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,题目要求(2011陕西高考)假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫TigerMom的学生家长博客上，你看到如下内容。请你根据、和，给这位家长回复。Imthemotherofafourteenyearold.Ihavearuleformydaughter:beamongthetop5studentsorgetpunishedinonewayoranother.Shehasbeendoingverywellinschool,butsomefriendsofminekeeptellingmethatIputtoomuchpressureonher.AmIwrong?,博客内容,写作要点,要求,写作要点：1表明自己的看法；2陈述自己的理由(可举例说明)；3提出至少两条建议。,要求：1短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。2短文词数不少于100(不含已写好的部分)。3内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。4书写需清晰、工整。Hi,TigerMom,WhatpuzzlesyouisactuallyapuzzleformanyparentsinChina.Myideais_,技法指导议论文是用来论述某个道理、阐明某种观点的一种文体。它通过摆事实、讲道理、辨是非来表达作者的见解和主张。议论文可分为许多种类，但中学英语书面表达所要求的议论文是一种限定的写作，其论点、论据和论证都比较明确。有的文章提出问题，如：为什么？怎么办？该采取什么措施？考生可以结合问题要求，阐述相关的观点，切忌随意发挥。近几年的高考书面表达中，其主要命题形式是以表格式和提纲式来呈现写作材料的。,基本要求：1文章直接阐述事物的道理，明确表露作者的思想观点。2表达方式以议论为主，辅之以说明、叙述等方式。议论文中的记叙和描写是为论点提供根据的。因此，记叙应该是概括的，描写应该是简要的。3内容重在说理，坚持摆事实、讲道理。,4议论文主要包括三个要素：论点、论据和论证方法。论点是指需要证实的问题；论证是指阐述道理以理服人；论据就是用于论证的具有说服力的事实和证据。论点解决“证明什么”，论据解决“用什么来证明”，论证解决“怎样证明”。5观点正确，论据充分，语言精练，论证合理，有严密的逻辑性。6语言应该简练、准确；尽可能避免使用口语，多用书面语。,第一步构建框架，清晰行文谋篇布局,黄金模板Hi,TigerMom,WhatpuzzlesyouisactuallyapuzzleformanyparentsinChina.Myideaisthat_(表明自己的观点).,Althoughhighgradesareanimportantfactorinevaluatingstudentsandfortheirfutureuniversityadmission,developmentinwisdom,emotion,health,andlifeattitudeshouldneverbeignored.Therearemanyexamplesaroundus._(举例陈述自己的理由).SoIsuggestthat_(提出自己的具体建议).,第二步打造亮句，增色文章1而且，惩罚绝不是帮助他们身心发展的明智选择。Whatsmore,punishmentisntawisechoiceofhelpingthemgrowupmentallyandphysicallyatall.Furthermore,punishmentisbynomeansawisechoicetohelpthemgrowupmentallyandphysically.,2因此，我建议你采取你朋友们的建议。Therefore,Iadviseyoutotakeyourfriendsadvice.SoIsuggestthatyoutakeyourfriendsadvice.,第三步串句成文，保证流畅Hi,TigerMom,WhatpuzzlesyouisactuallyapuzzleformanyparentsinChina.Myideaisthatitisnotquiterightforyoutodoso.,Althoughhighgradesareanimportantfactorinevaluatingstudentsandfortheirfutureuniversityadmission,developmentinwisdom,emotion,health,andlifeattitudeshouldneverbeignored.Therearemanyexamplesaroundus.SomeallAstudentsinschoolhaveturnedoutnottobeassuccessfulinsocietyastheywereexpected.Thereasonisoftenthatthepressurefromtheirparentsallowsthemalmostnotimeforotheractivities.Furthermore,punishmentisbynomeansawisechoicetohelpthemgrowupmentallyandphysically.,，,SoIsuggestthatyoutakeyourfriendsadvice.Moreimportantly,letherlivelikealovelygirl;letherhavemorefriendsandsocialactivities;andlethermakemistakesofherownasweteenagersoftendo.,作为一名中学生，平时你是否愿意和自己的老师交流？你认为良好的师生关系应该是什么样的？如何才能建立这种关系？请写一篇120150词的短文，就这一话题谈谈自己的看法。注意：1可以使用一些具体的事例支持你的论点；2标题自拟。_,参考范文：LoveandConcernMakeanIdealRelationshipStudentsarebecomingunwillingtoconfesstotheirteachersbecausetheyarenotequalinpositionandteacherslaytoomuchemphasisonthestudyofthestudents.ButIamwillingtosharemyinnerthoughtswithmyteachers.Theyshowloveandconcernfortheirstudentsandaregoodlisteners.Ialwaysfinditeasytoseeksupportandadvicefromthem,fromwhichIbenefitandlearnalot.,Inthiscase,anidealrelationshipbetweenteachersandstudentsisveryimportant.Inmyopinion,thisrelationshipshouldbeonefilledwithlove,care,understanding,andrespect,sotheycanexchangeideasfreely.Tobuildarelationshipofthiskind,teachersshouldbecomefriendsofstudentswhilestudentsoughttotrusttheirteachersandgivevoicetotheirfeelingfrankly.Onlybyjointeffortscanweenjoyawarmrelationshipbetweenteachersandstudents.,
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