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专题40 书面表达二一、浙江杭州第二节：书面表达56.假定你是李平，最近收到意大利朋友Linda的电子邮件。以下是邮件的一部分，请你阅读后回复，词数80左右。Subject:From: LindaTo: Li PingIm really looking forward to meeting your brother when he comes to Rome in the summer. I can show him around the city! Please tell me something about him! How old is he? What does he look like? What kind of person is he and whats he interested in?Hope to hear from you soon.Love,LindaSubject:From: Li PingTo: LindaDear Linda,_Yours,Li Ping【答案】Dear Linda,Thank you so much for agreeing to show my brother around Rome. Now let me tell you something about my brother. He is thirteen years old, easy-going and humorous-we get along really well. He loves different cultures. He is interested in museums and likes trying local food.My brother is also cute. Hes of medium height with short straight black hair. He is good at Chinese kungfu, and usually wears T-shirts and jeans.Thanks again for your help!Yours,Li Ping【解析】这篇作文要求我们对Linda的电子邮件进行回复。写作前，应先阅读Linda的来信，了解信中她想知道的事情，然后有针对性地给她进行介绍。审题可知，Linda在信中提到她想要了解你哥哥的一些情况，她提出了三个问题，“他多大了”；“他是什么样子的”；“他是怎样的人以及他的兴趣”，回信中应对Linda的这些提问进行回答，并根据表达的需要，补充一些细节内容，使文章更加充实、丰富。短文应使用一般现在时、第三人称来叙述，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应注意：首先内容应符合题目要求，并且叙述要注意层次和结构；其次应注意英语的表达问题，应符合英文句式的特点以及表达习惯，不能写汉语式的英语。可以简单句结构为主，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式和结构，提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯、自然。二、浙江衢州56.书面表达71. 假设你是Li Ming， 以下是你的南非笔友Seb发给你的一封电子邮件，请根据该邮件内容给Seb回一封邮件。要求：1. 考生需按电子邮件格式完成整封邮件；2. 邮件中不能出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息；3. 词数：90100【答案】From: LiMingTo: SebSubject: Learning Chinese in QuzhouHi, Seb,Im so glad that youll come to live in my city.To improve Your Chinese quickly. You can go and take a course in a Chinese Language School. It can always help you to speak better and learn more.Then, try to experience life here in Quzhou. Of course. Ill take you around Quzhou. We can visit the Confucius Temple. Its the best way to understand our culture. And you can practice speaking Chinese at the same time. Its very helpful.Hope to see you soon!YoursLiMing【解析】本题是书信作文。假设你是Li Ming， 以下是你的南非笔友Seb发给你的一封电子邮件，请根据该邮件内容给Seb回一封邮件。注意电子邮件格式。时态主要是一般现在时。认为阅读材料，认真审题，确定主题，根据Seb的电子邮件，列出提纲。表达要条理清楚，语言规范。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。三、浙江湖州61.书面表达 5月18日是国际博物馆日，下图是你班同学参观博物馆的情况。请你结合调查结果、自己的参观经历和感受，写一份报告，并在英语课上汇报。注意：1. 词数：80-100 (短文首句已给出，不计入总词数) 2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。_【答案】Visiting museums has become one o f the most popular ways for us students to spend our spare time. According to the survey made in our class, almost all the students have been to museums, such as science museums, tea museums and film museums, etc.Among them, the science museum is our favorite.Ive been to Huzhou Science Museum and Lu Yu Tea Museum. I like the tea museum very much, because I can learn about the histor and development of tea and watch the tea art performances there as well. What Im interested in most is the show of beautiful tea sets, which has left a deep impression on me.Museums make it possible for us. students to learn knowledge and experience cultures at the same time. Why not visit more?【解析】这是一篇图表，是同学参观博物馆的情况，结合调查结果、自己的参观经历和感受，写一份报告，并在英语课上汇报。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料注意人称和时态的不同，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。四、浙江宁波 六、书面表达61.回顾初中三年。有许多事令人难忘。校英语报如Have Your Say栏目正面向九年级毕业生征文。假如你是李华，请你选择其中一个话题, 并结合具体事例, 用英语写一封信表达你对某个人的谢意或歉意，参加此次征文活动。要点如下：say thanks to_say sorry to_1. be not good at.2. encourage me to3. make great progress4.1. argue with2. not talk to each other3. regret doing4.注意： (1) 短文必须包括你所选择话题的所有要点, 并适当拓展； (2) 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； (3) 词数:80-100,书信格式已给出； (4) 首句供参考Looking back on the past three years, Id like to say.Dear _,_ Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Alice,Looking back on the past three years, Id like to say thanks to you for helping me with my English.When I was in Grade 7, I was not good at English. I just hid behind my text book and never said anything in class. Once I did very badly in an English test, and I lost heart. However, you had a patient talk with me and encouraged me to be more active in class.Since then, I have worked harder and made great progress. I feel lucky to be your student.Thank you again. Wish you goal luck.Yours,Li Hua (100 words) Possible version 2:Dear Alan,Looking back on the past three years, Id like to say sorry to you for arguing with you.When we were in Grade 8, we lost the chance to get the first prize in the football match. I never stopped complaining to you that it was you who missed the goal. But you shouted back that you were not the only reason. You walked off angrily. From then on, we didnt talk to each other.I have been regretting doing so. Soon we will graduate from our school. Lets forget about the past and become good friends again.Yours,Li Hua【解析】这个作文要求我们从题目中给出的两个话题中选择一个，并结合具体事例，用英语写一封信表达你对某个人的谢意或歉意，参加学校英语报的一个征文活动。题目中利用表格的形式展示了两个话题的主要结构，具体的内容需要学生们自己发挥想象力进行补充，并用正确的英语表达出来。审题可知，这篇短文应以一般过去时、第一人称和第二人称为主来叙述。文章内容应包括：首先确定一个话题和人物；然后具体说明你感谢他或者向他道歉的原因，这是文章的主体部分，叙述应详细，合情合理；最后再次重申自己的感谢或歉意，并表达祝愿。写作时应注意：首先文章内容应完整、充实，注意分清段落和层次；其次需注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译。句式结构应完整，可以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂结构，提升文章档次。同时语句直接使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯、自然。五、金华，义乌，丽水七、书面表达61.某英文网站正在举办以“My School Life”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿。内容要点参考词汇SubjectsEnglish, Science,.Teachers/Classmateskind, helpful,.Activitiessports, hobbies,.注意：1. 文中必须包括表格中全部内容要点，可适当发挥，参考词汇仅供选择使用； 2. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名； 3. 词数：80100; 4. 短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。My School LifeIm Li Hua from Sunny Hill Middle School in China. Id like to share my school life with you. _ _ _ 【答案】例文Possible version: Im Li Hua from Sunny Hill Middle School in China. Id like to share my school life with you.We have many subjects at school such as Chinese, English and so on. I am focused more on Chinese, for I think its getting more and more widely used throughout the world. Our teachers are kind and helpful.Whenever I have problems, they are always ready to give me a hand.School activities are rich and colorful. I often play basketball with my classmates, which brings me lots of fun. I like reading as well. So I often spend my free time reading in the school library.My school life is wonderful and I enjoy it very much.【解析】【分析】【高分句型一】I often play basketball with my classmates，which brings me lots of fun我经常和我的同学打篮球，这给我带来了很多乐趣。which引导非限定性定语从句。【高分句型二】So I often spend my free time reading in the school library所以我经常花我的空闲时间在学校图书馆阅读。spenddoing sth花费做某事。这是一篇给材料作文。某英文网站正在举办以“My School Life”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。六、浙江温州56.书面表达 最近，用手机APP买菜的人多了。手机菜场菜品丰富、洗净配好、预约送菜上门外国朋友对此也很感兴趣。请你以A New Use of the Mobile Phone为题，写一篇110词左右的英语短文介绍手机买菜带来的便利，让外国朋友了解中国人民生活中的这个新变化。A New Use of the Mobile Phone_【小词典】acknowledge v.承认，认可 bone n. 骨骼 chest n. 胸部cipher n. 标记 crowd n. 大众 elect v. 选举，推选franc n. 法国法郎 invisible ad. 不可见的 muscle n. 肌肉profound adj. 深刻的 radio telescope射电望远镜 reflect n. 反射signal n. 信号 stimulate v. 刺激 toe n. 脚趾【答案】A New Use of the Mobile PhonePreparing for meals is tiring. You may have to spend hours getting everything ready for cooking. Now in China, new mobile apps are here to help. These apps provide you with meat, fish, and vegetables, almost everything you need for a meal. You ,an order whenever you like and decide on the time for them to arrive. If you like. they can be washed, cut and packed for a certain dish. Some apps even guide you to cook step by step, making cooking easier. Compared with the traditional way of going to the market, mobile apps save your time and energy. With such a new use of the mobile phone, you can enjoy a more relaxing life.【解析】这是一篇给材料作文。要求以A New Use of the Mobile Phone为题，写一篇英语短文介绍手机买菜带来的便利，让外国朋友了解中国人民生活中的这个新变化。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。七、 台州七、书面表达（本题有1小题; 共计20分）76. 似如你是李华, 一个英国游学团要来你们学校, 学校需要一些志愿者, 你想成为其中的一员。请读下面的招雾启事, 写一封应征邮件。Volunteers WantedSome students from the UK will come to our school to have a study tour. They are interested in Chinese culture. We relooking for some volunteers to help us. Can you introduce yourself(English ability and personality)? Can you plan an activity about Chinese culture and explain your purpose? If you are interested, please email us at Andrewl63. com. 注意: （1）请回复招募启事中所提及的两个问题, 可适当发挥; （2）应征邮件中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息; （3）词数: 80100; （4）邮件开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。Dear Andrew, Im Li Hua. 【分析】【高分句型一】In addition，Im interested in sports，which is why Im in good health此外，我对体育感兴趣，这就是为什么我健康状况良好which引导非限制性定语从句【高分句型二】I plan to organize an activity about Chinese traditional culture， so that British friends can understand China better我计划组织一次关于中国传统文化的活动，让英国朋友更好的了解中国plan to do sth计划做某事；so that 引导目的状语从句【答案】Dear Sir，My name is Li HuaIm a 17-year-old girl from Class 3 ，Grade 2I would like to become a volunteer for the American students（点明目的）My English is good and I can talk with foreigner fluentlyIn addition，Im interested in sports，which is why Im in good health【高分句型一】When my friends get in trouble，I often help them activelyIm good at taking up with othersBesides I like travelling a lot and Im quite familiar with our city（自我介绍）I plan to organize an activity about Chinese traditional culture so that British friends can understand China better【高分句型二】（计划的活动）Im sure I can become friends with theEnglish studentsLooking forward to your answers（愿望）Yours，Li Hua八、 绍兴九、书面表达（共1小题，共计20分）18.学校是否有必要设立“无作业日”？对此，你在班中进行了调查。请你根据下表内容写一篇短文在英语课上交流，并阐述你的观点和理由。 OpinionsReasonsmost studentsYeshave free timefeel relaxedsome studentsNowaste timeget bad gradesI注意：短文必须包括表中所有内容,可适当增加细节；词数：80-100；短文首句仅供选择使用,不计入总词数。参考词汇：无作业日Homework-free Day短文首句：Ive done a survey about whether it is necessary to have Homework-free Day. Here are the results.【答案】 One possible version: Ive done a survey about whether it is necessary to have Homework-free Day. Here are the results. Most students think it necessary to have Homework-free Day so that they will have more free time to do what they like, such as reading their favorite books, going swimming and so on. They will also feel relaxed and join their friends in playing different games. Some students, however, dont like it. Theyre afraid that they may waste time or even get bad grades. They prefer to do homework as usual. In my view, Homework-free Day will certainly help a lot. I can choose to watch some interesting English programs, which will help improve my listening and speaking skills.【考点】材料作文 【解析】【分析】这是一篇材料类作文。着重通过调查对“无作业日学生的看法：赞成与反对及理由。主要以第三人称和一般现在时。写作中应适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻切关系。 【点评】文章中使用了非常好的短语或句子会给文章增色。such as ，例如； Homework-free Day ，无作业日；prefer to do sth.更喜欢做某事。 Ive done a survey about whether it is necessary to have Homework-free Day.（介词后接宾语从句）；Most students think it necessary to have Homework-free Day so that they will have more free time to do what they like.（宾语从句；不定式做主语和结果状语从句）； I can choose to watch some interesting English programs, which will help improve my listening and speaking skills. （非限制性定语从句）。还运用了or， however 等使上下文衔接的更好。九、 嘉兴、舟山六、书面表达(本题有1小题,共计15分)61. 假设你是李华。你在某英文网站上看到一则招募中国志愿者(volunteer)的广告。请根据该广告中所提供的两个志愿者项目,选择其中一个,结合自己的实际情况,给项目负责人写一封电子邮件,表达你希望参加这个项目的愿望,并阐述理由。注意: (1)邮件中必须包含招募广告中的信息,可适当发挥。 (2)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。 (3)词数: 80100。邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Sir/Madam, Im Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I want to be a volunteer. _Looking forward to your early reply! Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Sir/Madam，Im Li Hua，a middle school student from China I want to be a volunteerIm willing to go to a small village in the west of China I know something about ChinaI will be glad to take part in the Project 1（写明选择） I have been good at English since I was a student【高分句型一】 Im also willing to be a teacher to teach children English In my opinion，helping people in need is meaningful I can help people work on the farm because both my father and my mother are farmers I can do a lot of work on the farmAlso，I can visit the old peoples home to help the old wash clothes and clean the house and so on（一一写出原因） Its meanfuling for me to do something for others 【高分句型二】Looking forward to your early reply! Yours Li Hua十、长沙第三节书面表达55.假如你是李华，你们班输了上周的篮球赛。Henry认为是他未能投进最后一球所造成的，有的队友也因此而责怪他。请你写一封英文邮件安慰他，谈谈你对此事的看法，并就如何取得队友的理解提出建议。要求：（1）80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；（3）信中不得出现真实人名和校名。Dear Henry,I learned that you are feeling sorry and upset because of losing the basketball game 【答案】Dear Henry,I learned that you are feeling sorry and upset because of losing the basketball game. Its not easy being in your situation, and its normal to have these feelings. Anyway, dont be too hard on yourself.You know, basketball is about team effort. Its never just one persons fault. What matters is that you should learn from the games as well as your mistakes. Besides, you need to think about how you can do better next time.As a whole, teammates should support and believe in each other. Why dont you sit down and communicate with them? And you could promise that you will spare no efforts to better your skills. If all of you pull together, youre sure to win the next one.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】这是一篇给材料的书信作文。假如你是李华，就输球事件安慰Henry，谈谈你对此事的看法，并就如何取得队友的理解提出建议。人称为第二人称，时态以一般现在时为主。动笔前先要注意认真阅读材料确定写作内容；文章必须包括要点中所给的信息，但不要逐句翻译，补充两条个人的观点并提出建议。注意表达的条理性，用好连接词，可适当发挥使行文连贯，多种句式交叉使用来丰富文章的文采。高分句型一：What matters is that you should learn from the games as well as your mistakes. 重要的是你应该从比赛中吸取教训，也要从错误中吸取教训。What matters is that重要的是，that引导的是表语从句。as well as常用来连接两个并列的成分，作“也，还”讲。高分句型二：And you could promise that you will spare no efforts to better your skills. 你可以保证你会不遗余力地提高你的技能。that引导的是宾语从句，spare no efforts to do sth.不遗余力做某事。高分句型三：If all of you pull together, youre sure to win the next one. 如果大家齐心协力，你们一定会赢得下一场比赛。此句是if引导的条件状语从句；be sure to do sth. 必定做某事。十一、株洲第三节 情景作文 51.假定你是李华，准备参加“一带一路”国家中学生英语演讲比赛，主题为“现在引领未来”。请你写一篇演讲稿，包括以下内容：(1) 你最难忘的一个书包是怎么得来的？(2) 你喜欢它吗？为什么？(3) 描述你将来的书包。注意：(1)词数80左右；(2) 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；(3) 文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息。 【答案】I have a beautiful school bag. My grandma bought it for me last autumn as a birthday present. I like it very much. My bag is a blue one, and blue is my favourite colour. On the bag, you can see a little tiger, Its very lovely. There are many books in my bag, such as Chinese books, English books and others. And there is a nice pencil-box, too. Inside the bag, there is a small pocket. I often put some money and keys in it. When I study my lessons, the bag is always together with me. It is my close friend, I will take good care of it.In the future, the bag will better than now. It will be smaller and more useful. I hope bag will not so heavy. Though bag in the future will be small, they have big capacity. Bag should be cheap and fashion, too. As far as I am concerned, our own bag will just be opened by ourselves. How great bag !【解析】1、题干解读：本文属于材料作文，主要介绍你的书包以及你喜欢它的原因，最后畅想一下未来的书包是什么样子的。2、例文点评：本文采用三段式，第一段讲述你的书包的来历，第二段讲述你喜欢这个书包以及原因，第三段畅想一下未来的书包。3、高分亮点：单词短语：There be，such as，too，take good care of, in the future,as far as I am concerned等。句型：How great bag中how引导的感叹句。【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如There be，such as，take good care of, in the future, How great bag中how引导的感叹句等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅，如too，as far as I am concerned；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数
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