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专题41 书面表达三一、 黄冈七、书面表达62.同学们，在初中三年的英语学习中，我们从课本中学习了有关 “Family”、 “Be polite to sb.”、“Protecting the environmment”、 “Volunteering”等话题和功能。假定你是李磊，请参考这些话题和功能，依据以下要点提示，写一篇题为 “Im Proud of My Family”的英语短文，向校报投稿，讲述你的家庭故事。要点提示：1、家人相亲相爱，努力学习、工作；2、邻里和睦，礼貌待人；3、爱护环境，从我做起：写作要求l、词数90左有（短文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数）；2、根据要点提示，适当发挥；3、短文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。参考词汇：Work hard; be friendly to each other, get on well with; protect the environment； be volunteersIm Proud of My FamilyMy name is Li Lei.I have a happy family. There are four people in my family: my parents, my sister and I. 【答案】My name is Li Lei. I have a happy family. There are four people in my family: my parents, my sister and I.My family love each other. (My parents love us and we love our parents.) My parents both work hard. My sister and I study hard at school, too.My family are kind and friendly to our neighbors. We are all polite to each other. We get on well with each other.My family try our best to protect the environment in our daily life. My mom and my sister usually bring a bag to go shopping. My father is used to taking the bus to work. I never order takeaway food.My family are glad to be volunteers at any time. My parents often help the children in poor areas. (My sister helps in the school library twice a week.) Sometimes I read newspapers to the old people.What a happy family! Im proud of my family!【解析】这是一篇话题作文，根据材料中的相关信息讲述一下你的家庭故事。所提供的材料中命好了题目：Im Proud of My Family。主要从1、家人相亲相爱，努力学习、工作；2、邻里和睦，礼貌待人；3、爱护环境，从我做起：这三个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。【高分句型一】My family try our best to protect the environment in our daily life. 我的家人尽力保护我们日常生活中的环境。该句话运用了：try ones best to do sth. 尽力做某事。protect the environment：保护环境。【高分句型二】My father is used to taking the bus to work. 我父亲习惯乘公共汽车上班。这句话运用了：be used to doing sth. 习惯于做某事。总之，本文运用了大量的简单句，虽然没有复合句，但是这写简单句把作者的一家人的生活描写的入情入理，就像是发生在我们的眼前一样。二、 黄石66.第二节书面表达假如你是国际学校的学生李华，你的同学Tom写了一封邮件询问你暑假的安排，请给Tom回封邮件，告知你的计划，并邀请他来黄石游玩。内容包括：1、读几本好书；2、参加社会实践活动；3、帮父母做家务；4、和朋友一起锻炼；5、邀请Tom。注意： 1、词数80左右；2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3、文中不能出现与本人相关信息；4、开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。参考词忙：有意义的 meaningful经典文学作品classic literature works社会实践活动social practice activitiesDear Tom，Im very happy to hear from you. _【答案】Dear Tom，Im very happy to hear from you. How are you going these days? Summer vacation is coming soon. Here Id like to share my holiday plan with you. First of all, I am going to read some good books to open up my mind. Whats more, Ill take part in some volunteer activities to raise awareness of serving the society and improve my social communication ability. Of course, exercise is must. I will run, play basketball, ride a bike and so on. Last but not least, I am about to invite you to visit my hometown, Huangshi and I really want to meet you.How about yours? I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】本文属于材料作文，写信告诉汤姆你的暑假计划并邀请汤姆来黄石玩。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如would like to do, share sth with, be going to, open up ones mind, take part in, awareness of serving the society, of course, and so on, be about to do, invite sb to do, look forward to doing以及first of all, whats more和last but not least,增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。三、 随州61.书面表达茶是中国传统饮食文化的组成部分，是生活中不可或缺的饮品。作为中学生，我们应了解茶并传播茶文化。请根据以下要点提示，写一篇英语短文。要点提示：1.历史悠久，约5000年前神农首次发现茶可以饮用；2.种植广泛，安溪和杭州尤以茶闻名：3.喝茶有很多好处：有利健康，醒脑提神等；4.世界各地许多人喜欢喝茶并收集茶具。写作要求：1.文章必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥以使行文连贯；2.词数：80词左右；（文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数）3.文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。China is famous for tea. 【答案】One possible version：China is famous for tea.Chinese tea has a long history.Its said that Shen Nong was the first to discover tea as a drink about 5，000 years ago.Tea is produced in many different areas Anxi and Hangzhou are widely known for their tea.There are lots of advantages of drinking tea.Its good for health.A cup of ca can make you relaxed and fresh.It seems that many people all over the world love drinking tea and collecting tea scts.As middle schol students，we should kmow about tea culture and spread it around the world.【解析】茶是中国传统饮食文化的组成部分，是生活中不可或缺的饮品。作为中学生，我们应了解茶并传播茶文化。请根据以下要点提示，写一篇英语短文。这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第三人称单数，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中正确使用比较形式，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。这篇短文是一篇优秀的作文，文中用到了一些好的句型：There are lots of advantages of drinking tea.Its good for health.A cup of ca can make you relaxed and fresh.It seems that many people all over the world love drinking tea and collecting tea scts.这些给文章增色不少。四、 武汉七、书面表达61.学校英语社团正在组织题为“My Family”的征文活动。假如你是李明，请根据以下内容提示用英语完成征文。内容要点如下：1.三口之家，家庭幸福，邻里和睦；2.父母为教师，在校深受欢迎；3.分担家务，周末户外活动；4.相互陪伴，经常交流，良好家规助我成长：5.请补充说明一至两点与家庭相关的情况。注意：1文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；2词数：60 - 80;3内容连贯，不要逐条翻译；4标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇： popular adj.受欢迎的 activity n.活动rule n规矩My FamilyIm Li Ming. 【答案】Im Li Ming. I have a happy family. There are three people in it. They are my father, my mother and me. My parents are teachers, they are popular among students. We get along well with our neighbors. At home, I try my best to do some housework. On weekends, we often go out for outdoor activities. We accompany with each other, communicate with each other. Good family rules help me grow up. I study hard, all the teachers and classmates like me. My home is a warm place.【解析】本文属于材料作文，介绍我的家庭。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如get along well with, try ones best to do, accompany with, communicate with, help sb do以及grow up，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。五、咸宁九、短文写作53.运动塑造健康，团结凝聚力量。5月10 日，学校举办了春季运动会。你和班上的许多同学参加了比赛项目，战绩显著。其他同学观看了比赛，并为选手们加油喝彩。请你根据下面四幅图片的提示，写一篇日记，介绍运动会概况及班上同学参加的情况，并抒发自己的活动感受。写作要求：1文章中勿出现真实的姓名和校名；2文章须包含图片所提供的主要信息，可适当发挥。行文连贯，条理清晰；3词数80100个，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总字数。参考词汇：teamwork Friday, May 11th, 2019 Sunny It was sunny yesterday. Our school held a spring sports meet. _【答案】例文Friday. May 1lth,2019 Sunny It was sunny yesterday. Our school held a spring sports meet. There were 4 events for both boys and girls. They were the long jump, the high jump, the l00-meter race and the 400-meter relay race.Everyone in our class felt very excited because we got a wonderful result. Sixteen of us took part in the activity and we got 4 first prizes, 2 second prizes and 3 third prizes. My classmates Yuan Ying and Fang Dan won the girls long jump and the high jump without difficulty. So did I in the boys100-meter race. In the boys relay race, three boys and I ran very fast, coming out on top. In the meantime, all other classmates watched the matches, took photos and cheered us on. From this sports meet, know that sports can keep us healthy. We should do sports every day.Meanwhile, teamwork plays an important role in the relay race. As the saying goes, one tree cant make a forest. So it made us learn to help each other in our daily life.【解析】这是一篇看图作文，根据图片中的相关内容介绍一下运动会概况及班上同学参加的情况，并抒发自己的活动感受。所提供的卡片中列举了跳远、跳高、400米接力和100米接力。主要从同学们的参加情况和自己的活动感受这个方面去写。时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。注意日记中必须包含图片上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。【高分句型一】Everyone in our class felt very excited because we got a wonderful result. 我们班的每个人都很兴奋，因为我们取得了一个很好的成绩。句子because we got a wonderful result.是由because引导的原因状语从句。【高分句型二】My classmates Yuan Ying and Fang Dan won the girls long jump and the high jump without difficulty. So did I in the boys100-meter race. 我的同学袁颖和方丹轻松地获得了女子跳远和跳高的冠军。我也参加了男子100米赛跑。So did I in the boys100-meter race.是由so引起的倒装句。六、襄阳七、书面表达61.据了解，为了进一步引导中学生积极参加体育锻炼，提高身体素质，襄阳市教育主管部门正在研究制定有关“中考”体育考试的改革方案( the plan)，考虑在原有项目的基础上增加篮球、排球或足球，总分(the score)也由30分增加至50分。作为一名参加过体育“中考”的学生，你对这样的改革持什么样的态度。请根据写作要点提示，用英语写一篇短文表述你的观点。1要点提示：(l)观点明确（要么赞成，要么反对）：(2)理由充分（可针对增加考试的项目和调整的分值，也可只选其一。限三条理由）；(3)给出建议（围绕你的观点提出一条合理化建议）。2注意事项：(l)字数：90词左右： (2)行文应连贯流畅； (3)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。_【答案】In my poinion,I agree with the reform plan of“high school entrance examination”physical education examination.It is reported that most young people are getting unhealthy.Without regular exercise, students are getting weaker and weaker.If the total score of high school entrance examination sports is increased,Both teachers and students will undoubtedly attach great importance to physical education,and its easy to imagine the phenomenon that PE is always taken away will never be seen.Students will be healthier and more energetic in their study.It is helpful to improve students comprehensive ability and quality.I think every school should make a plan to cultivate students interest in sports so as to improve students physical quality.【解析】这是一篇给材料作文。襄阳市教育主管部门正在研究制定有关“中考”体育考试的改革方案，考虑在原有项目的基础上增加篮球、排球或足球，总分(the score)也由30分增加至50分。作为一名参加过体育“中考”的学生，你对这样的改革持什么样的态度。要求根据写作要点提示，用英语写一篇短文表述自己的观点。文章时态主要用一般现在时，人称主要用第一、第三人称。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。七、宜昌61.书面表达：假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Mike得知你们开展了“做生态小公民，建设美丽家乡”的活动，他来信表示很感兴趣并想了解具体细节，请给Mike写一封回信向他描述你（们）曾经做过的一件事或参与的一次活动。要求：(1) 内容应包括活动或事件的时间、地点、过程和你的感受：(2) 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名：词数80100。开头和结尾己给出，不计入总词数。Dear Milk,Im glad to hear that you are interessted in our environment protection activities. To be an ecological eitizen(生态公民)，we did a good job. Last Now the environment around us becomes better and better. Welcome to my hometown one day.YoursLiHua【答案】Dear Mike, Im glad to hear that you are interested in our environment protection activities. To be an ecological citizen, we did a good iob. Last Sunday,I went to our community with my friends to give the people there a speech. It was about how to protect our environment. After the speech, they knew they should take a bus or ride a bike instead of driving to cut down air pollution. To cut down waste pollution, they should take bags to go shopping. And they alsoknew to put litter in different bins. Finally, we called them up/called on them to make a difference to our environment together. We were tired but happy that day.Now the environment around us becomes better and better. Welcome to my hometown one day.Yours, Li Hua【解析】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be glad to do，be interested in，ecological citizen，give a speech，how to do，take a bus，ride a bike，instead of，cut down，go shopping，call them up，make a difference，become better and better等。而Im glad to hear that you are interested in our environment protection activities./ After the speech, they knew they should take a bus or ride a bike instead of driving to cut down air pollution.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。八、鄂州VII . 书面表达58.现在越来越多的学生使用“作业帮”这个APP 来搜查他们不会做的题目。对此，不同的人有不同的看法。请根据以下文字的提示，并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。优点1.及时帮助学生解决在学习中遇到的困难；2.在家就能学习，简单，方便；3.可以选择自己喜欢的老师，学习兴趣更浓。缺点1.有的学生假装学习，事实上在玩游戏；2.有的学生不想独立思考，直接照抄答案，他们根本不关心自己的学习，只是虚度光阴。你的建议联系实际，给出自己合理的建议。要求：1. 80100 词。（开头的首句已给出，不计算在词数内）2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其他相关信息，否则，不予评分。参考词汇：convenient 方便的，便利的 pretend to do 假装做 think independently 独立思考Today, more and more students are using the App zuoyebang. However, different people have different ideas about it. Some people think_【答案】Today, more and more students are using the APP zuoyebang. Different people have different ideas about it. Some people think its useful. The APP zuoyebang can help students to solve difficulties in their studying in time. Its easy and convenient for them.They can study at home. They can choose their own teachers they like, and they will be more interested in studying. However, others dont think so. They think some students just pretend to study, in fact they play games. They dont want to think independently, but only copy the answers. They dont care about their studying at all. Its a waste of time. I think its good for students who are hard-working. They can study better. But for students who dont want to study, its very bad.【解析】这篇作文要求我们对介绍不同人对“作业帮”这个应用软件的看法，并联系实际，发表自己的观点。题目中利用表格的形式，列出了写作的主要内容，审题可知，短文应包括以下几个部分：作业帮的优点、缺点以及个人观点。可以分为三段分别进行叙述，各自的理由在表格中都已呈现，学生们需要用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来。最后一部分内容则需要学生们联系自己的实际生活，发挥想象力，自己来补充适当的内容。文章应以一般现在时、第三人称和第一人称为主来叙述。写作时应注意：首先要将题目中要求的所有内容都包括在作文中，不能遗漏要点。可以根据表达需要适当发挥，使文章内容更加充实、完整，但需要注意合理性，要紧贴题目要求和文章主旨。其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能逐词翻译表格内容，写汉语式的英语。应从句子的整体结构出发，以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复合结构的使用，提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使行文连贯、自然。这是一篇优秀是作文，短文作者根据题目要求，把人们对“作业帮”这个应用软件的不同看法进行了介绍，并在最后发表了自己的观点。短文有以下几个特点：首先文章内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点。各部分内容之间层次清晰，叙述有条理，三段式的作文，一目了然，每一段的主题也很明确。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，语言得体。句子结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。除简单句结构外，短文里还使用了and连接的并列句、宾语从句、状语从句、定语从句等复合句，以及动词不定式、动名词等非谓语动词结构。短文中较好的句型有The APP zuoyebang can help students to solve difficulties in their studying in time.、They can choose their own teachers they like, and they will be more interested in studying.、They think some students just pretend to study, in fact they play games.、I think its good for students who are hard-working等等。九、荆门第三节 书面表达57.为弘扬中华传统文化，你校举办了一次“戏曲进校园”展演活动。假定你是李华，请你将活动的相关情况写信告知你的英国笔友John。要点：1. 时间：5月16日下午2:30; 2. 地点：学校操场;3. 内容：校长在开幕式上致辞；戏曲知识竞赛；师生戏曲表演等；4. 感受：对传统文化有了进一步的了解要求：1. 文中不得出现真实的人名或地名；2. 语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范；3. 要点齐全，内容可适当发挥；4. 词数：80100 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。参考词汇：戏曲 opera (n.) 开幕式 opening ceremony ( n.) 表演 performance ( n.)致辞 make a speech Dear John,How is everything going? Im writing to share with you an activity called Opera Entering Campus in our school. Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear John，How is everything going? Im writing to share with you an activity called Opera Entering Campus in our school. The activity was held at 2:30 pm on May 16 on the playground. In the beginning, the headmaster made a speech at the opening ceremony, inspiring us students to learn more about Chinese culture. After that, there was an exciting competition about opera knowledge. In the end, we enjoyed wonderful opera performances put on by some teachers and students who are talented in opera. Through this activity, we have a better understanding of opera and get closer to Chinese traditional culture. I hope you can have a chance to come to China and experience Chinese culture on your own.Best wishes!YoursLi Hua【解析】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be hold，on the playground，in the beginning，make a speech，at the opening ceremony，after that，in the end，put on，have a chance等。而we enjoyed wonderful opera performances put on by some teachers and students who are talented in opera./ Through this activity, we have a better understanding of opera and get closer to Chinese traditional culture. /I hope you can have a chance to come to China and experience Chinese culture on your own.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。十、孝感八、书面表达61.随着年龄的增长，你周围的事物也发生了很大变化。请根据以下提示，以“Great changes around me”为题，写一篇短文。写作要点：1. 过去, 道路狭窄(narrow), 房展老旧, 空气河水2.现在。路面洁净、宽阔, 交通便利；高楼林立；蓝天白云, 满城绿树鲜花, 小鸟歌唱；人们3.感受, 写作要求：1.要点齐全, 省略号处须作适当发挥, 但不要逐句翻译；2. 语句连贯, 条理清晰, 详略得当, 书写工整；3文中不得出现任何宾实的信息（地名、校名和人名等）；4.100词左右, 短文的翅目和开头已给出, 不计入总词数。Great Changes around Me In the past few years, great changes have taken place around me._【答案】例文Great Changes around MeIn the past few years, great changes have taken place around me. The roads used to be narrow and crowded. The houses were old and small. The air wasnt fresh enough. Sometimes, there was terrible smell.
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