,youarewelcometotakepartinsomeactivities.Ihopewestudentswillbenefitfromyourpresence.(2014陕西)按照日程安排,我们今天有英语才艺表演。这个计划的目的是发展我们对英语学习的兴趣和锻炼实际听说能力。该计划包括以下活动:朗诵、唱歌、单词拼写、讲故事等等。表演将于下午2点开始,地点在学生中心。亲爱的来宾,欢迎你们参加一些活动。我希望你们的光临使我们学生有所收获。,四、写作模板Noticewillorganize.Thisactivityaimsto.Thisactivityisarrangedtoorso.Itisplannedtobeginon.Theteammemberswillbearrangedto.Yourmaintaskisto.Anyonewhoiswelcomewarmly.Thosewhoareinterestedcancontactforfurtherinformation.Lookingforwardtoyouractiveparticipation.,经典语篇,(2014辽宁)假定你是学生会主席李华。学校将举办一次以“校园生活创意无限”(InnovationsonCampus)为主题的创意作品展评活动。请你根据以下图示,以短文形式用英语写一份书面通知。,注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当发挥,以使行文连贯;3.开头及结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。参考词汇:校园campus;创意作品innovation;颁奖prizegivingNoticeAnexcitingevent“InnovationsonCampus”isaroundthecorner.Comeon,everybody!Itsyourshowtime.StudentUnion,佳作欣赏,NoticeAnexcitingevent“InnovationsonCampus”isaroundthecorner.EveryoneofyouisexpectedtobepartoftheeventwhichencouragescreativemindsandgivesfullplaytoyourDIYskills.Notethatyourinnovationsmustbeschoolthings.Alongwithyourwonderfulinnovation,youneedtohandinareport,explaininghowtheideaoccurstoyouandwhatmaterialsyouuse.,AllthecollectionswillbeonshowfromJune16to18inthegym.Lookingforwardtotheprizegivingceremony?Sure!Itllbeheldfrom15:00to17:00onJune18.Sodontmissthechanceofbeingthewinner.Yourcontributionwillcertainlymaketheeventahugesuccess.Foranyquestions,callLiHuaat44876655.Comeon,everybody!Itsyourshowtime.StudentUnion,即时训练,(2013江西)星光中学(XingguangHighSchool)近期举行了一次登山活动。假定你是学校英语报记者,请写一篇短文,报道此次活动。内容包括:1.时间与地点:4月10日,大青山(DaqingMountain);2.活动的过程;3.你对于这次活动的评论。注意:1.词数120左右。2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。,Inordertoencouragethestudentstotakeoutdoorexercise,ourschoolorganizedamountain-climbingonApril10.Hundredsofustookpartinit.Itwasaniceday.At8:00am,wegatheredatthefootofDaqingMountainandsetoutforthetopinhighspirits.Atthewaywewerechatting,singingandlaughing,enjoyingthefreshairandthebeautifulscenery.Whensomefellbehind,otherswouldcomeandofferhelp.About2hourslater,weallreachedthetop.Bathedinsunshine,wejumpedandcheeredwithjoy.,参考范文,Theactivitybenefitedusalot.Notonlydiditgetusclosetonatureandgiveusrelaxationfromheavyschoolwork,italsopromotedthefriendshipamongus.Whatawonderfultime!,返回,第13讲提纲类(1)正反观点型,一、文章结构1.开头:提出问题;2.主体:陈述不同的观点及其理由;3.结尾:说明自己的观点。二、段落框架1.第一段开门见山,提出主题(12句)(1)Wehadaheateddiscussionabout/on.(2)Differentpeopleholddifferentopinions.,(3)Opinionsaredivided.(4)Peoplehavetaken/adopteddifferentattitudestowards.(5)Peoplehavedifferentopinionsonthisproblem.(6)Peopletakedifferentviewsonthisquestion.,2.第二段表达不同观点(1).ofthemholdtheopinionthat.(2).ofthemareinfavoroftheideathat.(3)Peoplewhoarefor/againsttheideathinkthat.(4)Somepeoplebelievethat.Othersarguethat.(5)However,.ofthemholdadifferentview./.ofthemholdtheoppositeopinion.(6)However,eachcoinhastwosides.(7)Differentfromthose.,peoplethink.(8)Ontheotherhand,.peopleobjectthat.,3.第三段说明自己的观点(1)AsfarasIamconcerned.(2)Inmyopinion.(3)Itsmyopinionthat.(4)Inaword,onlythrough.canwehaveabrightfuture.,三、写作模板1.导入主题Thereisawidespreadconcernovertheissuethat(某个主题,需以句子形式呈现).Butitiswellknownthattheopinionsconcerningthishottopicvaryfrompersontoperson.2.正方观点Amajorityofpeopleapproveoftheopinionthat(正方观点).Fromtheirpointofview,therearetwofactorscontributingtothisattitude,whichareasfollows:inthefirstplace,(原因一).Furthermore,(原因二).,3.反方观点Onthecontrary,somepeopledifferintheiropinionsonthismatter.Theyholdtheviewthat(反方观点).Ontheonehand,(原因一).Ontheotherhand,(原因二).4.阐明个人看法AsfarasIamconcerned,Ithinkweshouldtakeimmediatemeasuresto(个人观点).Firstofall,.Inaddition,.Onlyinthiswaycanwe.,经典语篇,假设你是李华,最近你班举行了一次班会,班会的主题是:太空探险的意义。请结合下表内容,用英语给校报写一篇文章,客观地介绍讨论的情况并表达你自己的观点。,注意:1.词数100左右;2.开头已给出,不计入总词数。,OuterSpaceExplorations,YESorNO?Wehadanargumentoverwhetheritwasnecessarytocarryoutouterspaceexplorationsataclassmeetingtheotherday.,佳作欣赏,OuterSpaceExplorations,YESorNO?Wehadanargumentoverwhetheritwasnecessarytocarryoutouterspaceexplorationsataclassmeetingtheotherday.Differentstudentshavedifferentattitudestowardsit.Someofusthinkitimportanttoresearchtheouterspacebecause,firstofall,peoplecangetabetterunderstandingoftheouterspacethroughtheirexploration.Second,newresourcescanbefoundthereforhumanbeing.Third,thisexplorationcanpossiblybringaboutnewlivingspaceforhumanlifeinthenearfuture.,However,othersarestronglyagainstit.Theybelievethatittakessomuchmoneytodothiskindofexploration,whichisnotworththevalue.Besides,itisverydangerousforastronautstodosuchworkintheouterspace.Inmyopinion,peopleshouldbepioneering,andthereforesuchexplorationsintotheouterspaceareworthtryingout.,即时训练,随着互联网的发展和普及,网络购物在中国也变得越来越普遍了,甚至已经成了我们日常生活中的一部分;相信你们身边一定有不少同学已经通过网络进行购物了,比如淘宝网,京东商城等。但是网络购物究竟有何利弊呢?请写一篇短文,谈谈网上购物的好处与坏处。注意:词数100左右。,参考范文,WetalkedabouttheadvantagesanddisadvantagesofInternetshoppingthesedays.SomestudentsthinkitsveryconvenientforustogoshoppingontheInternet.TheshopsontheI,areopenforalmost24hoursadaysowecanbuysomethingwewantatanytimeifwelike.Whatsmore,weneedntwaitinaqueue.However,somestudentsdisagreedwiththem.Wecantseethethingswhileweareshopping,sowearenotsurewhethertheyaregoodornot.Besides,wecantenjoythehappinessofshoppingwithourfriends.,返回,第14讲提纲类(2)利弊对比型,这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状,再对比事物本身的利弊,有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发,最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)。一、文章结构1.说明事物现状;2.事物本身的优缺点(或一方面);3.你对现状(或前景)的看法。,二、写作模板Nowadays,thereisawidespreadconcernover(theissuethat)(讨论议题).Infact,therearebothadvantagesanddisadvantagesin(讨论议题).Generallyspeaking,itiswidelybelievedthatthereareseveralpositiveaspectsasfollows.Firstly,(优点一).Andsecondly,(优点二).Justasapopularsayinggoes,“Everycoinhastwosides”,(讨论议题)isnoexception,andinotherwords,itstillhasnegativeaspects.Tobeginwith,(缺点一).Inaddition,(缺点二).,Tosumup,weshouldtrytobringtheadvantagesof(讨论议题)intofullplay,andreducethedisadvantagestotheminimumatthesametime.Inthatcase,wewilldefinitelymakebetteruseofthe(讨论议题).,经典语篇,面对中学生“出国热”,社会对此有不同的看法。请你以“StudyingAbroad”为题,根据下表所提供的信息,谈谈自己的看法。,注意:1.词数100左右;2.开头已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:媒介,中间人mediator,StudyingAbroadInrecentyears,studyingabroadhasbeenpopular.,佳作欣赏,StudyingAbroadInrecentyears,studyingabroadhasbeenpopular.TensofthousandsofChinesestudentshavegonetoforeigncountriestostudy.Manypeoplearetryingtheirbesttoapplytogoabroad.Therearemanyadvantagesinattendingschoolsabroad.First,studentswhohavestudiedabroadcanactasmediatorsbetweenpeopleofdifferentcultures.Second,wecanlearnmanymoreadvancedknowledgeofscienceandtechnologyfromforeigncountries.Third,wecanlearnmanyforeignlanguagesmorequickly.,However,therearesomedisadvantages.Mostofthestudentsaretooyoungtolivealonewithoutanylivingexperience.Besides,beingfarawayfromtheirhomecountry,theymayfeellonelyandhomesick.Also,ofcourse,thecostsaremuchhighertherethanthatathome.Inspiteofthis,advantagesaremorethandisadvantages.Inmyopinion,itisadvisabletoattendschoolsabroad.,即时训练,近来,越来越多的学生在校外租房而不愿住大寝室。请根据下面提示,一分为二地用英语写一篇短文,说说两者各自的好处与坏处,并表明自己的观点。内容包括:1.学习时间;2.安全;3.自由性;4.与同学交往;5.学习效果。,注意:1.可从其他角度阐述,但两方面的理由都至少要有两条;2.词数100左右。,Nowadays,somestudentswouldnotliketoliveinadorm.Instead,theyrenthousesoutsidetheschool.Thereareadvantagesforboth.Livinginadormcanincreasefriendshipandcooperationbetweenclassmates.Andofcourseitissafer.Adormismorelikeasociety,whichenablesstudentstolearntoadapttoeachother,thuspreparingforthesociallifelater.,参考范文,Asforrentinghousestolivealone,itsbetterforstudyasyoucanfeelfreeinyourownroomwithoutbeinginterruptedbyothers.Asaresult,youcanhavemoretimeanddevoteyourselftostudyingwholeheartedly.Buttheremayappearsomesafetyproblemsasyouliveoutsideoftheschool.Anyhow,asastudent,Ipreferlivinginadorm.,返回,第15讲提纲类(3)解决问题型,一、段落框架第一段:引出现象,并指出这种现象的后果常用句型:(1)Recentlytheriseinproblemof/phenomenonof.hascaused/aroused/capturedpublic/popular/wide/worldwideconcern.(2)Recentlytheissueoftheproblemof/thephenomenonof.hasbeenbroughtintofocus/hasbeenbroughtintopublicattention.,(3)Nowadays,thereisagrowingconcernabouttheproblem/phenomenonthat.(4)Nowadays,anincreasingnumberofpeoplecometorealize/beawareoftheimportanceof.(5)Nowadays,moreandmorepeopleareconcernedabouttheproblemof.,第二段:提出解决的办法常用句型:(1)Weshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestocopewiththesituation.Foronething,(解决方法一).Foranother.(解决方法二).Finally,(解决方法三).(2)Itisessentialthatproperaction/effectivemeasuresshouldbetakentoreversethissituation/stopthetrend.(3)Itishoped/suggestedthatconsiderable/greateffortsshouldbemadeto.(4)Thereisnoeasy/immediatesolution/approachtotheissueof.but.mightbebeneficial/helpful.,第三段:总结这样做的好处常用句型:Onlyinthiswaycanwe.,二、高考语段(1)Suchasituationisofgreatconcern.Inmyopinion,overprotectionandtoomuchcareareextremelybadforchildrensdevelopment.Insteadofdoingeverythingforthem,parentsshouldencouragetheirchildrentoovercomedifficultiesandinspirethemtodevelopbythemselves.Onlyinthiswaycantheygrowuptobeindependentandbecometrulysuccessful.(2013福建)这样的情况很值得关注。在我看来,过度保护和太多照顾对孩子们的发展是极其有害的。父母不应该为他们做一切事情,而是应该鼓励孩子们克服困难,激励他们自我发展。只有这样他们才能独立成长,真正成功。,(2)Butinfact,Ioftendontquitefollowmytimetablebecauseofsomereasons.Forexample,playingfootballandwatchingTVtakeupmuchofmysparetime.SoIthinkweshouldhaveourparentsorsomeoneelsesuperviseuseveryday.(2013四川)但是事实上,我因为一些原因经常不遵照时间表。例如踢足球和看电视占据了我很多业余时间。因此我想我们应该让我们的父母或其他人每天监督我们。,三、写作模板Currently,thereisawidespreadconcernover(theissuethat)(讨论议题).Itisreallyanimportantconcerntoeveryoneofus.Asaresult,wemustsparenoefforttotakesomemeasurestosolvethisproblem.Asweknow,therearemanystepswhichcanbetakentosolvethi
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