高考英语一轮复习 短文改错综合训练（3）1

山西广灵县2017高考英语一轮短文改错综合训练（3）【2015陕西】My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, “I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!2015年陕西卷【答案】【解析】 试题分析：文章介绍作者的教练退休了，在退休聚会上作者送给教练自己亲手烘焙的饼干。教练非常高兴。 1【答案】第一段第一句last week前的in去掉【解析】介词误用。以last开头的时间短语前不加介词。第一段第一句：去掉in在last week，next week，this week之前不需要任何介词。句意：我的足球教练上个星期退休了。last week前面不加介词，去掉in。 2【答案】第一段第二句anythingsomething【解析】不定代词误用。“一些事情”，肯定句中用something。第一段第二句：anythingsomething 我想为教练做点什么特别的事情，而不是任何事情。句意：我想在他退休聚会上为他做些特别的事情。肯定句用something。 3【答案】第一段第三句betterbest【解析】最高级误用。the应用在形容词最高级前。第一段第三句：betterbest妈妈做的饼干是世界上最好的。这里用最高级。句意：我妈妈做的是世界上最好的饼干。用最高级，better改成best。 4【答案】第一段第三句decidedecided【解析】时态错误。全文讲述过去的事情，应用一般过去时。第一段第三句：decidedecided 全文是回忆过去的一件事情，用一般过去时态。句意：所以我决定向她求助。这篇文章使用一般过去时，decide改成decided。 5【答案】第一段第四句stepsteps【解析】名词单复数错误。some后加可数名词复数。第一段第四句：stepsteps some basic steps一些基本的步骤。句意：妈妈教我一些基本的烘焙的步骤。step 是可数名词，用复数steps。 6【答案】第一段第六句wellgood【解析】形容词误用。应用形容词作表语，well作形容词表“身体好”。第一段第六句：wellgood be动词后接形容词good, well作形容同时，意为“健康的”。句意：我认为这些饼干很好。做表语用形容词，well改成good。 7【答案】第一段第七句afterwhen/while【解析】连词误用。本处意为“当时候”。第一段第七句：afterwhen/while在打包的时候掉了一些饼干。句意：我唯一的错误是在我将它们打包的时候将它们掉在地上。after改成when/while 8【答案】第二段第八句第一个athe【解析】冠词误用。特指“那次晚会”，应用定冠词the。第二段：第一个athe party是第二次出现，应用定冠词。句意：这里是特指第一段提到的退休聚会。a改为the。 9【答案】第二段第八句get前加to【解析】不定式符号漏用。本处不定式表目的。第二段：just后面加上to 此处为不定式作目的状语。句意：我可能明年要再退休一次，只是想得到更多这样的饼干。用不定式做目的状语。just后加to。 10【答案】第三段第九句enjoyenjoying【解析】非谓语动词错误。根据介词of，应用动名词enjoying，my coach and me是enjoying的逻辑主语。第三段：enjoyenjoying带逻辑主语的动名词短语作介词of的宾语。句意：我最喜欢的照片是我和我的教练在聚会上开心地享受饼干。of后面接动名词，my coach and me是逻辑主语，enjoy改为enjoying。【2016高考训练】短文改错（共10个小题，每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：把缺词处加一个漏符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend, a truck came to a stop besides us. The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella because he found we were wet through. I stood there and couldnt believe in that a complete stranger is so thoughtful. The man insisted, so I grateful accepted the offer, thanked him and watched the truck disappear down the road. This man might need the umbrella himself, and he preferred to give it to everyone else. It was a lesson to us that it was possible give without expect anything in return. 短文改错（每小题1分，共10分）71. friendfriends 72. besides beside 73. a an 74. believe in 里面in 去掉 75. is was 76. grateful gratefully 77. andbut 78. everyone someone 79. give 前加上to 80. expect expecting 【2016高考训练】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假段定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者 (从第 11 处起) 不计分。Have you ever seen blue ice cream topped with black fruits? That sounded foreign and not delicious at all! Thats the power of colorsIt can neither make your dinner more delicious or to spoil the whole tableScientists have found that blue must make people lose appetiteIf you dont want to eat too many at your classmates birthday party，put his cake on a blue plateYoull stop eating soonWhy is it that people dont feel like eat when they see blue? Its all in their mind. People relate the color of food they see the food in their memory. There are almost no blue leafy vegetable and no blue meat, so people get a “foreign” or “strange” feeling about the blue food itselfSo what should go into dishes? You need to think it over after helping your mum with dinner to make a better decision短文改错1. soundedsounds 2. neither-either 3. or后的to删除 4.must-may/might/can/could 5. manymuch 6. hisyour 7.eat-eating 8.the food前添加to/with 9.vegetablevegetables 10.after-before【2016高考训练】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分, 满分10分） 假段定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(), 并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。There is good news for you. Anyone visited Beijing will soon be able to visit the Forbidden City at night. The Palace Museum plans to extend their opening hours to make it more conveniently for tourists. Parts of the museum will stay open until night to allow more people experience Chinas traditional culture before working hours. In addition, visitors will have an access to more area soon after the renovation (修缮) work is completed this year. Near 65% of the Palace Museum will then be open to visitors to mark the 90th anniversary of the museum. The Forbidden City, that was built at the beginning of the Ming Dynasty, had undergone extensive (大量的) renovations over the past 10 years.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）There is good news for you. Anyone visited Beijing will soon be able to visit the visitingForbidden City at night. The Palace Museum plans to extend their opening hours to itsmake it more conveniently for tourists. Parts of the museum will stay open until night convenientto allow more people experience Chinas traditional culture before working hours. In to afteraddition, visitors will have an access to more area soon after the renovation (修缮) work areasis completed this year. Near 65% of the Palace Museum will then be open to visitors Nearly to mark the 90th anniversary of the museum. The Forbidden City, that was built at whichthe beginning of the Ming Dynasty, had undergone extensive (大量的) renovations hasover the past 10 years.【阅读理解】 Peanuts to ThisProudly reading my words, I glanced around the room, only to find my classmates bearing big smiles on their faces and tears in their eyes. Confused, I glanced toward my stonefaced teacher. Having no choice, I slowly raised the report I had slaved over, hoping to hide myself. “What could be causing everyone to act this way？”Quickly, I flashed back to the day Miss Lancelot gave me the task. This was the first real task I received in my new school. It seemed simple: go on the Internet and find information about a man named George Washington. Since my idea of history came from an ancient teacher in my home country, I had never heard of that name before. As I searched the name of this fellow, it became evident that there were two people bearing the same name who looked completely different! One invented hundreds of uses for peanuts, while the other led some sort of army across America. I stared at the screen, wondering which one my teacher meant. I called my grandfather for a golden piece of advice: flip(掷)a coin. Headsthe commander, and tailsthe peanuts guy. Ah! Tails，my report would be about the great man who invented peanut butter, George Washington Carver.Weeks later, standing before this unfriendly mass, I was totally lost. Oh well, I lowered the paper and sat down at my desk, burning to find out what I had done wrong. As a classmate began his report, it all became clear，“My report is on George Washington, the man who started the American Revolution.” The whole world became quiet! How could I know that she meant that George Washington?Obviously, my grade was awful. Heartbroken but fearless, I decided to turn this around. I talked to Miss Lancelot, but she insisted: No redos; no new grade. I felt that the punishment was not justified, and I believed I deserved a second chance. Consequently, I threw myself heartily into my work for the rest of the school year. Ten months later, that chance unfolded as I found myself sitting in the headmasters office with my grandfather, now having an entirely different conversation. I smiled and flashed back to the embarrassing moment at the beginning of the year as the headmaster informed me of my opinion to skip the sixth grade. Justice is sweet!1What did the authors classmates think about his report?AControversial. BRidiculous. CBoring. DPuzzling.2Why was the author confused about the task?AHe was unfamiliar with American history.BHe followed the advice and flipped a coin.CHe forgot his teachers instruction.DHe was new at the school.3The underlined word“burning”in Para. 3 probably means _.Aannoyed Bashamed Cready Deager4In the end, the author turned things around _.Aby redoing his task Bthrough his own effortsCwith the help of his grandfather Dunder the guidance of his headmaster【要点综述】本文讲述了作者作为一个外来移民初入美国学校时，由于对美国历史不了解而闹出的一个笑话，但作者通过努力最后终于提高成绩并实现跳级。1. B推理判断题。根据第一段内容我们知道，由于作者对美国历史的无知，弄混了乔治华盛顿的身份，所以同学们听了作者写的报告忍不住大笑起来。“bearing big smiles on their faces and tears in their eyes.”可知大家觉得这个报告很荒谬。controversial有争议的；ridiculous荒谬的，可笑的；boring无聊的；puzzling迷惑的，不解的。2. A推理判断题。 根据第二段“Since my idea of history came from an ancient teacher in my home country”可知，作者是从别的国家初到美国，所以对美国历史不了解而闹了笑话。3. D词义猜测题。 根据全文叙述可知，作者是通过投掷硬币来决定的答案，因此犯了常识错误。第三段中“I was totally lost.”说明作者不明就里，所以当其他同学读报告时，作者渴望知道为什么。annoyed 烦恼的；ashamed羞愧的；ready准备好的，情愿的；eager渴望的。4. B细节理解题。 根据第四段“Consequently, I threw myself heartily into my work for the rest of the school year.”可知作者是通过throw oneself into(积极从事)而实现转变的。所以选B。文中老师并没有给作者机会重做，所以A错误；从祖父那里得到建议是在选择华盛顿身份时，所以C错误；而校长是在作者成绩提高后才接见的，所以D错误。2016高考训练-阅读理解。阅读下列短文，从每题所给的四个选项（A、B、C、D）中，选出最佳选项。 A widows wish to hear her late husbands voice again has pushed Londons Subway system to restore a 40-year-old recording of the subways famous “ Mind the gap” announcement.The underground, or the tube, first opened in 1863, tracked down the voice recording by Oswald Lawrence after his widow, Margaret McCollum, told them what it meant to her.McCollum, 65, said she used to frequently visit Embankment tube station or plan her journeys around the stop to listen to Lawrences voice, even before his death. She was taken aback in November when she noticed it had been replaced by a different voice.“Lawrence was a drama school graduate when he auditioned (试音) for a tour company. For six years after his death, Id stay on the platformjust sit and listen to it again,” she added.When Margaret approached the tube, she was told it had a new broadcast system and it couldnt use the old recording anymore.Nigel Holness, director of London Underground, said its staff has been so moved by McCollums story that they dug up the recording and gave the widow a copy of the announcement on a CD for her to keep. “Tube staff is also working to restore Lawrences announcement at the station,” he added. “It is celebrating its 150th anniversary this year. The tubes Mind the gap messages, voiced by various actors, have accompanied countless London commuter journeys since the 1960s. Train drivers and staff made the warnings themselves before that.”“Im very pleased that people are interested in Oswalds old recording,” Margaret said. “He was a great London transport user all his life .He would be amused, touched, and delighted to know hes back where he belonged.”1. The best title for the passage is_. A. A Replaced Recording B. Mind the Gap C. A Widows Wish D. The Tubes Struggle2. The underlined phrase “ taken aback” means_. A. disappointed B. annoyed C. excited D. shocked3. What can we infer from the passage?A. The tube always uses recordings to remind passengers.B. Oswalds voice is great comfort to Margaret.C. No recording can be equal to Oswalds voice.D. Oswald was an outstanding actor in London. 参考答案13、CDB