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Period 4 训练案训练案(Writing) Unit 6 Im going to study computer science. 写作一写作一: 完成课本P47的3a, 3b练习。写作二写作二: 同学们,在预习案中,很多人都表达了他们的新年愿望和决心。新的一年就要来临了,你准备好了吗?请你以“New Years Resolutions”为题写一篇文章,内容包括: 1. 你的新年决心是什么?2. 你打算如何去实现它们?训练案写作要求写作要求: 1. 不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。2. 语句连贯,注意分段,80词左右。训练案【思路点拨】第一步:审题:人称_ 时态_ 第二步:列提纲。第一人称第一人称训练案一般现在时、一般将来时一般现在时、一般将来时第一段: 开篇点题,告知新年的决心。参考句型: 1. New Year is coming. 2. Im going to makeresolutions. 3. Im going to do a lot of things next year. 训练案第二段: 针对不同决心描述不同的实现方式。参考句型: 1. First, I want to do 2. So I am going to do 3. The first resolution is about第三段: 谈谈对自己的期望。参考句型: I hopewill come true. 训练案第三步: 列出主要的短语。1. 学习弹钢琴_ 2. 提高英语_ 3. 和谈话_ 4. 做运动_ 5. 取得好成绩_ learn to play the piano 训练案improve Englishhave conversations with /talk withplay sportsget good grades6. 吃更健康的食物_ 7. 练习跳舞_ 8. 加入舞蹈俱乐部_ 9. 改善和的关系_ 第四步: 运用and, or, so, first, then等连接词将以上要点连成文章,并注意句型多样化。 eat healthier food训练案practice dancing join the dancing clubimprove ones relationships with【小试牛刀小试牛刀】New Years Resolutions_ 训练案New Years Resolutions New Year is coming. Im going to do a lot of things next year. First, I want to improve my English, so Im going to practice it very hard and have many conversations with my English friends. 训练案 Then, I want to take part in the sports meeting and get good grades, so Im going to do sports every day, such as swimming and running. At the same time, Im going to eat healthier food instead of junk food. Next, I want to join the dancing club, so Im going to practice dancing twice a week. 训练案 Finally, I want to improve my relationships with my family. Im going to spend more time with them at weekends and talk with them more often. I hope my resolutions can come true in the coming year. 训练案(作文评分细则与标准请参照本书最后一页)训练案作文等级1315分1012分79分46分03分评分员签名老师评分勾选()谢谢观看!
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