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写作技法点拨系列七、精研材料, 轻松驾驭提纲作文【核心点拨【核心点拨】常用句型常用句型1. 开篇句开篇句(1)With the development of. . . 随着随着的发展的发展(2)I am of the opinion that both arguments hold some truth. 我认为两种观点都有点道理。我认为两种观点都有点道理。(3)At present, there is a widespread concern that teenagers using mobile phones in school will affect their study. 目前目前, 人们普遍担心青少年在学校使用手机会影响他们人们普遍担心青少年在学校使用手机会影响他们的学习。的学习。(4)I am very glad to have the chance to speak here. 我很高兴有机会在这里演讲。我很高兴有机会在这里演讲。2. 连接句连接句(1)Among all the given reasons, one should be focused. 在给出的所有原因中在给出的所有原因中, 有一点必须被强调。有一点必须被强调。(2)The main reason why. . . is that. . . 的主要原因是的主要原因是(3)Another consideration in this case is that. . . 对这种情况的另一种考虑是对这种情况的另一种考虑是(4)Besides, we shouldnt neglect that. . . 此外此外, 我们不应该忽视我们不应该忽视3. 结尾句结尾句(1)If we do those things well, we will be able to grow up happily and healthily. 如果我们把那些事情做好如果我们把那些事情做好, 我们就能够快乐健康地成长。我们就能够快乐健康地成长。(2)Only in this way can we live in harmony with nature. 只有以这种方式我们才能与大自然和谐相处。只有以这种方式我们才能与大自然和谐相处。(3)In short, we live in an age full of challenges. 总之总之, 我们生活在一个充满挑战的时代。我们生活在一个充满挑战的时代。(4)I hope these measures would help deal with these problems and have a good effect on our education. 我希我希望这些措施能帮助解决这些问题并且对我们的教育有望这些措施能帮助解决这些问题并且对我们的教育有良好的影响。良好的影响。【典题示例【典题示例】(2016全国卷全国卷)假定你是李华假定你是李华, 与留学生朋友与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店约好一起去书店, 因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件, 内容包括内容包括: 1. 表示歉意表示歉意; 2. 说明原因说明原因; 3. 另约时间。另约时间。注意注意: 1. 词数词数100左右左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。以使行文连贯。【审题谋篇【审题谋篇】文章体裁文章体裁应用文应用文中心人称中心人称第一人称第一人称I, we; 第二人称第二人称you主要时态主要时态一般现在时一般现在时信息要点信息要点1. 与留学生朋友与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店约好一起去书店; 2. 因故不能赴约写邮件表示歉意因故不能赴约写邮件表示歉意; 3. 说明原因说明原因, 另约时间。另约时间。【词句构建【词句构建】1. 词汇词汇汉语汉语一般词汇一般词汇高级词汇高级词汇参加会议参加会议have a meeting_带来麻烦带来麻烦bring trouble_动身动身start_闲着闲着free_attend a meetingcause troubleset outavailable2. 句式句式我们可以早些动身这样我们就有更多的时间来阅读、我们可以早些动身这样我们就有更多的时间来阅读、选书。选书。一般表达一般表达: We can start early so well have more time to read and choose books. 高级表达高级表达: We can _early _well have more time to read and _ books. (用高级词汇代替用高级词汇代替start, so, choose)set outso thatselect如果你不方便的话如果你不方便的话, 告诉我一个最适合你的时间。告诉我一个最适合你的时间。一般表达一般表达: If its not convenient for you, let me know what is your most suitable time. 高级表达高级表达: _, let me know what time suits you best. (状语从句省略状语从句省略)If not下周放学后我都有空。下周放学后我都有空。一般表达一般表达: I will be free any time after school next week. 高级表达高级表达: I _any time after school next week. (高级词汇代替高级词汇代替free)should be available【连句成篇【连句成篇】Dear Bob, Im sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble. Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that well have more time to read and select books. If its convenient for you, lets meet at 8: 30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week. Yours, Li Hua【即时应用【即时应用】(2016天津高考天津高考)假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。一批来自假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在现在, 他们即将回国他们即将回国, 你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。下提示写一篇发言稿。(1)回顾双方的交流活动回顾双方的交流活动(如学习、生活、体育、文如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面艺等方面); (2)谈谈收获或感想谈谈收获或感想; (3)表达祝愿与期望。表达祝愿与期望。注意注意: (1)词数词数100左右左右; (2)可适当加入细节可适当加入细节, 使内容充实、行文连贯使内容充实、行文连贯; (3)开头和结尾已给出开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。不计入总词数。Dear friends, How time flies! _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _Thank you. 【参考范文【参考范文】Dear friends, How time flies! It has been two weeks since you came to our school for the exchange program, which has benefited all of us. During the past two weeks, we have studied in the same classroom and lived in the same dormitory, which has enabled us to know each other better. Doing the same sports on the playground gives us the opportunity to promote our friendship. What impresses us most are your art skills, in which you showed outstanding talent. We believe that the students in our school have learned a lot from the exchange program. At last, on behalf of all the students in our school, I wish you will have a safe and happy journey home and that there will be more programs like this in the future. Thank you.
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