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文段表达话题之人物篇,复习话题2,小组讨论，一起审题，确定内容，列出提纲。,Step1,十、文段表达（共15分）根据中文提示内容，写一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的文段。请不要写出真实的校名和姓名。75.亲爱的同学们，初中生活即将结束！在此离别之际，恰逢21世纪英语周刊征稿，请你以“A/AnPersoninMySchoolLife”为题，介绍一位老师或同学，描述一件发生在你们之间的、令你印象深刻的事情并谈谈你的感受。A/An_PersoninMySchoolLife,题目补充完整占1分,简单介绍,叙述事件,作者感受,一般现在时,略,一般过去时,详,一般现在时,提升,题目,点题,点题,扣题,完善提纲，列出每一部分的相关句型和短语，尽量把重点句型应用进来。,Step2,Ihavemetalotofpeopleinmyschoollife.OneofthemismygoodfriendEmma.SheisthebestfriendIvemadeintheclass,whoisalwaysthereformewhenIaminneedofhelp.AHelpfulPersoninMySchoolLife,简单介绍sample1,“Afriendinneedisafriendindeed”.Agoodfriendiswhomakesyouhappywhenyouarecryingandstrongwhenyouaregivingin,andthatisEmmatome.,作者感受sample1,Ivemadelotsoffriendsduringthesethreeyears,butthereisonepersonwhohadgreatinfluenceonme.ShesmybestfriendMary.AnImportantPersoninMySchoolLife,简单介绍sample2,Maryisimportanttomebecausewecannotonlyhavefun,butalsogetthroughdifficultiestogether.Ihopewellbefriendsforever.,作者感受sample2,Myjuniormiddleschoollifewillendsoon,butIllrememberoneofmybestfriends,Lily,forever.Anunforgettablepersoninmyschoollife,简单介绍sample3,作者感受sample3,Illcherishthefriendshipbetweenusforever.Itnotonlymakesmehappyandmoved,butalsomakestwoheartsbecloseratthesametime.Iwillkeepthesweetmemoryallmylife.,Sarahisa15-year-oldgirlwhoplaysanimportantroleinmyschoollife.Aspecialpersoninmyschoollife,简单介绍sample4,Justasanoldsayinggoes,“Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.”Sarahisaspecialpersoninmyschoollife.Thoughitstimetosaygoodbyetoher,Iwontforgetherforever.IvaluethespecialfriendshipsomuchthatIstronglybelievethatourfriendshipwilllasttilltheendofuniverse.,作者感受sample4,Recently,Ifoundmyselfgettingupseteasily.Ioftencomplainedaboutthestressandevencouldntconcentrateonstudies.Emmanoticedmyproblemandspenttwohourswithmeoneday,talkingaboutherownstressandhowshewasdealingwithdifficulties.Fromher,Ilearntthattheonlywaytobeatdifficultiesiskeepingtryinginsteadofcomplaining.AndIfeltmuchmoreconfidenttofightagainstthemtogetherwithEmma.,叙述事件sample1,IrememberedthatonetimeIfailedanexam,andIwassodisappointedthatIevendecidedtogiveupstudying.ButshetoldmethatIwouldstillhaveachancetosucceedifIworkedhard,andshewouldalwaysbewithme.HerwordsencouragedmealotandIwasconfidentagain.,叙述事件sample2,Oneday,IaskedLilytohelpmewithadifficultmathquestion.IwasnotsureifshewouldliketoteachmebecauseitwouldtakeheralotoftimeandforusGrade3students,timeisreallyvaluable.Tomysurprise,shestartedteachingmewithoutthinkingifitwasworthdoingit.Timepassedbyquickly,anhourslippedawaywithoutnoticing.Butshestilltaughtmepatiently.Iwasdeeplymovedandsomethingwarmarosefromthebottomofmyheart.,叙述事件sample3,SarahistheverypersonwhoalwaysgivesmeahandwheneverIneedanyhelp.Once,IdidntdoverywellinmyEnglishtest.Asaresult,Ifeltdisappointedanddidntknowwhattodo.WhenSarahnoticedit,shecametomysideandhelpedmefindoutmyweakpointsandtriedherbesttohelpmesolvemyproblems.Thatday,wedidntgohomeuntil7:00pm.Thankstoherhelp,IvemadegreatprogressinmyEnglishstudy.,叙述事件sample4,列出连接词语和过度句。,Step3,Ihavemetalotofpeopleinmyschoollife.OneofthemismygoodfriendEmma.SheisthebestfriendIvemadeintheclass,whoisalwaysthereformewhenIaminneedofhelp.,过渡句和连词,Justasanoldsayinggoes,“Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.”Sarahisaspecialpersoninmyschoollife.Thoughitstimetosaygoodbyetoher,Iwontforgetherforever.IvaluethespecialfriendshipsomuchthatIstronglybelievethatourfriendshipwilllasttilltheendofuniverse.,过渡句和连词,SarahistheverypersonwhoalwaysgivesmeahandwheneverIneedanyhelp.Once,IdidntdoverywellinmyEnglishtest.Asaresult,Ifeltdisappointedanddidntknowwhattodo.WhenSarahnoticedit,shecametomysideandhelpedmefindoutmyweakpointsandtriedherbesttohelpmesolvemyproblems.Thatday,wedidntgohomeuntil7:00pm.Thankstoherhelp,IvemadegreatprogressinmyEnglishstudy.,过渡句和连词,Oneday,IaskedLilytohelpmewithadifficultmathquestion.IwasnotsureifshewouldliketoteachmebecauseitwouldtakeheralotoftimeandforusGrade3students,timeisreallyvaluable.Tomysurprise,shestartedteachingmewithoutthinkingifitwasworthdoingit.Timepassedbyquickly,anhourslippedawaywithoutnoticing.Butshestilltaughtmepatiently.Iwasdeeplymovedandsomethingwarmarosefromthebottomofmyheart.,过渡句和连词,Dear,期待你的佳作,十、文段表达（共15分）根据中文提示内容，写一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的文段。请不要写出真实的校名和姓名。75.亲爱的同学们，初中生活即将结束！在此离别之际，恰逢21世纪英语周刊征稿，请你以“A/AnPersoninMySchoolLife”为题，介绍一位老师或同学，描述一件发生在你们之间的、令你印象深刻的事情并谈谈你的感受。A/An_PersoninMySchoolLife,题目补充完整占1分,
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