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关于地方、景点介绍,荷塘月色.mp3,地理位置：belocatedin，besituatedin，liein/to/ontheeastof,liesonthe(eastern)coastof,liesoff1.HubeiprovinceliesinthemiddleofChina.2.HunanliesonthesouthofHubei.3.Zhongxiangliesabout220kilometers(tothe)northwestofWuhan.4.ShanghailiesontheeasterncoastofChina.5.TaiwanIslandliesofftheeasterncoastofChina.,与接壤,东临,西靠itborderson,itneighborsbelocatedbetweenand1.ItneighborsRussiainthewestandMongoliainthenorth面积：cover/have/withanareaof.,takeup,thearea/sizeofis地理坐标：itiskmfromnorthtosouth,and.kmfromeasttowest,withatotalareaofkm2,Itisabout630kmfromeasttowestand700kmfromnorthtosouth,withatotalareaof253,000km2,全市东西长约630公里，南北长约700公里，土地总面积25.3万平方公里。,历史：have/witha(long)historyof.datebackto,datefrom,havewitnessedtoomuchinhistory1.Althoughasmallcountry,ithasamazinghistoryofover5,000years.2.TheGreatWallofChinadatesbacktomorethan2,500yearsago.,人口：have/withapopulationof.,thepopulationofis,percentofthepopulationareNewZealandhasapopulationofabout3.8millionpeople,ofwhichaboutfourteenpercentareMaoriIrelandhasayoungpopulation,withfortyfourpercentofthetotalpopulationundertheageof25.,环境：withgreenhillsandbeautifulrivers,besurroundedbygreentreesandbeautifulflowers气候：neithertoocoldnortoohot，theclimatevariesfromplacetoplaceTheclimateoftheBritishIslesismildwithalotofrain.ThecoldestmonthisFebruary,whenthetemperaturecanbeaslow/highas,特色：befamous/wellknown/distinguishedfor.,havethedistinctionof,thespecialcharacteroftheplaceis,ishometo名胜景观：aplacewithmanytouristattractions/placesofinterest/scenicspots,have/getagood/fantasticviewof,二、地位和评价1.Youllberewardednotonlyby/withtheviewof,butalsoby2.Youwillneverregretifyoupayavisittoit.3.Itisreallyagreatfeastforyoureyes.4.AtriptoChinawillmakeyouknowmoreaboutitbesides/aswellas/inadditionto/apartfromitscultureandhistory.,Practice,苏州位于上海西面50英里处，人口五百多万，占地8488平方公里。Suzhouislocated/issituated/lies50miles(tothe)westofShanghai,coveringanareaof8488squarekilometers,withapopulationofover5million.,昌邑一中坐落在潍河西岸，全校拥有师生近四千余人，一年四季被绿树红花环绕着，是一个风景如画的地方。LocatedonthebankofWeihe,ChangyiNo.1middleschoolhasapopulationofnearly4,000,includingteachersandstudents.Surroundedbygreentreesandbeautifulflowersalltheyearround,itisreallypicturesque(风景如画的)allthetime.,整体结构分布,Para1总体介绍/位置，面积、人口Para2周边环境，交通状况，历史，名胜古迹，本地特色，风土人情Para3针对描述，结合写作要求进行结尾。语言1涵盖所有的要点2运用灵活的表达方式，长短句结合；运用较多的语法结构和词汇，尽力使用复杂结构或较高级词汇3有效地使用语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑4书写工整，卷面整洁,澳大利亚位于最小的大洲大洋洲，是世界第六大国家。它是一个以干旱气候为主的国家，只有少部分沿海地区有充足的雨量。它由六个州组成，其中墨尔本(Melbourne)、悉尼(Sydney)是最大的两个城市。它以明媚的阳光、数不清的牛羊和奇特的野生动植物而著名，世界各地的游客来到这里体验它独特的美丽。总面积：7,686,850squarekilometers人口：约2,000万注意：要有标题，介绍必须包括所有的内容要点，但不要逐条翻译成英语。_,LocatedinthesmallestcontinentOceania，Australiaisthesixthlargestcountryintheworld。Itcoversatotalareaof7,686,850squarekilometerswithapopulationofabout20million.Itisamainlydrycountrywithonlyafewcoastalareasthathaveadequaterainfall.Itismadeupofsixstates，ofwhichMelbourneandSydneyarethelargestcities.Becauseitisfamousforitsbrightsunshine，countlesssheepandcattleanditsuniquewildlife，touristsfromallovertheworldcometoenjoyitsbeautifulscenery.,佳句赏析,澳大利亚位于最小的大洲大洋洲，是世界第六大国家总面积：7,686,850squarekilometers人口：约2,000万,1、Coveringanareaof7,686,850squarekilometers,Australia,whosepopulationis20million,isthesixthlargestcountryintheworld,situatedonthesmallestcontinent,Oceania.（李翔）,2、Australia,thesixthlargestcountryintheworld,liesonthesmallestcontinent,Oceania.Itcoversanareaof7,686,850squarekilometers,withonlyapopulationof20million.（韩雨璁）,3Coveringanareaof7,686,850squarekilometersmakesitthesixthbiggestcountryintheworld.(彭珊)4Australiacoversanareaof7,686,850squarekilometerswithapopulationof20million,whichmakesitthesixthbiggestcountryintheworld.(王丽娟),3、Australiaistypicalofacountrywithdryclimate,andonlyafewpartswhichareclosetotheoceanhaveadequaterainfalls.（邵敏）,4、Thedryclimatecoversthewholecountryexceptforafewoffshoredistrictswhichhaveabundantrainfalls.（杨昕琰）5、,Rainseldomfallsonthelandexceptforsomeareasalongtheseaside，somostpartsofthecountryareverydryandhotalltheyeararound.（杨扬），,它是一个以干旱气候为主的国家，只有少部分沿海地区有充足的雨量。,Mostpartsofthecountryisdryallovertheyearwithfewplaces(having)abundantrain.(曾诚)Ithassohotanddryaclimatethatonlyinsomepartsalongthecoastisthereenough/adequaterain.(王丽娟)WhatisknowntousallisthatAustraliaisaplacewheretheclimateisdryandonlyaminorityofareasbytheseahaveenoughrain.(夏洁莲),它由六个州组成，其中墨尔本(Melbourne)、悉尼(Sydney)是最大的两个城市,Itconsistsof/ismadeupofsixstates,ofwhichMelbourneandSydneyarethelargest.,它以明媚的阳光、数不清的牛羊和奇特的野生动植物而著名，世界各地的游客来到这里体验它独特的美丽。,6、Therearewarmsunshine,agoodmanycattleandcountlesssheepaswellasspecialwildanimalsandplants,whichhaveappealedtothetouristsallovertheworldtoenjoy/experienceitsuniqueview.（李丝丝）7、ItsuniversallyacknowledgedthatAustraliaisnotonlyfamousforitswarmsunshineandagoodmanycattleandsheep,butalsoishometoarichdiversityoffantasticwildanimalsandplants.（熊曼婷）,8、Thewarmsunshine,countlesscattleandsheepaswellasmanyotherstrangewildanimalsandplantsmakeitoneofthemostfamouscountry,attractingagreatmanypeoplefromallovertheworldtoexperienceitscharmofnature.（孙安安）,9、Whenyoucomethere,youareserved/rewardednotonlywithitslovelysunshinebutalsobythenumeroussheepandcattleaswellasunusualwildanimalsandplants.（洪胜男）,10.Havingsobeautifulscenery,itattractshundredsofthousandsoftouriststhroughouttheworldtocomehere,wheretheycanhaveafeastfortheirmindsaswellastheireyes.（李翔）11.Itisalsosaidtobeoneofthemostsuitableplacetolivein.(崔雅倩)12.Itisafascinatingplacemarkedoutfortourists.(谢千驰),补充语句,Havingbeenseparatedfromothercontinentsformillionsofyears,Australiahasmanyplantsandanimalsthatcantbefoundanywhereelseintheworld.,Howtopolishyourcomposition?,应用定语从句Australiaismadeupofsixstates,ofwhichMelbourneandSydneyarethetwobiggestcities.With结构作定语Itcoversanareaof7,686,850squarekilometers,withonlyapopulationof20million.,分词作状语Situatedonthesmallestcontinent,Oceania,Australiaisthesixlargestcountryintheworld.Havingbeenseparatedfromothercontinentsformillionsofyears,Australiahasmanyplantsandanimalsthatcantbefoundanywhereelseintheworld.,名词性从句WhatisknowntousallisthatAustraliaisaplacewheretheclimateisdryandonlyaminorityofareasbytheseahaveenoughrain,修饰词汇的使用,agoodmany/arichdiversityof/tensofthousandsofunusual/unique/countless/fantastic/specialadequate/abundant,积累与仿写（积累词汇，仿写书中的长句）,butalsoishometoarichdiversityoffantasticwildanimalsandplants.youareserved/rewardednotonlywithitslovelysunshinebutalsobythenumeroussheepandcattleaswellasunusualwildanimalsandplants.（仿选修六第五单元Thelakeofheaven）,Homework,周练十一Themoreyoupractise,thebetteryourwritingwillbe.,Thankyou!Bye-bye,
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