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,Composition,Composition,1.ReadtheTitle(审题）,MySchoolLife,Teachers,Classmates,SchoolActivities,Study,Teachers,kind,Humorous,haveastrongsenseofresponsibility,knowledgeable,help/encouragemetoimprovemystudy,Classmates,friendly,dicussproblemstogether,help/encourage/supporteachother,clever&hardworking,Activities,Library:read,sportsmeetings,ArtFestival,attendtheclub,takepartindifferentcompetitions,Activities,fun&interesting,useful/meaningful:Toimproveourabilities,relaxourselves,enrichourknowledge,help/encourage/supporteachother,developourinterests,2.Structure（结构）,开头中间结尾,MySchoolLife,（怎么样.,（具体.,(情感：期待，热爱，收获,开头,（怎么样.,interesting/enjoyablecolourful&meaningfulbusybutpleasanthavealotoffun.,结尾,MyschoollifeTeachersClassmatesActivities.,(情感：期待，热爱，收获,Ibelieve/lhope+从句.How/What+感叹句,spendonsth/(in)doingsthAlthough尽管sothat如此.以致。inorderto/sothat为了How/What(感叹句）beproudoftake(anactive)partin(积极）参加bekeenon=befondof=beinterested比较级quicker,moreexcitingnotonlybutalsowhen从句,884,中考英语作文评分标准,内容分8分。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚，完整.,语言分8分。学生需用语规范，表达准确，无或少见语法错误，词汇拼写正确，句型使用恰当。首先是字数，少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。其次是语法和拼写错误，每个扣0.5，动词重要大错误扣1-2分，重复错误不计；标点错误每4个扣0.5.,组织结构分4分，也就是我们常说的文采分。根据学生使用复杂句型/单词和谚语/俗语的情况来加分。,1.结构,三段式（开头，中间，结尾）,层次,Study,Classmates,Activities,Teachers,2.Everysentencemakessense.(Topic)每句话都有意义,开头：Schoollifeisbusybutpleasant.busy?Pleasant?WehaveclassesfromMondaytoFriday,SaturdayandSudnayrest.Ourgradehasfiveclassroomsandweareintheforth.Wehaveeightlessonseveryday.Thefirstlessonstartsat7:40andweleaveschoolat4:15.,Icanseemanyflowersandmanybutterfliesflyaroundinthegardens._ofmyschoolalsomakemyschoollife_.Iamkeenonplayingcomputergames,solwearglasses.,2.Everysentencemakessense.(Topic)每句话都有意义,Thebeautifulscenery,muchmoreenjoyable,3.Logical(逻辑性)；承上启下,递进顺序Firstly,.Secondly,.Finally/Lastbutnoleast,.“还有，而且/另外.Besides,Whatsmore,Morever,Furthermore,ontheonehand.ontheotherhand一方面.另一方面.表转折but,however,while/nevertheless(然而),insteadof（而不是）；or(否则）,1.Logical(逻辑性)；承上启下,表并列：notonly.butalso.,aswellas,both.and.,neither.nor.,either.or.,表因果because+从句，becauseofsth=thanksto,since=nowthat既然，由于so+adj.+that.,such+n.+that.,表条件If+从句，unless(除非）表目的(为了)sothat+从句，inordertodosth,1.Logical(逻辑性)；承上启下,表时间when,while,as,not.until,before,after,assoonas(一.就.),表让步（al)though,evenif（即使），eventhough（虽然）结尾:Inbrief/Inaword,简言之/总而言之Tosumup/Toconclude,Inconclusion,3.Logical(逻辑性)；承上启下,studyactivitiesBefore：Wehaveeightlessonsinaday.Itakepartinafootallactivityonceaweek.After:_alotforustolearninschool.Somesubjectsareinterestingforme,whileothersareabit_.However,asstudents,weshouldlearnasmuchknowledgeaspossible_givingupeasily.Asanoldsayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.”_werebusywithstudy,westill_schoolactivities.,boring,insteadof,Although,takeanactivepartin,Theres,1.Logical(逻辑性)；承上启下,studyclassmates(1)_schoolworkisbusyandtiring,lneverfeel_inthecompanyofmyclassmates.(2)Therearealotoflessonsforustolearninschoolandwehaveto_muchtime_study.Butlfeelquite_tobewithmyteachersandclassmates.Theyre_kindandfriendly_they_myschoollifemuch_andhappier.,Although,bored,so,that,make,easier,spend,on,lucky,2.句式变化，和作文内容灵活结合,TeachersBefore:Wehavemanyteachers.Theyareveryfriendlyandkind.After:Myteachersareallverykindandfriendly.Theyteachme_tobeagoodstudentinschool_a_personinsociety.Besides,theyare_knowledgable_theymakemystudylessboring.ourstudyislessboringthankstothem.wecanalwayslearnalotfromthem.,notonly,butalso,responsible,so,that,2.句式变化，和作文内容灵活结合,TeachersTheyteachustheknowledgeandtellushowtoserveintheworld.After:They_teachusknowledge_tellushowtoservetheworld.,notonly,butalso,2.句式变化，和作文内容灵活结合,Study.activities,competitions)Althoughbeinggoodatthemisveryhard.After:Althoughbeinggoodatthemisveryhard,wecan_ourabilitiesby_thedifficulties.Wedareto_becauseweknow:NoPains,nogains!,improve,challenge,overcoming,2.句式变化，和作文内容灵活结合,ClassmatesBefore:Wehavemanyclassmates.Theyaremuchmoreinteresting.lalwaysplaywiththem.After:(1)Myclassmatesaresointerestingthat_(2)Ialwayshaveagoodtimewithmyclassmatesbecausetheyarenotonly_butalsovery_.,lreallyenjoyeveryminute,whenlstudyandplaywiththem.,friendly,encouraging,2.句式变化，和作文内容灵活结合,ClassmatesMyclassmatesareveryhelpfulandkind.After:Thetimelspendwithmyfriendsreallyrelaxesme.Wediscussproblemstogether.Ifsomeoneisintrouble,wewillencourageeachother.Somehowlthinkweremorethanfriends,morelikeafamily.(李芷媛）,2.句式变化，和作文内容灵活结合,lunchManystudentshavedifferentkindsoffoodinthecanteen.Thelunchesarenotonlydelicousbutalsoveryhealthyforus.After:Allthestudentshavelunchinmyschoolanddifferentkindsoffood_everyday.,isprovided,2.句式变化，和作文内容灵活结合,Activities(1)Myhobbyisplayingfootball,solattendafootballclub.(2)Studentsalwaysreadbooksinthelibrarytoenrichourknowledge.(3)Ilearnhowtocooperatewithotherswhenlworkwithmygroupmembers.,3.语法错误,1.Inourschool,teachersarekind,classmatesarefriendly,activitiesareinteresting.独立的句子不能用逗号隔开，用句号或and连接。2.Itakepartinafootballclub.attend3.Whatareinterestingschoolife!Howinterestingschoollifeis!4.AlthoughlspeakEnglishisawful,lllworkmuchharder.lspeakEnglishawfullylmpooratspeakingEnglish,为避免语法错误，写你熟悉的句型结构，词组用法。,
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