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精选优质文档-倾情为你奉上读后续写练习（一）A farmer grew some vegetables in his garden. One day his wife was ill and he had no money. He had to sell some cabbages and carrots in the market. The next morning he took two baskets of vegetables to town. But it was raining heavily that afternoon and there were few people in the street. When his vegetables were sold out, it was dark. He bought some medicine and hurried to his village. On his way home he saw a person lying on the snow. He placed his baskets on the ground and was going to help the person to stand up. At that time, he found it was a dead man and there was much blood on his body. He was so afraid that he ran away quickly, without taking the baskets with him. The next afternoon the farmer was sent to the police station. Having shown the baskets, an officer asked, “Are these yours?” “Yes, sir.” the farmer answered timidly(胆怯地). “Have you killed the man?” “No, no, sir.” the farmer said in a hurry. “When did you see the dead man?” “At about seven last night.” “Did you see who killed the man?” “No, sir.” The officer brought out a knife and asked, “Have you seen it yet?” “No, sir.” The officer became angry and told the policemen to beat(打) him up and sent him into prison. the officer wanted to trap(设陷阱) the farmer into the confession(供认), but the farmer didnt admit he was the murderer(谋杀犯).注意：1. 所续写的短文词数应为150左右；2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1: The officer was so angry that he asked the policeman to beat him up again. The farmer was lucky .A few days later, Possible answer:Paragraph 1The officer was so angry that he asked the policeman to beat him up again. The farmer was very afraid, and he thought he would be sentenced to death by killing people, but he was innocent. He must tell people the truth, but no one could hear his voice. He hoped that someone could come and save him.Paragraph 2The farmer was lucky .A few days later, a young man came to the police station with a lot of journalists, saying that he saw the murderer. It was the police officer who killed the man on the snow! He saw the police office used a knife killing the man late in the evening. He was so frightened and ran away. But the young man thought the farmer was innocent. So he took the great courage to expose the real criminal. After the investigation, the young man was right. The police officer was sent into prison and the policeman who beat up the farmer was fired, and the brave young man was regarded as the hero by the villagers.简评：1. The farmer was very afraid, and he thought he would be sentenced to death by killing people.这一句可以改为形容词作状语的悬垂结构：Afraid / Frightened, the farmer thought he would be sentenced to death by killing people.2. He hoped that someone could come and save him.可改成感叹句，语气更加强烈：How he hoped that someone could come and save him!3. .a young man came to the police station with a lot of journalists, saying that he saw the murderer. 后半部分词作状语，构成悬垂结构。saying可以换成declaring 宣布; saw可换成witnessed,目击。4. It was the police officer who killed the man on the snow! 强调句，高级。强调部分还可以加上否定内容使语意更加完整。此处可以用到It was not. but. that .或者It was . rather than.that .即：It was not the farmer but the police officer that killed the man on the snow! 或者It was the police officer rather than the farmer that killed the man on the snow!5. So he took the great courage to expose the real criminal. 中took the great courage to 鼓起极大勇气做某事。6. After the investigation, the young man was right. 建议改为：After investigation,the police found what the young man had said was the truth. 7. The police officer was sent into prison and the policeman who beat up the farmer was fired, and the brave young man was regarded as the hero by the villagers.最后一句可以适当加上副词。Immediately, the police officer was sent into prison and the policeman who beat up the farmer was fired. Eventually,the poor farmer was released and the brave young man was regarded as the hero by the villagers.读后续写练习（二）I was responding to a call from a small brick flat(用砖做的公寓) in a quiet part of town. I assumed I was being sent to pick up some party-goers，or someone who had just had a fight with a lover，or a worker heading to an early shift at some factory for the industrial part of town.When I arrived at 2：30 a.m.， the building was dark except for a single light in a ground floor window. Under such circumstances， many drivers just honk（按喇叭） once or twice，wait a minute，then drive away. But I had seen too many weak people who depended on taxis as their only means of transportation.Unless a situation smelled of danger，I always went to the door.This passenger might be someone who needs my assistance，I reasoned to myself. So I walked to the door and knocked. “Just a minute，” answered a frail，elderly voice. I could hear something being dragged across the floor. After a long pause，the door opened. A small woman in her 80s stood before me. She was wearing a print dress and a pillbox hat ，like somebody out of a 1940s movie. By her side was a small nylon suitcase.The apartment looked as if no one had lived in it for years. All the furniture was covered with sheets. There were no clocks on the walls， no equipment on the counters. In the corner was a cardboard box filled with photos and glassware.“Would you carry my bag out to the car？” she said. I took the suitcase to the cab，then returned to assist the woman. She took my arm，and we walked slowly toward the cab.She kept thanking me for my kindness. “Its nothing,” I told her. “I just try to treat my passengers the way I would want my mother treated.”注意：1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1: Having given me an address, a hospice , she asked. “Could you drive through downtown?” Paragraph 2: we drove in silence to the address she had given me , and it Paragraph 1: Having given me an address, a hospice , she asked. “Could you drive through downtown?” Asked why we didnt take the shortest way, the small woman told me it was the last chance for her to visit the city. We drove through the neighborhood where she and her husband had lived. Besides, she asked me to slow in front of a particular building or corner and would sit staring into the darkness, saying nothing. At last, she said she was tired and wanted to go to the hospice.Paragraph 2: we drove in silence to the address she had given me , and it was a low building,where the old lady would live the rest of her life. Two nurses who must have been expecting her came out to the cab as soon as we pulled up. I opened the trunk and took the suitcase to the door and the woman was already seated in a wheelchair. When she asked how much she owed me, without thinking, I said nothing and bent to give her a bug . It was my assistance that helped one of weak people realize her wish.简评：1. Asked why we didnt take the shortest way, the small woman told me it was the last chance for her to visit the city. 这一句句式灵活，asked分词作状语,why引导一个宾语从句，后面主语部分也有一个宾语从句。2. We drove through the neighborhood where she and her husband had lived. 定语从句，由where引导。3. and would sit staring into the darkness, saying nothing. 现在分词作状语。4. a low building,where the old lady would live the rest of her life. Two nurses who must have been expecting her came out to the cab as soon as we pulled up.两个定语从句。5. When she asked how much she owed me, without thinking, I said nothing and bent to give her a bug .时间状语从句。6. It was my assistance that helped one of weak people realize her wish.强调句。读后续写练习（三） A friend of mine, named Jack, received an expensive car from his brother as a Christmas present. On Christmas Eve when Jack came out of his office, a street urchin(顽童), called Tom, was walking around the shining car. “Is this your car, sir?” Tom asked. “Yes, my brother gave it to me for Christmas.” Jack answered. Tom was surprised. “You mean your brother gave it to you and it cost you nothing? Sir, I wish” He hesitated(犹豫).Jack thought of course(路线), he knew what Tom wanted, but what Tom said surprised him greatly. “I wish,” Tom went on, “that I could be a brother like that.” Jack looked at Tom in surprise, and then he said again, “Would you like to take a ride(搭车) in my car?” “Oh yes, Idlove to,” Tom answered.After a short ride, Tom turned and with his eyes shining, said, “Sir, would you mind driving in front of my house?” Jack smiled a little. He thought he knew what Tom wanted. He wanted to show his neighbors that he could ride home in a big car. But Jack was wrong again. “Will you stop where those two steps(台阶) are?” Tom asked.注意：1所续写的短文词数应为150左右；2应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1He got out and ran up to the steps. Paragraph 2Jack got out and lifted the boy to the front seat of his car. Paragraph 1He got out and ran up to the steps. Then in a short while Jack heard Tom coming back, but he was not coming fast. Tom was carrying his little crippled(残疾的) brother. He sat down on the step and pointed to the car. “There he is, Buddy, just like I told you upstairs. His brother gave it to him for Christmas and it didnt cost him a cent. And some day Im going to give you one just like itthen you can see for yourself all the nice things in the Christmas windows that Ive been trying to tell you about”Paragraph 2Jack got out and lifted the boy to the front seat of his car. The shining-eyed elder brother climbed in beside him and the three began an unforgettable holiday ride., looking at all those beautiful things. That Christmas Eve, Jack learned the real meaning of the words: “Its more blessed to give than to receive.” He also learned what it means to be “an elder brother like that.”读后续写练习（四）Twenty years ago, I drove a taxi for a living. One night I went to pick up a passenger at 2:30 a. m. When I arrived to collect, I found the building was dark except for a single light in a ground floor window. I walked to the door and knocked, Just a minute, answered a weak, elderly voice. After a long time, the door opened. A small woman in her eighties stood before me. By her side was a small suitcase. I took the suitcase to the car, and then returned to help the woman. She took my arm and we walked slowly towards the car. She kept thanking me for my kindness. Its nothing, I told her. I just try to treat my passengers the way I would want my mother treated. Oh, youre such a good man. She said. When we got into the taxi, she gave me an address, and then asked, Could you drive through downtown? Its not the shortest way, I answered quickly. Oh, Im in no hurry, she said. Im on my way to a hospice (临终医院). I dont have any family left. The doctor says I dont have very long. I quietly reached over and shut off the meter (计价器). For the next two hours, we drove through the city. She showed me the building where she had once worked, the neighborhood where she had lived, and the furniture shop that had once been a ballroom where she had gone dancing as a girl. Sometimes shed ask me to slow down in front of a particular building and would sit staring into the darkness, saying nothing. At dawn, she suddenly said, Im tired. Lets go now. We drove in silence Lo the address she had given me. How much do I owe you? she asked. Nothing. I said. You have to make a living, she answered. Oh, there are other passengers, I answered. She said thanks to me, but she looked so sad.注意：1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1 Almost without thinking, I bent and gave her a hug. Paragraph 2 I was on my way to visit her. Possible answer:Almost without thinking, I bent and gave her a hug. She held onto me tightly. Before the woman left , I said to her, “My mother treated everyone kindly, she is a great person, but she passed away years ago. you are like my mother,” the woman said, “ thank you. If you want to visit me,Ill tell you my story.” Then the woman left. After a long pause, I drove the taxi to go home.Paragraph 2 The next day, I was on my way to visit her. The old woman told me that she used to be a millionaire. She became immersed in making money. She was the owner of a particular building we saw last night. But she neglected her family. her only son died one year ago because of cancer. She sold everything to save him, but failed. How sad！ At last, the old woman said to me, “Life is short, but please be in no hurry. Though everyone has to earn money to make a living, always remember that family is the most important thing to you,” I said nothing but nodded hard.读后续写练习（六）Many years ago, when I was fresh out of school and working in Denver, I was driving to my parents home in Missouri for Christmas. I stopped at a gas station(加油站)about 50 miles from Oklahoma City, where I was planning to stop and visit a friend. While I was standing in line at the cash register(收款台), I said hello to an older couple who were also paying for gas. I took off, but had gone only a few miles when black smoke poured from the back of my car. I stopped and wondered what I should do. A car pulled up behind me. It was the couple I had spoken to at the gas station. They said they would take me to my friends .We chatted on the way into the city, and when I got out of the car, the husband gave me his business card. I wrote him and his wife a thank-you note for helping me. Soon afterward, I received a Christmas present from them. Their note that came with it said that helping me had made their holidays meaningful. Years later, I drove to a meeting in a nearby town in the morning. In late afternoon I returned to my car and found that Id left the lights on all day, and the battery(电池)was dead. Then I noticed that the Friendly Ford dealership - a shop selling cars - was right next door. I walked over and found two salesmen in the showroom.注意：1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1 I entered the shop, and one of the salesman came to me. Paragraph 2 After a while, they quickly drove a pickup truck to my car and started it. Possible answer:Paragraph 1 I entered the shop, and one of the salesman came to me. I recognized him at once. the two salesmen were the older couple, and they were the owners of the Friendly Ford dealership. “ Hey, its you! you ever helped me, remember?” I said to them excitedly. Yeah, we do!” the old man laughed, we run the shop to help more people. you know, it makes our life so meaningful!”Paragraph 2 After a while, they quickly drove a pickup truck to my car and started it. they solved my trouble once again, but when I paid for it, they would not accept my money. they told me that when they ran the shop at first, no one had ever taken the time to write them and say thank you, but now they received more and more thank-you notes from people, which they were really happy about.读后续写练习（七）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 Jack, a clerk at the local bank, was wandering alone on the street. It was a cold, silent winter night. His mind was on his wife Linda, who had been in a car accident two months ago and was now lying in a hospital bed, waiting for more money for her operation. Jack had sold everything he had, and he had tried his best to borrow money from all the people and banks he could. But the real world is cruel. A large amount of money was still needed. To Jack, it would mean a great deal of suffering to see his wife die without any help. “I have only one option left,” Jack said to himself. Then he went the bank, his workplace, again. For several days, he observed the bank and planned a theft. The next day, he went to work as usual. Everything seemed normal: he joked with his workmates and helped his clients as he always did. But no one noticed that he had brought a bigger suitcase to work, instead of the small one he always carried. At 5:00 pm, the bank closed, and the clerks and the guards had all gone home. However, at that moment, Jack was in the bathroom, He first cut the lines of the alarms and monitors with tools from his new suitcase. He was all too familiar with the equipment since he had been working there for 8 years and had been studying the security system for the past 30 days. Using a special key and some other tools, he then easily opened the doors of the safes, The banks security system wasnt very good, which allowed Jack to take a lot of money. Several minutes later, Jack left the bank with a heavy bag filled with money.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已成为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1: After Jack had been gone from the bank for a while, the alarms began to ring.Paragraph 2: But the most unlucky man was the manger of the bank, an old man. 【解析】本文是一篇记叙文。主要叙述了Jack作为银行工作人员，利用职务之便，为了筹钱给妻子动手术，成功地偷走了银行的钱。根据第一段提示，此段应描写银行和社会对此事的反应；根据第二段首句提示，银行经理成为了最不幸的人。尽管Jack为妻子治好了病，但心理上也发生了很大的变化。promise to do sth. 承诺做某事；be busy doing sth. 忙于做某事；as soon as possible 越快越好；as time went by 随着时间的流逝。【解答】范文: After Jack had been gone from the bank for a while, the alarms began to ring. The police arrived at the bank very quickly, only to find no one there. The next day was a really special day for the town, which was filled with newspaper and TV reporters covering the strange theft. The clerks at the bank were busy discussing the case, of course, including Jack. The police could only promise to catch the thieves as soon as possible, even though no clues had been found yet.