中考英语 第三部分 中考题型探究 第43讲 书面表达课件

英语英语第43讲书面表达假设你是思湘，你的美国笔友艾米来信想了解中国的传统节日端午节。请根据如下提示用英语写一篇80词以上的回信给她。注意：1.信中不允许出现与考生本人相关的真实姓名和校名等信息；2信的开头已给出，不计入总词数；3参考词汇：端午节the Dragon Boat Festival；为了纪念in memory ofOne possible version：Dear Amy，I learn from your letter that you want to know something about Chinese traditional festivalThe Dragon Boat Festival.The festival has a history of more than 2000 years.It falls on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese lunar calendar.On that day，people watch exciting dragonboat races and make delicious Zongzi，a kind of special food with sticky rice，meat etc.wrapped in bamboo leaves.These two are both done in memory of Qu Yuan，a great poet in history.In a word，we all love the festival because its a good reminder to look back on history and a wonderful time to get together with family.I hope that you can come to celebrate it with us in the near future.Best wishes!Si_Xiang书面表达题主要考查学生在特定的语境中综合运用语言进行表达的能力；同时，还考查学生英文书写的规范性、美观性等。一、常见的书面表达题型1根据文体归类：日记、书信、通知、便条、启事、贺卡、发言稿、调查报告、记叙文、说明文及议论文等。然而许多试题都将记叙、议论、说明等表达方式融为一体，形成复合型的写作。2根据所提供的材料形式归类：图画作文、图表作文、提纲作文及命题作文等。这样的测试形式既有一定的控制性，又有一定的开放性，为考生展示其写作能力提供了发挥的空间。二、如何写出优美的文章1选准词语。语言是交流的工具。要使用通用的、合乎习惯的词语，切忌使用生僻的词汇。选词要达意，英语中有许多同义但用法不同的词汇或短语，切忌混淆用法。用词要简明扼要，在不确定的情况下，宁可用常用词简单明了地表达信息。2写好句子。运用所学词汇、短语，结合一定的语法知识，按照句子的结构特点，直接用英语写出相应的句子。运用固定句式表达信息，把比较复杂的句子分成两个或两个以上的简单句子，减少写错句的几率。把两个简单句用一个复合句或较复杂的简单句表达出来，这样可提高文章的可读性，但在没有把握的情况下慎用。遇见生词或不熟悉的表达时，可以在保持原意的基础上，用不同的表达方式写出来。3设计段落。一个完整的段落要有主题句、拓展句及结尾句。正确运用连接词使语言衔接自然、行文流畅。4书写规范、卷面整洁。三、如何提升写作1熟悉五种基本句式及一些使用频率较高的句式。2收集优秀范文并大声朗读来扩展思路及培养语感。3坚持常规练习。即：词词组句子段落篇章。切记：简单句是主菜，要做到运用自如；复杂句是佐料，有之增色，缺之乏味，但不可舍本逐末，以免弄巧成拙。4仔细审题，要点齐全，人称及时态运用正确。【例1】 假设你和朋友将在今年暑假参加以“拥抱大自然”为主题的户外拓展夏令营，其中包括小组自由活动。请你为你们小组设计一个活动方案。(2016，襄阳模拟)提示词语：climb mountains；go fishing；pick fruits；have a campfire (篝火晚会)要求：1.写明你们组计划要做的具体活动，并给出理由；2提示词语仅供参考，可增减内容；3词数80100。开头已给出，不计入总词数；4文中不得出现真实的人名、校名与地名。We are going for a camp this summer.Im glad to make a plan for our group. _ 解析：第一步：认真仔细地阅读提示，思考所提供的信息，计划文章大致内容。第二步：根据信息要求遣词造句，连句成文。第三步：通读全文，纠正错误，书写整洁。写作要点：1.具体的活动要丰富多彩。2.写出安排这些活动的理由。注意：此文是计划打算，应用将来时态。切忌写成流水账。【参考范文】We_are_going_for_a_camp_this_summer.Im_glad_to_make_a_plan_for_our_group.First of all，we plan to climb mountains in the morning so that we can enjoy fresh air and watch beautiful sunrise.After that，well have a fruitpicking competition between boys and girls，which will help us know each other better.Whats more，there will be a campfire.We can enjoy ourselves by singing，dancing and telling stories.Wont it be fantastic to share the relaxing moment with friends?We are looking forward to the summer camp because we can forget the busy work at school，and I believe well have a wonderful time together.精彩再现：文章内容完整，叙述清楚，要点一目了然。使用了first of all，after that，whats more表顺序的副词来使文章条理更清晰，更流畅。经典句型：we plan to climb mountains in the morning so that we can enjoy fresh air and watch beautiful sunrise.Wont it be fantastic to share the relaxing moment with friends？I believe well have a wonderful time together.【例2】 由于父母的溺爱，现在许多孩子基本不做学习以外的事情，导致独立生活能力不强。请你根据下面表格中的内容，按要求用英语写一篇短文，谈谈作为中学生，我们应该如何培养自己的独立性。要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；2必须包括表格中所有内容，并做适当发挥；3行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；4词数70左右。(短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)WaysThings we can dobegin with our own thingsclean our own rooms，.help with houseworkcook，.learn activelylearn by ourselves，.think about things by ourselves.As middle school students，its very important for us to be independent.What should we do to make us independent？First，_I think if we keep on doing these，well become more and more independent.解析：第一步：认真阅读题目要求，仔细观察表格中的内容。第二步：根据提示内容，把握好文章的中心，适当发挥。选用合适的表顺序的副词使文章条理清晰。第三步：通读全文，检查要点是否遗漏，纠正错误，书写要整洁。注意：表达培养独立性的方法时，多用祈使句；描述可以做的事情时，可用到can，should，need等情态动词；写作时，时态应用一般现在时，人称采用第一人称，给出的要点不能遗漏，并且注意词数要求。【参考范文】As_middle_school_students，its_very_important_for_us_to_be_independent.What_should_we_do_to_make_us_independent？First，lets begin with our own things.Its our job to clean our own rooms and make our beds.Second，help with housework.We can help cook or clean the house in our free time.Doing housework teaches us how to look after ourselves.Third，learn actively.We should learn by ourselves and finish our homework on time.Finally，think about things by ourselves.We sometimes need to make plans or decisions alone.Dont always depend on others.I_think_if_we_keep_on_doing_these，well_become_more_and_more_independent.精彩再现：整篇文章结构完整，内容详尽，要点明确。层次清晰。先表明自己的观点，后用first，second，third，finally等表顺序的副词把观点一一陈列，清楚明了，条理分明。经典句型：Its our job to.Doing housework teaches us how to look after ourselves.Dont always depend on others.假如你是李华，你的好朋友Lisa不久前参加达人秀节目被淘汰了， 她为这次失败所困扰，无心学习。请你给她写一封电子邮件，建议她正确地看待达人秀节目，享受参与的过程而不必太在意结果；提醒她实现理想的途径有很多，只有努力才能获得成功；鼓励她好好学习，也不放弃个人爱好，开心地度过每一天。要求：(1)包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；(2)词数：6080词(信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；(3)信中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名。One possible version：To：Subject：To think about talent shows in a proper wayDear Lisa，Im sorry to hear that you are feeling down because of your failure in this talent show. Id like to share with you my thoughts on this matter.Yes，talent shows may change ones future.They offer the opportunity to show ones talents，and give people a way to make their dreams come true.Since only some people are truly talented，there is no need to take the result too seriously.It may not be good for us teenagers to become famous overnight.So just enjoy the process.In addition，there are many ways to success，and only by working hard can you achieve your goals.As a teenager，you should spare no efforts to study and develop your interests at the same time，which，without doubt，will enrich your future life.Hope youll be happy every day.Yours，Li Hua