如何提高英语写作技巧.ppt

如何提高英语写作技巧沧源民族中学朱雪华,例题：阅读下文，注意划线部分。指出划线部分属于什么成分、起什么用？,Recentlyourclasshadaheateddiscussionoverwhethermiddleschoolstudentsshouldmakefriendsonline.Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.Somepeoplesayyes.Theythinkthattheinternethelpsmakemorefriends.Andchattingonline,studentscanmorefreelyexpresstheirfeelingsandopinions.Besides，theymayevengethelpwiththeirforeignlanguagestudies.Others,however,thinkstudentsshouldnot.Theysaymakingfriendsonlineisawasteoftime.Andtheyshouldspendtimemoremeaningfullyonstudy.Besides,somestudentsgetcheatedonline.,Itismyopinionthatstudentsshouldplacetheirstudy,healthandsafetybeforeotherthings.Asforfriendship,wecaneasilyfinditinourclassmatesandotherpeoplearoundus.,本篇文章使用了一些高级词汇(指运用恰当的形容词或副词等)如:recently,heated,even等；运用了从句、非谓语动词、连词、介词短语等，使文章内容丰富，语言紧凑却很流畅。,1.我正要出去，天突然下雨了。普通句：Iwasabouttogoout，anditsuddenlystartedtorain.高级句：Iwasabouttogooutwhenitstartedtorain.（whenatthattime）区别在于：,那么为何要运用高级词汇、从句、非谓语动、连词、介词短语并且如何恰当运用呢？看下面的句子，区别在哪呢？,高级句中用了一个固定搭配beabouttodowhen（正准备这时）,2.当我走进教室的时候，听见学生朗读英语。普通句：WhenIenteredtheclassroom，IheardthestudentsreadingEnglish.高级句：Enteringtheclassroom，IheardthestudentsreadingEnglish.区别在于：,（现在分词短语相当于时间状语从句，用一般式）,3.从山上看去，这个村庄样子更加漂亮了。普通句：Whenweseethevillagefromthehill,thevillagelooksmuchmorebeautiful.Whenitisseenfromthehill，thevillagelooksmuchbeautiful.高级句：Seenfromthehill，thevillagelooksmuchmorebeautiful.区别在于：,（过去分词短语相当于时间状语从句）,4.努力工作，你就会成功。普通句：Ifyouworkhard，youwillsucceed.高级句：Workinghard，youwillsucceed.区别在于：,（现在分词短语作条件状语）,5.玛丽亚的妈妈直到上周末才从美国纽约来到北京。普通句：MariasmotherdidntarriveinBeijingfromNewYorkofAmericauntillastweekend.高级句：NotuntillastweekenddidMariasmotherarriveinBeijingfromNewYorkofAmerica.高级句：ItwasnotuntillastweekendthatMariasmotherarrivedinBeijingfromNewYorkofAmerica.区别在于：,（运用了倒装和强调句）,6.只有改变我们的生活方式，我们才能拯救地球。普通句：Wecansavetheearthonlybychangingtheway,welive.高级句:Onlybychangingthewaywelivecanwesavetheearth.高级句：Itisonlybychangingthewaywelivethatwecansavetheearth.区别在于：,（运用了倒装和强调句）,7.天色已晚，你最好不要一人回家。普通句：Asitislate，youdbetternotgohomealone.高级句：Itbeinglate,youdbetternot,gohomealone.区别在于：区别在于：,（独立主格，相当于原因状语从句）,8.如果有同学的帮助，他的英语学习将取得更大进步。普通句：Ifsomestudentshelphim，hewillmakegreaterprogressinhisEnglishstudy.高级句：Somestudentshelpinghim，hewillmakegreaterprogressinhisEnglishstudy.区别在于：区别在于：,（独立主格，相当于条件状语从句）,9.生产纸很重要；环境保护也很重要。普通句：Paperproductionisimportant.Environmentalprotectionisalsoimportant.高级句：Notonlypaperproduction,butalsoenvironmentalprotectionisimportant.区别在于：区别在于：,（并列连词，连接两个并列主语）,10.正如大家所知，海滩被污染了，生态环境破坏了，游客减少了。普通句：Asweallknow,theseasidehasbeenpollutedandTheecologicalenvironmenthasbeendestroyed.Thenumberofvisitorshasdropped.高级句：Asweallknow,thattheseasidehasbeenpollutedmakestheecologicalenvironmentdestroyed.Asaresult，thenumberofvisitorshasdropped.区别在于：,（因果）（主语从句）,11.没人喜欢当众乞讨。他们除了乞讨别无他法。普通句：Noonelikestobeginpublic.Theyhavenoothermeanstosupportthemselvesotherthanbegging.高级句：Noonelikestobeginpublic.Thatistosay，theyhavenoothertosupportthemselvesotherthanbegging.区别在于：,（变换说法Thatistosay“也就是说”之意）,除此之外，还要学会运用一些其它高级词汇词如：Onthewhole总的来说，Ingeneral一般来说，Inshort总之，fortunately幸运的是,however,whatsmore,besides等.,由于英语句子结构和汉语不一样，并且英语句子里可以用很多的被动语态，所以我们在写英语句子时，应该先把你要写的内容，即把你的汉语句子按照英语句子的结构重新排列。例如：,1.不再允许建造那些严重污染环境的工厂。根据被动语态的用法，此处“建造”的执行者没必要说出来，此句可改为：那些工厂，那些严重污染环境的，不应该被允许建造。2.我们应该有强烈的环境保护意识。根据英语句子顺序，要先说主语（我们），再说主语的动作（应该有），然后是宾语（强烈的意识），最后才是意识的定语（环境保护的）。,目标检测：请同学们试着用刚才的所学翻译下列句子(配餐作业A中可能用得到的句子)1.最近我们班举行了一次班会去讨论全球环境污染问题。2.正如大家所知，环境遭到污染，我们的空气、水、和土壤已经有毒了，天气也很不正常。3.没有人喜欢住在被污染的环境里，也就是说，是我们该采取行动的时候了。4.为了处理这种情形，政府已经采取了一些措施。,5.不再允许建造那些严重污染环境的工厂。6.只有每个人都行动起来来，情况才会变得越来越好。7.然而，要阻止污染还需要花很长时间。8.从现在起，我们应该有强烈的环境保护意识。9.我们的环境在当地环保部门的紧密关注下。,参考答案：,1.Recentlyweheldaclassmeetingtodiscusstheproblemoftheglobalpollution.2.Asweallknow,oursurroundingshavebeenbadlypolluted.Ourair,water,andsoilhavebecomepoisonous.Besides,theweatherisnotquitenormal.,3.Noonelikestoliveinapollutedplace.Thatistosay,itisourtimetotakemeasures.4.Todealwiththesituation,thegovernmenthastakensomemeasures.5.Factoriesthatbadlypollutedtheenvironmentsarenotallowedtobebuilt.（此处运用被动语态，更接近英语表达习惯）,6.Onlyeverybodyhelpscanthingsgetbetterandbetter.7.However,itwillstilltakealongtimetostopthepollution.8.Weshouldhaveastrongsenseofenvironmentalprotectionrightnow.9.Ourenvironmentsareundercloseattentionbythelocaldepartments.,配餐作业A组题：书面表达假如你们班在“爱护环境，拯救地球”的教育活动中，召开了一次主题班会。请你根据以下要点，用英语写一篇短文。1.目前的环境状况：气候异常；空气、水、土壤等污染严重;2.政府采取的措施：限制高污染企业投产；对环境时时检测;3.你认为还有哪些有更有效的措施?注意使用first,second,besides,however等连接词,Onepossibleversion（参考范文）:Recentlyweheldaclassmeetingtodiscusstheproblemoftheglobalpollution.Aswecansee,oursurroundingshavebeenbadlypolluted.Ourair,water,andsoilhavebecomepoisonous.Andtheweatherisnotquitenormal.Itisreallyapitytoseeallthisinoursociety.Todealwiththesituation,thegovernmenthastakensomemeasures.First,thosefactoriesthatbadlypollutedtheenvironmentsarenotallowedtobebuilt.Second,ourenvironmentsareundercloseattentionbythelocaldepartments.Thingsaregettingbetter.However,itwillstilltakealongtimetostopthepollution.Weshouldhaveastrongsenseofenvironmentalprotectionrightnow.,