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高考英语作文常见错误剖析及写作,学生英语作文中10种常见错误剖析,1、汉语式思维Seethefilmwilltookmemuchtime.Hehappenedanaccidentyesterday.,2、谓语缺失Hetoldmethatallmyclassmatessittingintheclassroom.Sheintheclassroomyesterday.,3、Therebe句型出错Therearefivestudentsplaybasketballontheplayground.Therearesomeworkersareworkinginthefield.,(Anaccidenthappenedtohimyesterday.),6、非谓语动词出错Beingseriouslyill,hisclass-matessenthimtohospital.Seeingfromthespace,theearthlookslikeaball.,学生英语作文中10种常见错误剖析,4、谓语动词用法出错Hedressedinanewcoat.Greatchangeshavebeentakenplace.WhenIarrivedHongKong,mymotherwastherewaitingforme.Hedidntnoticetheteachertocomeintotheclassroom.,5、词性混用SheenjoysstudyEnglish.Ifanyoneagainsttheplan,pleaseletmeknow.,学生英语作文中10种常见错误剖析,7、分数与百分数作主语Inourclass,20%sthdentsaregirls,butthreefifthsstudentsareboys.,8、定语从句错误Thetwoboysarereadingaremybrothers.ThebookIboughtitislost.Illneverforgetthedayswhenwespentinthevillagetogether.,9、连词出错Althoughhetried,buthestillcouldntkeepupwiththeothers.Mysuggestioniswetryforasecondtime.,10、形容词、副词混用Thepatientappearednervouslywhenhetalkedtothedoctor.Theartistworkedhardlytofinishhisdrawingsontime.,DearSue,ImLiHua,isoneofyourstudentsinChina.Itsalmostamonthsinceyouleftus.Weallverymissyouandareverygratefulforyoudidforus.Wearebusyasusually.WehadanEnglishspeechcontesttheotherday.Iwonthefirstprize.Thisagainremindsmeofallyourkindhelp.Doyoustillrememberthetreesweplantedthemtogetheronthehillbehindtheschool?Yesterday,wewentthereandwaterthem.Thetreeyouplantedyourselfisgrowinggood,andthewholeclassdecidedtonameitSueWood.WillyoucomebackseeSueWood?Howiseverythingwithyoulately?WehopetoknowmoreaboutyouwithyourAmeicanstudents.Hopetokeepinclosetouch.Allthebest,LiHua,作文修改,实例写作,(2010全国)假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter曾表示希望来中国教书。你校现需招聘外教，请给他写封信，告诉招聘信息。内容主要包括：1教授课程：英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英国等2授课对象：高中生（至少三年英语基础）3工作量：每周12学时，任选三门课担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问（advisor）注意：1词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头语已为你写好，请将完整的回信写出来。DearPeter,IrememberyoutoldmeyouwereinterestedinteachinginChina._Best,Lihua,写作技巧点拨,1、提纲式作文为半开放型写作。,2、要点均为45个（多为4+1个要点），要点提示比较简洁，考生111有发散思维的空间；,3、英语作文多为三段式：1para.Topicsentence(mainidea,writersattitude)2ndpara.Body(differentpoints)3rdpara.Ending(writersownidea),4、尽量避免第一印象词汇出现,5、好的连词与表达法的使用。,提炼文章要点理解每个要点的含义，然后讨论每个要点的正确表达方式。形成文章。,范文,DearPeter,IrememberyoutoldmeyouwereinterestedinteachinginChina.Ourschoolislookingforanative-speakertoteachsomecoursestoseniorhighstudents.Ifyoudliketocome,youcanchoosethreeofthefollowingfourcourses:Speaking,Writing,BritainTodayandAmericaToday,andteach12periodsaweek.ThestudentswhoaregoingtotakethesecourseshaveatleastthreeyearsofEnglishlearningexperiences.Besidesteaching,youwillalsoworkasanadvisorforourstudentsEnglishcluborourschoolsEnglishnewspaper.Pleaseletmeknowifyouareinterestedandifyouhaveanyotherdecisions.Best,Lihua,
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