人教版高中英语必修三unit3写作课训练(1课件)

Task one: Dictation(the words and phrases we can use in this lesson)I. Check the words 1. oxygen n. 2. gravity n. 3. spaceship n 4. pull n&vt 5. watch out vi. 6. universe n. 7. solar system n. 8. astronomy n. 9. rocket n. 10. explore vt. 11. theory n. 12. frighten vt. 13. puzzle n&vt7vi. 14. physicist n. 15. float n&vt7vi. Writing A letter to Stephen HawkingGoals:1.Write a letter about asking/giving suggestions.2.Describe problems and the way you overcome them.3.The more new words you can use in this letter, the better.Stephen Hawking霍金霍金 born in 1942 British physicist He needs a nurse everytime.If he was Hawking,-Look at the pictures! (If one of them was Hawking,)Imagine what would be like if Hawking will have a space trip alone.1.What kind of difficulties will he meet?2.What is the most important thing he must pay attention to?3.Can you give him some suggestions? 书信写作的五点要求：书信写作的五点要求：1、开门见山说意图2、咨询/ 建议1、2、3、3、不同内容可分段4、感谢客气不可少5、期待回信成老套 （三）开头段：（三）开头段：1)Dear Sir/ Mr. XX, My name is XX, a high school student in china. I am writing to you because-2）询问： My difficulty is-/What I find difficult is-My trouble is-/What worries me is-3）建议：）建议：My suggestion/ advice is-/What I would suggest/ advise is-I want to tell you that-/What I want to say is-4)期盼回信： （1）I look forward to your reply/letter/response. （3）I expect to hear from you very soon. （4）I hope to receive your reply/letter shortly.Self-reflection Do you think you have learned a lot from the above steps ？Compared with the possible version, what deficiency does your writing have ？1. 语言表达有错误语言表达有错误(汉语式英语汉语式英语)。2. 要点要点描述混乱，层次不清晰描述混乱，层次不清晰。 3. 固定结构固定结构掌握不准确。掌握不准确。 4. 标点符号使用不正确。标点符号使用不正确。5. 不能巧妙使用关联词不能巧妙使用关联词。6. 高级词汇、句型使用少，句式单一。高级词汇、句型使用少，句式单一。7. 有单词拼写错误，有单词拼写错误，书写书写乱。乱。