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高考专题复习:写作(六),高考写作之人物介绍,1.性别与婚姻（Sexaswellas;also;选择or;eitheror;orelse;otherwise原因because;owingto;dueto;onaccountof;结果so;therefore;thus;asaresult时间when;soonafter;before;later;first;andthen;next;finally;afterwards.比较onthecountry;ontheotherhand;like转折but;yet;however;although;inspiteof;instead;递进besides;moreover;even;inaddition举例forexample/instance;suchas;thatis;namely;总结afterall;inshort;ingeneral;generallyspeakingAdverbs,Adverbs,Therefore;otherwise;furthermore;Thus;finally;moreover;namely;besides;although;afterwards;however;personally;,Letterwriting,信头,信内地址、姓名,称呼,事由,正文,结束语,签名,附言、附件,（Enc:/Encl:),结束语Closing,亲人、家属：Yourslovingly;Yoursaffectionately朋友、平辈：SincerelyyoursYourssincerely上级、长者：YoursrespectfullyRespectfullyyours单位、部门：YourssincerelyYoursfaithfully,书信正面,发信人姓名发信人地址,收信人性名收信人地址,邮票,信封背面,发信人姓名发信人地址,便条（病/事假条）,June5th,2000DearMr.Zhao,IamsorrythatIamunabletoattendschoolduringthefollowingweekbecauseoftheSportsMeet.Theschoolexpectsmetoplayanimportantpartinit.AndIwillbebacktoclassinaweek.Ihopeyouwillexcusemyabsence.(infact,ItakeaFrenchleave)YoursrespectfullyCharlesEncl:thePETeacherscertificate(证明）,通知、通告（NOTICE/ANNOUNCEMENT,口头通知：LadiesandGentlemen,MayIhaveyouattentionplease?正文书面通知：NOTICEIncelebrationofMayDay,therewillbe-正文SchoolOfficeApril25th,2000,arnoldzzq,Diary日记,WednesdayMay5thCloudyItisnearlyamonthsinceIbegankeepingdiaries.IfinditaverygoodexerciseinEnglishcomposition.IgotbackmyessayonAVisittothePark.ItwasmarkedwithA.Therewereonlythreemistakesinit:oneingrammarandtwoinidiom.ImhappytoseethatIcannowexpressmyselfinEnglishmoreusuallythaneverbefore.,作文的评价,怎样才算是一篇好的书面表达呢？两个关键:1)用词造句：尽可能运用比较熟悉的词组、短语或成语；从句式上，力求变换各种句式。,2)行文连贯，运用恰当的连接词,使文章结构严密具有较强的逻辑性。,Howtojudgethelevelsofthecomposition?,15,评分原则1本题总分为15分，按5个档次给分,2评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。,3词数少于50或多于100的，从总分中减去1分。,4评分时，应注意表达内容、所用词汇和语法结构的表述是否准确、上下文是否连贯及语言表达是否得体。,5单词拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对表述的影响程度予以考虑。,6如书写较差，影响表述，将分数降低一个档次。,16,第五档（1315分）,完全完成了试题所规定的任务。,应用了正确的语法结构和词汇，没有或有12处错误（为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致）如：拼写、标点、大小写等；具备较强的语言能力。,有效使用了词语间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，达到了预期的写作目的。,17,第四档（1012分）完成了试题所规定的任务。应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求，有34处不影响全文意思的错误。应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容结构紧凑，达到了预期的写作目的。,18,第三档（79分）基本完成了试题所规定的任务。应用的语法结构和词汇基本能满足任务的要求，有56处错误，但不影响理解。应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯。整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。,19,第二档（46分）未恰当完成试题所规定的任务。语法结构单调，词汇项目有限，错误较多，影响了对写作内容的理解。较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性，信息未能清楚地传达给读者。,20,第一档（03分）未完成试题所规定的任务有一些和内容要求相关的词汇或短语，通篇语法结构错误所写内容与所要求内容无关或无法辨认空白卷,21,Writeaconcisepassage,usefewwordsexpressclearmeaning,Tomisfouryearsoldandheisenergetic.Onedayabikewasgiventohim.Thebikeisnewanditisalightblueincolor.Tomreceivedthebikeforhisbirthday.Hestruggledtoridehisbike.Hestruggledfortwohours.However,hewasunsuccessfulinridingthebike.,Comparethetwopassages,Four-year-oldTomisenergetic.Oneday,hegotalightbluebikeforhisbirthday.Hestruggledfortwohourstorideit,buthewasunsuccessful.,Tomisfouryearsoldandheisenergetic.Onedayabikewasgiventohim.Thebikeisnewanditisalightblueincolor.Tomreceivedthebikeforhisbirthday.Hestruggledtoridehisbike.Hestruggledfortwohours.However,hewasunsuccessfulinridingthebike.,Outstanding,Concise(best),wordy,better,Improvethewordysentence(I),1.TherearemanyPeoplehuntinganimalsforlivinginthemountain2.AgirllikesChinesefoodbetter.3.Theemployeewithangerquarreledwithhisboss.4.Inthenottoofarfuture,ourdreamswillcometrue.5.Hegaveupschoolonconditionofthereasonthatitwasnecessaryforhimtosupporthisfamily.,(angry),(prefer),(hunters),(near),(because),Summaryone:changephrasesintosinglewords,improvethewordysentence(II),1.Hisfamilyliveinavillagewhichisnearariver2.Thehouse,whichwasnewlybuiltisverylarge.3.PeoplewhoareinterestedinthejobmustsendyourresumetoourcompanybeforeFriday.4.Wewillhavethepartyinthegardenwhichisonthetopofthemainbuilding.5.Whileheiswaitingforthebus,healwaysrecitestexts.,(Thenewly-builthouseisverylarge),(PeopleinterestedinthejobmustsendyourresumetoourcompanybeforeFriday.),(Wewillhavethepartyinthegardenonthetopofthemainbuilding.),(WhilewaitingforthebusorWaitingfor),(Hisfamilyliveinavillagenearariver),Summarytwo:Changeunnecessaryclausesintophrases,improvethewordypart(III),1.AletterwassentbyMrs.Smith.2.Yourluggagewillbecheckedbyacustomofficialandthenapasscardwillbegiventoyou.3.Thegiftsshouldbewrappedupandwrittenafewwordsofbestwishesonbyyou.,(Mrs.Smithsentaletter),(Acustomofficialwillcheckyourluggageandgiveyouapasscard),(Youshouldwrapupthegiftsandwriteafewwordsofbestwishesonthem.),SummaryThree:Changeuselesspassiveintoactive,changephrasesintosinglewordsChangeunnecessaryclausesintophrasesChangeuselesspassiveintoactive,Summaries:,Improvethefollowingsentence(1),1.AlthoughChineseisregularlyusedbystudents,acloseandcompletestudyofthesubjectisseldomtakenbythem.,(AlthoughstudentsregularlyuseChinese,theyseldomtakeacloseandcompletestudyofthesubject.),2.IamfamiliarwiththefarmerswhoareplanningtoattendthemeetingwhichisfixedfornextFriday.,Improvethesentence(2),(IamfamiliarwiththefarmersplanningtoattendthemeetingfixedfornextFriday),3.Thedecisionthatwasreachedbythecommitteewastoputoffthevote.,(Thecommitteereachedthedecisiontoputoffthevote.)(Thecommitteedecidedtoputoffthevote),Improvethesentence(3),Makethepassageshortandclear,WeresogladyouwilljoininourpicnicwhichwillbeheldinthePeoplesPark.Hereishowwecanbefound:Afteryougointothepark,walkontillyouseeariver.Crossitandmakeaturntowardstheright.Thenahillwillbeseenbyyou.Walkaroundtotheothersideofthehill,andalakewillbefoundbyyou.Wewillhaveourpicnicinthesmallwoodwhichisbythelake.Iamsureyouwillhavenotroubleinfindingus.,WeresogladyouwilljoininourpicnicwhichwillbeheldinthePeoplesPark.Hereishowwecanbefound:Afteryougointothepark,walkontillyouseeariver.Crossitandmakeaturntowardstheright,thenahillwillbeseenbyyou.Walkaroundtotheothersideofthehill,andalakewillbefoundbyyou.Wewillhaveourpicnicinthesmallwoodwhichisbythelake.Iamsureyouwillfinduswithoutanydifficulty.,Haveyoufoundit?,Buildupaconcisepassage,Requirements:Writeastoryaboutdog.Usethefirstperson:e.g.myparents,mysister3.Writeconciselyandclearly.4.100wordsorso.,状语,Iusedtohavetoworkevenatweekends,doingendlesshomeworkandattendingclassesaswell.,2.Theyputinaboutthesameamountoftimelisteningtomusicandworkingonthecomputer.,状语,3.However,otherstudentsareagainsttheidea,sayingthattheBeijingZoo,builtin1906,hasahistoryof100years.,4.Chattingonline,studentscanmorefreelyexpresstheirfeelingsandopinions.,状语,5.Pointingtoapolicemannotfaraway,theyoungmanexplained.,6.Howgladweweretoseethecropsandvegetablesgrowingwell!,7.Havingheardthesewords,hisfacewentred.,8.Imverysorrytohavemadesomuchnoise.,状语,9.Whentakingexaminations,theysometimescheatinordertogetbetterresultstopleasetheirparentsandteachers.,主语,Chargingentrancefeeswillnodoubtkeepsomepeopleaway.,2.StudentshadadiscussionaboutwhetheritisnecessarytostartlearningEnglishfromchildhood.,3.ItwillbeveryeasyforthemtomixPinyinandEnglishup.,补语,ThenIsawayellowcardriveupThirdStreetandmakearightturnintoParkRoad.,2.Abotanicalgardenwillbebuiltforustovisitandpracticein.,定语,Oncetherewasafamilylivinginacabinunderahugetree.,2.Therewasanoldmansittingquietlyonabenchnearby.,3.Besidesplentyofexamples,ithasmanynotestellingyoubowtouseaword.,4.Itisabeautifulplaceforpeopletolivein.,1.Remembertowrapitup,signyournameandwriteafewwordsofgoodwishes.,宾语,2.Ourgovernmentisaimingtobuildaharmonioussociety(和谐社会).,表语1.Thepurposesoftheprogramaretoturnourschoolintoabetterplaceforustostudyandlivein.,其它,Mybrotherwasridingwithmesittingontheseatbehind.,2.Chargingentrancefeeswillnodoubtkeepsomepeopleaway.,Homework,以第一人称的口吻写一篇文章，解释你为什么喜欢乘火车，而不愿乘飞机。要点如下：1乘火车价格便宜，飞机票可能是火车票的好倍。2乘火车可以更好地看到外面的景象。3乘火车比乘飞机安全。今年就发生了好几起难。注意：文章须包含所有要点，可适当增减。词数100词左右。文章开头已给出。生词：aircrash空难AsfarasIamconcerned,Ilike_,AsfarasIamconcerned,Iliketravelingbytrainbetterthanbyair.Thethreemainreasonsforthisareasfollows.Tobeginwith,travelingbytraincostsless,solotsofmoneycanbesavedThepriceofaflightticketisoftenmanytimeshigherthanthatofatrainticket.Besides,travelingbytraingivesatraveleracloserlookatthesceneryofland,whichcannotbeseeneasilyfromanairplane.Whatismoreimportantisthattrainsseemtobesaferthanplanes.Severalaircrashestookplacethisyear.Inaword,IprefertrainstoairplanesunlessIhavetogetsomewhereinagreathurry.,
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