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课时15 书面表达（三）-道歉信 .短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()画掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。What does the Internet bring us？There is no doubt that the Internet changed our life since it came into use. People can surf the Internet for any information they need in a short time without consume large amounts of time in the library. Besides， it is convenient to communicating with others via the Internet.However， the Internet also has some disadvantage. For one thing， there is much information that are not good for children and teenagers. For another， many students spend too much time play games online， that not only influences their studies but also harms their health.In my view， we should make a proper use of the Internet. It is of great important for us to separate good plants and wild weeds.答案：What does the Internet bring us?There is no doubt that the Internet changed our life since it came into use. People can surf the Internet for any information they need in a short time without large amounts of time in the library. Besides, it is convenient to with others via the Internet.However, the Internet also has some . For one thing, there is much information that not good for children and teenagers. For another, many students spend too much time games online, not only influences their studies but also harms their health.In my view, we should make proper use of the Internet. It is of great for us to separate good plants wild weeds.书面表达假如你是李华，你看到“International Friendship Club”所做的广告后加入了该俱乐部，但他们并没履行相关承诺。请用英语写信给主办方，要求解释以下承诺：1.退还交友需要的照片；2.两周内提供六个不同国家的笔友信息；3.活动不收取任何费用。注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear Sir/Madam，I am writing to complain about the service I have received from your International Friendship Club.Yours faithfully，Li Hua参考范文Dear Sir/Madam，I am writing to complain about the service I have received from your International Friendship Club.I joined your club a month ago， and you have not offered me the things you promised in your advertisement. You said that you would return photographs immediately， but I am still waiting for them after one month. In addition， you said that you would send me the details of penfriends in 6 different countries within 2 weeks. Now four weeks have passed and I have only received 2 names and letters. Finally， to make matters worse， you said this was a free service to students， but I received a bill of 20 last week， which I do not think I should pay.I am very disappointed with your service and would like you to explain the problems immediately.Looking forward to hearing from you.Yours_faithfully，Li_Hua阶段回顾(规范练十一十五)单词积累1.interactive adj.互动的2.accommodation n. 住宿3.certificate n.& v. 证书；发证书4.choke v. 哽咽5.enterprise n. 企业6.partially adv. 部分地7.leisurely adj.& adv. 从容的(地)8.cherish v. 珍惜9.efficient adj. 有效率的10.sympathetic adj. 有同情心的11.ritual adj. 礼节性的 n.典礼12.establish v. 建立13.release v.& n. 发布；发行14.restrain v. 抑制；约束15.stylish adj. 时髦的；流行的16.stretch v.& n. 伸展17.destruction n. 破坏18.generously adv. 慷慨地19.existence n. 存在20.complain v. 抱怨短语整理1.leave out 遗漏；省略2.in charge of 掌管3.account for 占；说明(原因、理由等)4.go through 经历5.well off 小康生活6.make sense 有意义7.pull over 停下(车)8.be meant for sb. 命中注定(成为)9.bring out 出版；取出10.make for 朝走去；有利于难句分析1.Were here to provide the support you need every step of the way， from preparing your legal work visa to airport pickup.分析这是一个复合句。to provide为不定式作目的状语；you need为定语从句，修饰support； every step of the way为名词短语作状语；preparing.为动名词短语作宾语。翻译我们为你提供你所需的每一步支持，从准备你的合法工作签证到去机场迎接。2.She glanced at Hannah and， confident the child was fully engaged in the TV， slipped out quickly to use the bathroom.分析本句是复合句。主句中and连接两个并列的谓语glanced和slipped； confident the child was fully engaged in the TV是形容词短语作状语，confident后面跟了一个省略了that的宾语从句；to use the bathroom是目的状语。翻译她瞟了一眼Hannah，相信孩子完全沉迷于电视节目中后就快速地溜出去上厕所了。3.Tourism products with agricultural features will be developed on 10 square kilometers of land in Zhoupu town， Pudong New District， which is next to the Shanghai International Tourism and Resorts Zone.分析句中的which is next to the Shanghai International Tourism and Resorts Zone是非限制性定语从句，修饰先行词10 square kilometers of land。翻译浦东新区周浦镇有10平方千米的土地将被用来开发具有农业特色的旅游产品，它紧挨着上海国际旅游度假区。4.Nutritionists who study what is called “the French paradox”meaning the fact that French people have low obesity rates despite their diet containing lots of “unhealthy” ingredients such as eggs and butterpartially account for this circumstance by the fact that many French people use fresh ingredients.分析本句主句主语是Nutritionists，其谓语是account for，而this circumstance作宾语。who study what is called “the French paradox”是定语从句，修饰Nutritionists，该定语从句中又包含一个what引导的宾语从句；meaning. such as eggs and butter相当于同位语，解释说明“the French paradox”的内容。两个fact之后的从句分别作它们的同位语。翻译研究被称为“法国悖论”即虽然法国人的饮食含有大量不利于健康的鸡蛋、黄油等食材，但法国人的肥胖率却很低营养学家通过许多法国人使用新鲜食材这一事实部分地解释了这种情况。5.Dorris “Dee Dee” Moore， who authorities say befriended him after his lottery win， was found guilty of first degree murder in 2012.分析这是一个复合句。who引导定语从句，authorities say为插入语；guilty为形容词作主语补足语。翻译当局称在他中奖后和他成为朋友的Dorris “Dee Dee” Moore在2012年被判了一级谋杀罪。6.I found the owners had just bought the house themselves and were decorating it， hoping to find the perfect renters.分析本句为复合句。found后接省略了引导词that的宾语从句；hoping.为现在分词短语作状语。翻译我发现房主刚刚买下这栋房子，而且他们正在装修它，希望找到理想的租赁者。7.Moreover， among the kids who did become nearsighted during the study， the degree to which their eyesight worsened was slightly smaller among those who spent more time outdoors.分析本句为主从复合句。句中两个who均引导定语从句，分别修饰the kids和those； to which也引导定语从句，修饰the degree。翻译而且，在研究期间患近视的孩子当中，那些参加户外活动更多一些的孩子的视力的恶化程度略小一些。
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