大学英语四级测试作文评分标准.ppt

大学英语四级测试作文评分标准,2分：条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5分：基本切题，表达思想不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多的严重语言错误。8分：基本切题，表达思想比较清楚，文章尚连贯，但语言错误较多，其中有少量的严重错误。,大学英语四级测试作文评分标准,11分：切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14分：切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本上无语言错误。字数不够扣分。（各段已给出的主题句均不得计入）段落不够扣分。,评分样卷(1),WomenintheModernWorld,Womenareplayinganincreasinglyimportantpartinsocietytoday.Intoday,manywomenhaveawork.Theyworkedaswellasmenplayinganimportantpartinfactories.Therearemanywomeningoveneralso.Theyleadotherpeoplecomtral,andmakeoutplans.Therearemanywomenscientistalso.Theyeventnewthingstoimproveourlife.,评分样卷(1),Withthechangesintheirsocialrole,womenspositioninthefamilyhasbeenimprovedaswell.Inancient,womenspositioninfamilyispity.Theyhadtolooksaftertheirchildren,dideveryhowhusbandorderedhertodo.Butnowitischanged.Theyareequaltoherhusband.Theyhavetherightofspeakingofidea,discussionthingswithherhusband,dowhatshewantstodo.,评分样卷(1),Inspiteofthesechanges,theliberationofwomanhasnotbeencompletelyrealized.Wealsoshouldrealize,womenslikertyarelimited.Forexample,manyfactorieswantmenbecomeitsworkersbutthechanceofwomenislessthanmen.Everyoneshoulddotheirbesttochangethiscondition.Imsure,theliberationofwomenwouldbeincreased.,5分,基本切题，表达不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多严重错误。,评分样卷（2）,Womenareplayinganincreasingimportantpartinsocietytoday.Moreandmorewomengotoworktoearnmoneyinsteadofkeepingthehouseorlookingafterthechildren.Womenhaveenteredmanyfieldsofsocietyincludingscientificfield.Asweknow,manywomensportsteamshavewontheworldschampionsuchasChineseWomensVolleyballTeam.,评分样卷（2）,Withthechangesintheirsocialrole,womanspositioninthefamilyhasbeenimprovedaswell.Husbandsarenotthemastersofwivesinmanyplaces.Husbandsandwifeareequalnow.Theyjointogethertoovercomedifficultiesandsharehappiness.,评分样卷（2）,Inspiteofthesechanges,theliberationofwomenhasnotbeencompletelyrealized.Alsoinsomeplaces,womenareconsideredbeing“things”belongtomen.Theyhavelittlechancetofindjobs.Theydontgetequalpayforequaljob.Thisisaproblemmustbesolvednotonlybysocietybutalsobywomenthemselves.,11分,切题，思想表达清楚，连贯。有个别句子结构错误及少量其他语言方面的错误,评分样卷（3）,Womenareplayinganincreasinglyimportantpartinsocietytoday.Manywomentodayareplayinganimportantpartatworksthatwasthoughtonlycouldbedonebythemenbefore.Forexample,somewomenarenotsecretaryintheoffice,instead,theybecomemanagerofacompany.,评分样卷（3）,Withthechangesintheirsocialrole,womanspositioninthefamilyhasbeenimprovedaswell.Intheworldtoday,moreandmorewomenhavetheirownjobs.Theygettheirownsalary,andbecomemoreindependentfromtheirhusband.Withtheeconomicsituationimproved,theirfamilypositionisimproving.,评分样卷（3）,Inspiteofthesechanges,theliberationofwomanhasnotbeencompletelyrealized.Manyhusbandsonlywanthiswifetostayathome,anddosomeworksordosomeshopping.Theyonlywanttheirwifetobeahousewife,butnotamanagerofacompany.,8分,基本切题，思想表达尚清楚，基本连贯，有个别严重的语言错误及用词不当，但可以理解。,评分样卷（4）,Womenareplayinganincreasinglyimportantpartinsocietytoday.Inmanycountries,moreandmorewomenareactingasworkers,farmers,scientistsandevenleaders.Wecansaythatalmostalljobswhichmencandoaredoneperfectlybywomen.Womenarenolongerlookeddownuponbysociety.,评分样卷（4）,Withthechangesintheirsocialrole,womenspositioninthefamilyhasbeenimprovedaswell.Husbandandwifearenowequalinthefamily.Theycopewithproblemsofdailylifetogether,andsharehappinesswitheachother.Also,youcanhardlyfindoutthatintodaysfamilies,womenarebeingbusywithdinners,whereasmenarecomfortablysittinginarmchairs,readingnewspapers.,评分样卷（4）,Inspiteofthesechanges,theliberationofwomanhasnotbeencompletelyrealized.Anumberofmenstilljealouslyguardtheirrights,andregardwomenasincapablecreature.Fewwomenareallowedtoattendimportantinternationalmeetingdominatedbymen.Thatsreallytheproblemsweshouldsolveimmediately.,14分,切题，文章通顺，语言规范。句法有一定变化，用词适当。有个别小错，但不影响理解。,检查语法,1.动词时态，语态是否正确2.名词单数、复数、可数、不可数，专有名词大小写3.主谓一致分清主句和从句，使各自的主谓一致4.形容词、副词用法是否正确，比较级与最高级是否得当5.介词、连词搭配是否正确6.其他关联词用法是否正确7.单词拼写8.标点符号,九句话模板,1.引导句（套入标题）,2.主题句,3.展开句（简单描述）,4.主题句（提出论点）,5.6.7.,论据1论据2论据3,8.总结句（概括全文）,9.结束句（重复主题,第一段,第二段,第三段,Classwork,套用九句话模板,StopSmoking,（1）吸烟的问题越来越受到人们的关注（2）吸烟的害处（3）你的想法,Model,(1)Therehasneverbeenanagreementastotheissueofsmoking.(2)Recently,however,moreandmorepeoplebegintopayattentiontothisquestion.(3)Theyhaverealizedthatsmokingdoesgreatharmtohealth.,Model,(4)Theharmofsmokingcanbeseenfromthefollowing.(5)First,itcancausecancer.(6)Second,itpollutestheenvironment.(7)Third,itcausesgreatwasteofmoney.,Model,(8)Inshort,smokingdoesgreatharmtohealth.(9)Effectivemeasuresshouldbetakentostopsmoking.,Model(developedone),(1)Therehasneverbeenanagreementastotheissueofsmoking.(2)Recently,however,moreandmorepeoplebegintopayattentiontothisquestion,andsomeevenwritetothegovernmentcallingforpoliciestostopsmoking.(3)Theyhaverealizedthatsmokingdoesgreatharmtothehealthofsmokersandnonsmokersaswell.,Model(developedone),(4)Theharmofsmokingcanbeseenfromthefollowing.(5)First,itcancausecancer.ArecentsurveybytheWHOshows,ofthediseaseswhichcausedeatheveryyear,nearlyonethirdhastodowithsmoking.(6)Second,itpollutestheenvironment.Cigarettesendsmaydirtyourairandwater.(7)Third,itcausesgreatwasteofmoney.Isitwisetospendnearlythirtyyuaneachdayforsomethingwhichwillkillyoueventually?,Model(developedone),(8)Inshort,smokingdoesgreatharmtohealth.(9)Itishightimethateffectivemeasuresbetakentostopsmoking.,