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山东长岛县2017高考英语暑假（一轮）短文改错选练（七）短文改错-议论文2015届河北省邯郸市馆陶县一中高三7月调研考试短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。【参考答案】71.had改为 have 解析：考查动词的时态。句意：许多年轻人都有抽烟的习惯，尽管他们还是中学生。整个文章用一般现在时来叙述客观事实，故用一般现在时。 72. student 改为 students。解析：考查名词的单复数。句意：虽然他们还是中学生，根据they来判断用复数形式。73.do 改为 does 解析：考查动词的时态。Do harm to 对。有害。整篇文章用一般现在时来叙述。 74. realized 后的that去掉 解析：考查宾语从句。句意：越来越多的人意识到这个问题的严重性。Relize后面引导宾语从句由how来引导，故把that去掉。75.boring 改为 bored 解析：考查形容词辨析。Be bored with 厌烦。 76. other 改为 others 解析：考查代词。与上文提到some people 相呼应。77.himself 改为 themselves 解析：考查反身代词。句意：其它人认为抽烟能清醒自己。与others相呼应。 78. causing 改为 caused 解析：考查动词的。句意：事实上，抽烟导致了许多疾病。这是个叙述过去发生的事，故用一般过去时。79. the waste of money 中the 改为 a 解析：考查冠词。A waste of sth浪费某物。 80. danger 改为 dangerous 解析：考查形容词。句意：而且粗心的抽烟的人可能会引发危险的火灾。2012模拟短文改错MToday we went to climb the West HillEarly in morning 1_we started out and arrived an hour lateThen we began 2_to climbThe hill was high and some of us got tired 3_soon, and all of us were very excitedWe cheered 4_happily when we got the topWe had our lunch there 5_and had enjoyed ourselves very muchUnfortunately， 6_when we walked down the hill，We were caught by 7_a rainWe remained calmly，shared umbrellas and 8_raincoats and walked carefullyFinally we both reached 9_the parking lot safelyIn spite of the unexpecting rain 10_and wind，we had a good time【参考答案及解析】1. morning前加the 考查冠词的用法。注意习语in the morning。 2. late改为later 考查副词比较级的用法。此处表示“迟到了一小时”，故用比较级。 3. 正确 经分析本句正确。 4. and改为but 考查句间的逻辑关系。根据文意此处为转折关系。5. got后加to或got改为reached 考查动词的用法。此处the top作宾语，故改为got to 或及物动词reached。6. 去掉had 考查动词时态。根据句中的and可知，前后是并列关系，时态应一致。 7. by改为in 考查介词的用法。解题关键：掌握动词catch的用法，be caught in意为：遭遇。 8. calmly改为calm 考查形容词的用法。此处remain为系动词，其后接形容词。9. both改为all 考查代词的用法。根据文意没有两者的范围。 10. unexpecting改为unexpected考查分词的用法。此处unexpected意为：意料之外的。2012模拟短文改错N Of all my teachers ,Mr. Moore is the one who impress me 1_most. He is 34, so he looks young for his age. And hes one of 2_the most popular teacher in our school. Mr. Moore pays more 3_attention to his way of teaching, comparing with other teachers. 4_He tries different ways to make his classes actively and lively. 5_In his opinion, we should not only know “what”, but understand 6_“why”. So, instead giving us answers immediately, he encourages us 7_to think by myself whenever he puts forward questions. With his help, 8_weve learned from how to settle problems. He leads us to such a 9_wonderful world of “why” as we all admire and respect him. 10_【参考答案及解析】1. impress改为impresses考查主谓一致。此处先行词one前有the，故其后定语从句的谓语动词应和one保持一致，用单数。 2. so改为but考查句间的逻辑关系。根据语境此处应为转折关系。 3. teacher 改为teachers 考查名词的单复数。根据句中的one of 可知，后面的名词应用复数形式。4. comparing改为compared 考查固定短语。和。相比应用compared with/to。 5. actively改为active考查形容词的用法。此处make 后接形容词作宾补。6. 正确 经分析本句正确。7.instead后加of考查固定短语。根据后面的giving可知，其前应用介词of。8. myself改为ourselves考查代词指代一致。根据文意反身代词应和us相一致。故用ourselves。 9. 去掉from考查动词的用法。learn from意为：向。学习，此处不合文意。10. as改为that 考查固定句型。此处考查such。that。句型。短文改错Dear sir,Thank you very much for your letter. I pleased to hear76._about your holiday and the people you meet in Rome. It 77. _sounded great fun and how I wish I could have been with 78. _you. Thank you also for the stamps you sent them to me79._for my collection. Most of them were those what I had 80. _been expecting for long. You said by your letter that81. _you wish to have some photos of me. Sorry to tell you,82. _I have little photos good enough to send to others.83. _Yet I will send you a photo of your family. Please84. _write soon and tell me what you are getting on with85. _your college life.Best wishes. Yours, Jason【参考答案】76.I后加am 77. meet met 78. 79.去掉them 80.whatthat或去掉those81. by in 82.wishwished 83.littlefew 84.yourmy 84.whathow【短文改错】Dear Mr. Brown, I am writing to thank you with your kind help. 1_Before you came to teach us, I had not interest in 2_English. My pronunciation was terribly. I could 3_only speak a few words. But one and a half year later, 4_I now think English fun to learn. I got a lot from your 5_encouraging words. I will always remember what you 6_said, “If you try to, you can be No 1 !”I hope youve 7、_had pleasant journey home and will come to china 8、_again sometimes in the future. I will write again 9_and send you the photos we take together 10_【参考答案】Dear Mr. Brown, I am writing to thank you with your kind help. for Before you came to teach us, I had not interest in noEnglish .My pronunciation was terribly .I could terribleonly speak a few words. But one and a half year later, yearsI now think English fun to learn.I got a lot from your isencouraging words .I will always remember what you rightsaid, “If you try to, you can be No 1 !”I hope youve /tohad pleasant journey home and will come to china aagain sometimes in the future. I will write again sometimeand send you the photos we take together took【2015高考复习】阅读理解 Eight days for just ￥12,000 Departure time：May，October 2012Includes： Return flights from 6 Chinas airports to Naples Return airport to hotel transport Seven nights accommodation at the 3star Hotel Nice Breakfast The service of guides Government taxesJoin us for a wonderful holiday in one of the Europes most wonderful cornersNaples in Italy if you want to have a nice time in a beautiful small quiet place.The ancient Romans called the city “happy land” with attractive coastline，colorful towns，splendid views and the warm Mediterranean Sea.Your best choice for a truly memorable holiday!Choose between the peaceful traditional villages of Sant Agata，setting on a hillside six miles away from Sorrento，or the more lively and wellknown international resort town of Sorrento，with wonderful views over the Bay of Naples.Breathtaking scenery，famous sights and European restaurants everywhere.From the mysterious Isle of Capri to the hunting ruins of Pompeii，and from the unforgettable “Amalfi Drive” to the delightful resorts (度假胜地) of Positano，Sorrento and Ravello，the area is a feast for the eyes！Join us，and you wont be disappointed!Price based on two tourists sharing a double room at the Hotel Nice.A single room，another ￥2,000.A group of ten college students，￥10,000 for each.Like to know more？Telephone Newmarket Air Holidays Ltd.on：0845 226 7788(All calls charge at local rates)【语篇解读】优美的海岸，缤纷的城镇，绚烂的风景，温暖的海水神奇的意大利之旅将带给你难忘的享受、永恒的记忆。还在犹豫什么呢？赶快报名参加吧！1All the following are included in the price of ￥12,000 EXCEPT_.Atransport between airport and hotel Btelephone calls made by touristsCthe service of guides to tourists Da double room for every two tourists解析细节理解题。根据“Includes”中的“Return airport to hotel transport”“The service of guides”和倒数第二段第一句“Price based on two tourists sharing a double room at the Hotel Nice.”可知，A、C、D均包括在内，但不包括游客打电话的费用，故选B。答案B2If you dont like sharing a room with others，you have to pay_.A￥12,000 B￥10,000C￥2,000 D￥14,000 解析推理判断题。根据倒数第二段中的“A single room，another ￥2,000.”可知住单间需要另外支付2 000元，由此可推断游客需要在原来的价格上再多付2 000元，即14 000元。答案D 3If you like to visit historical sites，which of the following is your best choice?AAmalfi.BSant Agata.CPompeii.DSorrento.解析推理判断题。根据倒数第三段第二句中的“the hunting ruins of Pompeii”可推知意大利古城庞贝是狩猎遗址，由此可推断它是历史名胜。答案C4Who is the advertisement intended for?APotential tourists.BCollege students.CGovernment officers. D Old people解析推理判断题。结合文章中提到的费用、出发日期、服务项目、景点介绍以及联系方式等可推测本文的宣传对象是潜在的游客。答案A【2015高考复习】阅读理解Parents are creating an “I want it now” generation by indulging childrens every demand at Christmas，say experts.Youngsters are becoming increasingly selfish，claim the education analysts.Consumersavvy children are forcing their families into racking up huge debts and risk becoming spoilt and dissatisfied in the future.Behavioural consultant Chris Calland said，“Parents are desperate to make Christmas into a magical fairy tale for their kids.Theres nothing wrong with that as such.The problem arises when it means always giving into all our childrens demandseven if they are beyond our price range or not ageappropriate.”Ms Calland，who runs “Santa Says No” style sessions with colleague Nicky Hutchinson，added，“Many of us go into so much debt providing the gifts our children want that we spend the rest of the year paying off the bills.Yet so often the parcels weve carefully wrapped，once opened，are just pushed away because the very thing our little boy or girl was once so desperate for，they have now lost interest in.” Ms Calland and Ms Hutchinson have drawn up a list of guidelines to help parents manage their offsprings Christmas lists this year.They say that adults can actually improve their relationships with their children by resisting “pester (纠缠) power”Ms Calland said，“All too often we say yes because we want an easier life when the fact is that were only building up problems for the future.We are helping create a generation of youngsters who are blind to the needs of others and the necessity of hard work.” “Children learn fastif we sometimes change our mind，they quickly realise it might be worth lying on the floor and screaming for it.Make sure you and your partner are working together on this.Be consistent.And try not to get caught up in competition with other families or friends.”【语篇解读】本文是时文阅读。由于父母对孩子圣诞节的要求无限制地满足，产生了“I want it now”一代。5What is the main problem with the “I want it now” generation?AThey are quite selfcentered.BThey like to live in fairy tales.CThey waste a lot of money on gifts. DThey cant keep their interest in gifts.解析细节理解题。从第一段最后一句中的“Youngsters are becoming increasingly selfish”以及倒数第二段中的“a generation of youngsters who are blind to the needs of others”可知“ I want it now”一代很自私、以自我为中心。答案A6What is probably the aim of “Santa Says No” style sessions?ATo advise on how to wrap gifts properly.BTo keep childrens interest in the gifts.CTo tell parents how to say no to childrens demands.DTo advise parents on what gifts to buy for children.解析推理判断题。根据第四、五段内容可知，“Santa Says No” style sessions的目的是教父母如何对孩子的无限制的要求说不。答案C 7According to the passage，we can infer that Ms Calland intends to_.Aanalyze childrens behaviorBgive advice to parentsCintroduce a new generation Dgive her support to parents解析推理判断题。综合分析Mr Calland的话可知，Ms Calland在本文中为父母提出了不要满足孩子的一切要求的建议。答案B8Ms Calland would agree that parents should_.Abuy nothing for children at ChristmasBchoose gifts carefully for childrenClet children choose their own giftsDavoid competing with others 解析细节理解题。从最后一段最后一句“And try not to get caught up in competition with other families or friends”可知答案为D。答案D
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