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专题八 书面表达目录一、山东滨州二、山东青岛三、山东日照四、山东聊城五、山东济宁六、山东泰安七、山东潍坊八、山东东营九、山东菏泽十、山东临沂十一、山东烟台十二、山东威海十三、山东德州十四、山东枣庄一、 山东滨州九、书面表达71.即将毕业，请以“My favorite teacher”为题，写一篇英语短文，短文包括以下内容：1. 老师的外貌、性格、所教科目等；2. 以事例描述喜爱的原因；3. 表达对这位老师的感激和祝福。要求：1. 要点齐全，并适当发挥；2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名与校名；3. 卷面整洁，书写美观，课适当加2-3分；4. 词数：80词左右，开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。My favorite teacherIts time to graduate from junior high school. Id like to write something about my favorite teacher. _【答案】例文My favorite teacherIts time to graduate from junior high school. Id like to write something about my favorite teacher. Of all the teachers, I like my English teacher best. She is a lovely and outgoing girl who loves singing and reading. She is of medium height and has long straight hair. When I was in Grade Seven, I was so shy that I was afraid to take part in the English competition. She encouraged me not to give up any chance to show myself to others. Thanks to her, I changed my attitude and won the first prize.I will never forget the wonderful time we were together. Best wishes to her!【解析】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如graduate from，of all the teachers，of medium height，so that，be afraid to do，take part in，give up，encourage sb. to do，at the weekends，thanks to sb.，the first prize等。而并列结构She is of medium height and has long straight hair./ I changed my attitude and won the first prize.和She is a lovely and outgoing girl who loves singing and reading./ When I was in Grade Seven, I was so shy that I was afraid to take part in the English competition./ I will never forget the wonderful time we were together.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。二、 山东青岛61.人生中有很多第一次：第一次学游泳；第一次跟家人外出旅行；第一次做家务；第一次赢得比赛；第一次。请根据提示，就你的第一次写一篇短文。 内容包括：1. 第一次的整个过程；2. 你的感受。 要求：1. 词数：80 100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；2. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。As we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time 【答案】The first time to learn to swimAs we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time to learn to swim. Last summer vacation, my father took me to the swimming pool in our neighborhood and taught me to swim. It was the first for me to swim. At first, I could not swim at all. My father was very patient. He encouraged me and taught me how to swim. He taught me how to breathe in the water first. Then, He threw me into the deepest part of the swimming pool, I was so frightened that I couldnt move. But I never gave up, I felt safe with my dad around. Three hours later, with the help of my father, I could swim by myself. Although I couldnt swim very well, I was very happy.I will never forget this experience, because I not only learned how to swim, but also learned to be brave!【解析】这是一篇材料作文，根据提示信息，选择给你印象深刻的第一次活动进行描述并谈谈自己的感受。时态主要为一般过去时，人称主要为第一、三人称。写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文。首先开门见山，介绍自己的第一次活动是什么，接下来详细介绍第一次活动的整个过程，最后谈一谈自己的感受。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。注意： 注意紧扣主题，意思连贯，语言通顺，书写规范，避免出现拼写错误；词数在80100。三、 山东日照66.写作假如你是李华，你的外国朋友Jack计划今年暑假来日照旅游度假。请你根据以下提示，给他写一封信。1.介绍日照地理位置、气候环境等；2.向他推荐一至两处景点；3.询问具体计划，以便做好准备。要求：1.根据提示内容，不要逐字翻译；2.文中不能出现真实的人名和校名；3.词数90左右。Dear Jack, Im glad to learn that you are coming to Rizhao for your summer vacation. _ _Yours, Lihua【答案】Dear Jack,Im glad to learn that you are coming to Rizhao for your summer vacation. Sunshine in southeastern Shandong Province, China, its temperature is neither too high nor too low. Rizhao Wulian Mountain Scenic Area is a combination of Wulian Mountain and Jiuxian Mountain. Rizhao Seashore National Forest Park is a rare natural seashore bathing ground in northern China. Do you have any good plans? Give me a call before you come. Ill show you these beautiful sceneries.Yours, Lihua【解析】假如你是李华，你的外国朋友Jack计划今年暑假来日照旅游度假。请你根据以下提示，给他写一封信。本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。四、 山东聊城六、书面表达46.假如你叫陈伟, 2019年6月22日和23日是你中考后的第一个周末, 请你制定一个周末活动计划, 并用英语给你的英国笔友Alan写一封电子邮件, 说明你的活动安排。主要活动内容包括: 1. 6月22日上午在家读书; 下午与家人和朋友外出活动。2. 6月23日到朋友家附近的公园捡垃圾。3. 你对本次活动的期待。注意: 1. 邮件字数: 80词左右。2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯, 但邮件中不能出现真实的人名、地名。3. 邮件的开头和结尾已经给击, 不计入总词数。Dear Alan, Im going to enjoy myself during the coming weekend. _Yours, Chen Wei【答案】Dear Alan， Im going to enjoy myself during the coming weekend. On the morning of 22nd June, Im going to get up a little late and then read an interesting storybook. In the afternoon Im going out with my family and friends. Were going to take a walk in the country near our home or go swimming in the lake. And on 23rd June were going to collect liter in the park near my friends house. I think its going to be a great weekend-busy but good fun! Yours, Chen Wei【解析】写作要求以电子邮件的形式介绍自己中考后的第一个周末活动计划。写作时要仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确要点：分别从时间和活动安排来介绍，根据表达的内容确定句子的时态，就本文而言应该用一般将来时态，会用到be going to结构，人称为第一人称。在时间的表达上注意介词的正确使用，在某一天的早晨、下午、晚上用介词on。写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使用恰当的连词，使文意连贯，表达流畅。五、 山东济宁八.写作46.假如你是Wang Hong, 你的美国笔友Kevin下学期将作为名交换生来你们学校。下面是他发给你的一封e-mail.请根据邮件内容给予恰当的回复。注意:1.文中不得出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息.2.100词左右(开头,结尾已给出,不计人总词数)。Wang HongMy Questions Dear Wang Hong,How are you doing?You might not believe it, but Im going to your school as one of five exchange students next term. And Im so excited! However, Im worried about communicating with the teachers and students. As you know, I can speak only a little Chinese. What should I do? Besides, I want to learn to play pin-pong. Can you find a good player to help me? If you can, tell me something about him or her.Looking forward to your reply Bets wishes! Yours,Kevin 参考词语talk in English, help sb. with, be friendly and helpful, practice. with, play well, win a good prize. 【答案】Dear Kevin Im glad to hear from you.You said you were worried about communicating with the teachers and students because you could speak only a little Chinese.You dont be worried about it.You can talk with them in English.They can also help you with Chinese.They are very friendly and helpful.You also said you wanted to learn to play ping-pong.You can practice it with Li Lei.He is my best friend.He plays it very well.He won a good prize last week.He is ready to do others.With his help,you will be good at it.Welcome to our school.Best wishes.YoursWang Hong【解析】这是一篇图表，要求介绍自己。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料注意不同的时态和人称，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。六、 山东泰安第三节 写作52.习近平总书记在全国教育大会上提出了“立德树人”的人才培养根本任务，作为初中毕业生，你有什么人生规划？请根据以下提示，写一篇英语演讲稿。. 提示： 1. 作为中国人而自豪：过去，我国优秀的传统文化影响了世界：今天，祖国在全国人民的努力下越来越强大，许多科技世界领先； 2. 为实现“中国梦”而奋斗：学会做一个懂感恩、守规矩、善良诚信的人；不畏难，努力学习知识、提高能力，将来成为一名 要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，可根据提示适当发挥，不要逐句翻译；演讲中不得提及生个人身份的相关信息，如人名、校名或地名等；词数80100，开头结尾已给出（不计入词数）。Hello, everyone!_Thats all. Thank you!【答案】Hello, everyone! As a Chinese, I am so proud of it. In the past, our great traditional culture made a difference to the world, such as sailing, communicating and so on. Nowadays, our country is becoming stronger and stronger by working hard of all Chinese. A lot of science and technology lead the world, such as high speed, Change 4 and Hong Kong-Zhuhai-Macau Bridge and so on.As a teenager, we should do as follows to achieve our Chinese dream. First of all, we are supposed to thank all the people who devote themselves to making our country wonderful. Whats more, we need follow the rules. In school we should obey the school rules. Only by doing these dimple things can we become a person that the country needs. In addition, wed better not lie and be a honest man in order that all people can trust us. Last but not least, we should try our best to work hard and when face difficulties, we never give up. I am going to be a scientists. If I am a scientist, I will do more researches and let other countries admire us.Thats all. Thank you!【解析】本文属于材料作文，谈论祖国的伟大强盛以及为实现中国梦我们应该做的努力。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如be proud of, make a difference to, such as, and so on, 比较级and比较级, devote oneself to doing, in order that, try ones best以及first of all, whats more, in addition和last but not least等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。七、 山东潍坊五、写作46.请根据上文内容和下列问题提示进行续写，使之失构成一个完整的故事。注意： 1.续写故事的词数为80左右； 2. 展开合理想象，适当发挥，以使行文连贯； 3. 可根据需要自主选用以下参考词汇： Call the police dangerous escape catch robber (强盗) 【答案】例文“A knife ! My God ! He was really dangerous .It was wise to drive him off my car .” Andrea thought .Then she breathed deeply and called the police to tell them what had happened .A moment later , the police came to her .Andrea pointed to the direction the “old lady” might be in .Then the police drove along the road to look for “her” . How amazing ! The police were surprised to see that the “old lady” was still standing by the road .The police stopped and said , “Hello ,madam .Wed like to take you to Brockboune ,Get in ,please .” B“How dangerous ! What should I do ? ” Andrea said to herself ,”He must be a thief or robber .” As soon as she realized this , Andrea drove to the nearest police station and told the police what had happened ,then she left .When Andrea got home ,she told her parents all about the “old lady” . After hearing the story ,her parents hugged her tightly and said ,”What a lucky girl ! You are brave and smart enough to protect yourself .We are proud of you !” An hour later ,the police phoned her that they had caught the man-a real robber .【解析】这是一篇根据短文内容和图表提示，要求续写一个完整的故事。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第三人称，一般过去时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。重点短语：as soon as一就，call the police报警，be proud of为感到骄傲八、 山东东营八、书面表达66.Sunday Mail 青少年专栏开展“对身边的人说一句话”主题征文活动，这句话或许是对父 母的一句“我爱你”，或许是对老师、同学的一句 “谢谢你”，或许是对身边人的一句“对不起”等。请将“I want to say_”补充完整，并以此为题写一篇英语短文，如：I want to say thank you 等。谈谈你想说那句话的原因以及发生在那句话背后的故事，并说说你的感受。要求：1. 认真审题，把握要点；2. 行文连贯，条理清晰，不得出现真实学校、姓名等信息；3. 100 词左右。【答案】I want to say thank youI want to say thank you to my dear mother. She not only cares about my life, but always helps me out.Once I argued with my best friend Lucy, because she always pointed out my shortcomings. My mother talked with me and advised me to think about her words. I did so and found what Lucy said was helpful to me. With my mothers help, I didnt lose my best friend and learned how to deal with problems with friends.She does all that she can do for me. No matter what will happen in the future, I will love her forever.【解析】本文属于话题作文，对身边的人说一句话，并谈谈你想说那句话的原因以及发生在那句话背后的故事，并说说你的感受。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如not only.but, care about, help sb out, argue with, point out, talk with, advise sb to do, think about, be helpful to, with ones help, deal with以及in the future等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。九、 山东菏泽第二节 书面表达56.假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Lisa来信说她最近正在学习汉语，在学习过程中遇到程门立雪（ Cheng Men Li Xue）这一成语，不解其意，请你根据下面图片提示，用英语给她回信，简要叙述这个成语故事，并谈谈自己的理解和感悟。要求：1语言规范，语句通顺，可适当发挥；2字数：100词左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计人总词数。可能用到的词： idiom成语； during the Northern Song Dynasty北宋时期；Cheng Yi程顾； have a nap小憩； disturb打扰； moved感动的； respect尊敬Dear Lisa, Im glad to hear from you_Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Lisa,Im glad to hear from you. I am very happy that you have great interest in learning Chinese. Let me tell you the story about the idiom Cheng Men Li Xue.It is a story during the Northern Song Dynasty. There was a student called Yangshi. He had a confused problem. He wanted to ask famous teacher Cheng Yi. When he arrived his house, the teacher was having a nap. So the page boy asked Yangshi to visit the teacher another time. But Yangshi refused. Suddenly it started snowing. The page boy asked him to come in and wait in the house since it was very cold. However, Yangshi stood in front of the gate. Even later it snowed heavily. After the teacher finished all the things, Yangshi still stood in the snow. Then the teacher asked him, “Why not come another day? How silly you are!”. Yangshi said, “I have learned something from you, I cant disturb you, and I must show my respect for you”. Finally, Cheng Yi was moved by Yangshis action and taught him a lot. It shows us that we should show our respect to our teachers. Hope it will help you to understand. Yours,Li Hua【解析】这是一篇看图作文，要求我们根据图示给自己的英国笔友Lisa写信，给她解释“程门立雪”这个成语的含义。写作前，应仔细观察图片，弄清楚图片中发生的事情，然后用英语表达出来。审题可知，这篇文章的主要内容应包括：首先引入Lisa学习中遇到的问题，点明写这封信的目的；然后重点是解释该成语的含义，根据图片提示进行表达；最后谈一谈自己对这个成语的理解和感悟。短文中开头和结尾部分应使用一般现在时态；主体部分用一般过去时，注意谓语动词的正确形式，尤其是不规则动词过去式的变化。写作时应注意：首先应将题目中要求的所有内容都包括在内，包括题目中给出的提示词，在写作时应用上。注意分清结构和层次，叙述应清晰、有条理。其次应注意英语的表达问题，在词序以及表达上英语与汉语有很多不同的地方，不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，应从整句话的结构出发，选择适当的句型、词汇和短语进行表达。句式结构可以简单句为基础，穿插并列句以及复合句，为提升作文档次，可使用被动语态、非谓语动词等复杂结构。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使上下文意连贯，表达自然、流畅。十、 山东临沂61.书面表达时光荏苒，初中三年转瞬即逝。跟三年前的自己相比较，你会有很多变化。请以“I have changed a lot!”为题，根据以下要求与提示，用英语写一篇短文，具体描述你最重要的变化及其如何发生的。要求：l. 短文不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分；2.不少于60词。提示：l. What did you use to be like?2. What is the most important change?3. And how did it happen? Tell a story about it.I have changed a lot!_【答案】Great changes have happened to me during the past three years. The most important change is my attitude to English.I used to be tired of learning English. And I was not interested in it. I couldnt remember the words freely or pronounce them correctly. Thanks to my mother, she often encourages me to learn it. Besides, with the help of my English teacher, I find a better way to learn English. I read it every morning. I listen to her carefully in class, take grammar notes. I often ask my classmates for help.Now I like English so much that it is my favorite subject. Seeing the great change in my English study, how happy I am!【解析】本文要写我初中三年的变化，根据习作提示，首先要指出我最大的变化是什么，并描述出具体变化是怎么发生的，所以要针对自己某一个最大的变化来写，而不是泛泛地写很多变化；时态主要是一般过去时和一般现在时。本篇文章，首先开篇点题，我有很多变化，我最大的变化是我对待英语学习态度的变化。第二段是文章的主体，先描述过去学习英语的状况，其中用到表达过去常用的句型used to do ;在妈妈及老师的帮助下，我的英语学习发生了很大变化，具体表现为I read it every morning. I listen to her carefully in class, take grammar notes. I often ask my classmates for help.等。最后对以上变化进行总结，并指出对于这个变化，我的心情如何，Seeing the great change in my English study, how happy I am! 整篇文章内容符合要求，时态用云正确，思路清晰，结构完整，是一篇不错的文章。十一、 山东烟台第二节 写作56.假设你某英语报社的编辑Rina, 收到Li Wei 同学的来信，诉说了因为肥胖常遭到同学嘲笑的苦恼，并向你寻求建议。请你根据以下提示给Li Wei 回信。要求：1.须包括所有要点提示并适当补充,语句通顺,意思连贯;2.词数:100词左右;开头和结尾已给出不计入总词数;3.文中不得出现个入真实姓名和校名。参考词汇:laugh at; care about; high- fat food; the more, the healthierDear Li Wei,Ive received your letter and I can understand you. YoursRina【答案】ear Li Wei,I have received your letter and I can understand you. You must feel bad when being laughed at use of your over-weight. Here is my advice for you.Firstly, there is no need to care about what others think of you. The most important thing is to be confident, as it will help you have courage to face and overcome your trouble.Secondly, try to eat healthily keep away from high-fat food and eat more fruit and vegetables instead. A balanced diet is very important for losing weight.Thirdly, I strongly advise you to exercise more often. Youd better get up early in the morning and do some sports regularly. The more you exercise, the healthier youll be.I hope my advice will be helpful to you.Yours,Rina【解析】假设你某英语报社的编辑Rina, 收到Li Wei 同学的来信，诉说了因为肥胖常遭到同学嘲笑的苦恼，并向你寻求建议。请你根据以下提示给Li Wei 回信。本题给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，确定写作内容，并适当发挥。根据内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态和将来时态，写作中注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。这是一篇很好的文章，文中用到了一些好的句型：Firstly, there is no need to care about what others think of you.；Secondly, try
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