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专题 51 提纲类书面表达（二）关键词：提纲类,汉语提示,书面表达难度系数：推荐指数：【基础回顾】考点归纳： 提纲作文是高考英语书面表达的热点题型。命题者通常把提纲作文与其他常用文体形式(如书信、报道、通知、日记等)有机结合在一起进行考查，使该类书面表达试题综合性越来越强。基础必读： 高分策略1使用三段式作文法。所谓三段式作文法，就是将一篇书面表达按三段的写作模式布局谋篇，即开头、正文、结尾。三段式写作模式思路清晰，结构分明，是考生提高自己的作文档次的最佳选择。1）第一段开门见山直奔主题，提出要解决的问题或观点，或者交代清时间、地点、人物、干什么。 2）第二段摆出事实或提出论据，或者把事情发展的经过详细写出来。该部分条理要清楚，过渡要自然，也就是评分细则要所要求的，“有效地使用了语句间的连接成份，使全文结构紧凑完全达到预期的写作目的”。 为了迅速把握句与句、段与段的连接方式，很有必要熟记表示以下各种逻辑意义的过渡词语。3）最后一段，得出结论。可以有三种方式：重复中心思想，回到文章开头提出的中心思想或主题上，达到再次肯定和强调的效 果。引用。用格言或名人名言总结全文，既言简意赅。又有较强的说服力。得出结论。文章最后用几句话概括全文内容，并进一步肯定文章的中心思想或作者观点。2.观点式议论文的写作模板 第一段根据提示陈述一下所谈论的话题，第二段分别提出双方的观点，并进行论述（可以采用下列句型：观点陈述1：Some people think that The reason is that.Besides, . (Some are against the view that.)观点陈述2：(However/On the other hand) others have just the opposite opinion. They think thatWhats more,(Some are in favor of the view that.)）；第三段陈述个人的看法（可以采用下列句型：As far as I am concerned, (In my opinion, .; Its my opinion that) For one reason,. For another reason In a word,.）【技能方法】基本解题步骤：审题：观察判断要写文章的类型和特点；抓点：要点就是高考评分的给分点或者扣分点。要求能在提纲的提示下用简单词语写出所表达的内容。这样做可以防止要点遗漏或者过分发挥；定调：即确定体裁与题材，确定格式、人称、时态语态、人称口吻、顺序段落、开头和结尾。然后将要点扩展成句；成文：连句成文。正确使用过渡词，使行文流畅。并注意段与段的衔接；修改：看看是否有要点遗漏，字数是否符合要求，人称、时态、主谓一致等方面的错误，以便及时修改；誊写：修改无误后，认真规范地誊写在规定的地方。【基础达标】 假定你是李华。你的好友李涛说高三学习压力太大，他有点担心自己坚持不住。请你用英语给他写一篇短信，内容包括：1.坚持(perseverance)的重要性；2.举例说明；3.你的想法。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节.，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已为你写好。Dear Li Tao, How are you? Its unnecessary for you to worry about anything. Your ,Li Hua【答案】Dear Li Tao, How are you? Its unnecessary for you to worry about anything. The only thing we can do is to study hard. Perseverance is what it takes to achieve ones success. Without perseverance, one cant realize his dream. Only by sticking to what were seeking and again can we make it at last.There are lots of examples about a persons perseverance bringing about changes in history or new discoveries in cures for some human diseases. Take Tu Youngyou for example . After many years perseverance ,she became the Chinese citizen to win a Nobel Prize in science at the age of 84，which made all Chinese proud. So，never give up easily. Hold on to our dream and well succeed.【亮点说明】本文是一篇英文书信，格式正确，要点齐全，句子衔接紧密，布局合理。Its unnecessary for you to worry about anything.动词不定式做真正主语；The only thing we can do is to study hard.定语从句和动词不定式作表语在句中完美结合；Only by sticking to what were seeking and again can we make it at last.部分倒装的运用堪称经典；she became the Chinese citizen to win a Nobel Prize in science at the age of 84，which made all Chinese proud.非限制性定语从句用在句中；Hold on to our dream and well succeed.“祈使句+and/or +表示将来的陈述句”的运用巧妙至极。考点：考查书信式话题作文 【能力提升】 【辽宁省铁岭市协作体2017届高三上学期第二次联考】每年都有许多人外出旅游，一些人的不文明行为引起了社会的广泛关注。某英文报社正在举行以“文明旅游”为主题的讨论。假定你是李华，请你给报社写一封信，呼吁大家做文明游客。要点如下：1.尊重习俗； 2. 不高声喧哗； 3. 其他注意：1.词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾语已为你写好，不计入词总数。Dear Editor,Ive read your discussions on how to behave properly while traveling. _ _ _ Yours truly Li Hua 【答案】Dear Editor,Ive read your discussion on how to behave properly while traveling. Every year, a great many holidaymakers go out for sightseeing and relaxation. While they are enjoying themselves, some of them behave rudely, which causes a big concern. How to be a civilized tourist has become a heated topic.In my opinion, it is necessary to watch our manners. First, we must respect and follow local customs. Besides, wed better not talk loudly in public places to avoid disturbance to others. Also, be aware that queue jumping is unacceptable in many countries. More importantly, if we travel abroad, we should bear in mind that we are representing our country, so we need to be cautious about how we act. Only in this way can we enjoy our trips and have beautiful memories as well. Yours truly Li Hua 【亮点说明】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。状语从句和非限制性定语从句的混合使用:While they are enjoying themselves, some of them behave rudely, which causes a big concern.形式主语it的使用：it is necessary to watch our manners。倒装句的使用：Only in this way can we enjoy our trips and have beautiful memories as well.连接词的使用也是一大亮点：In my opinion, First, Besides, Also, More importantly。【终极闯关】 【湖北省荆门市2017届高三元月调考】今年九月，北大考试研究院院长秦春华发文称，四大名著不适合孩子阅读。可能不少人不太认同他的观点，但只限于私下议论。郑州外国语学校高三学生高泽林却站出来公开叫板秦春华，他认为四大名著孩子可以读，相较于四大名著中的负面内容，现实中的低俗更甚。他的文章条理清晰，有理有据，引来不少网友点赞。高中生挑战北大教授，你真觉得好吗？请以李华的名义给高泽林同学写一封信表达自己的看法。（提示词：四大名著：four great classical novels）要点：1写信目的； 2与他交流你对四大名著的看法； 3希望收到回信。注意：1词数100左右； 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Zelin Gao,I am a high school student of the same age with you. Yours truly,Li Hua 【答案】Dear Zelin Gao,I am a high school student of the same age with you. Recently, your debate about four great classical novels with the professor of Peking University has become a hot topic on the Internet. I am writing to share some ideas with you.In my opinion, four great classical novels are the precious culture treasure of our nation as well as the greatest and most influential works among the literary circle of China. As a result, we can learn the meaning of love, loyalty and wisdom. However, only when we establish the correct sense in these aspects can we resist the wrong social trend in the future. I have learnt a lot from your article and hope to have a further discussion with you about reading and other aspects. looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours truly, Li Hua 【亮点说明】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。倒装句的使用非常漂亮：only when we establish the correct sense in these aspects can we resist the wrong social trend in the future.连接词的使用也是一大亮点：In my opinion，As a result, However。
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