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第二部分第二部分 高频话题写作指导高频话题写作指导九年级（全）九年级（全）Units 13-14学校生活学校生活写作导图写作导图 从广西近五年从广西近五年“学校生活学校生活”相关话题的相关话题的书面表达来看，其主要涉及的命题角度为：书面表达来看，其主要涉及的命题角度为：高中生活的畅想及打算和课余生活，如：高中生活的畅想及打算和课余生活，如：2014年河池以年河池以“My life in the high school”为为题，畅想自己的高中生活；题，畅想自己的高中生活；2013年玉林以年玉林以“丰富多彩的课余生活丰富多彩的课余生活”为话题进行描述；为话题进行描述；2011年贵港以书信的方式汇报自己的学习情年贵港以书信的方式汇报自己的学习情况和高中生况和高中生活的打算。同时，从全国近五年的命题活的打算。同时，从全国近五年的命题方向可知，该话题还可从方向可知，该话题还可从“学校的体育学校的体育运动运动”、“学校的安全教育学校的安全教育”、“学校学校的校纪校规的校纪校规”等角度设题。以（等角度设题。以（2014年年河池）为例：河池）为例：peaceful, beautiful, quiet, be colorful with the flower and grass, wide, brightcampusOut-of-class activitiesMy life in the high schoolknowledge, kind, be strict with, care forhelpful, get along well, kindlearn by oneself, group work, work hardtake an active part in, colorful, wonderful, all kinds of, keep fitstudystudentsteachers亮点句型速成亮点句型速成常用句型常用句型：The homework is very difficult, but we must finish it.推荐句型推荐句型: The homework is so difficult. But we must try to do it by ourselves and finish it on time. No matter how difficult the homework is, we must try to do it by ourselves and finish it on time.推荐句型：推荐句型：I feel terrible today for I failed again in the math exam.How terrible I feel today! I failed again in the math exam.常用句型：常用句型：I feel very sad today, because I didnt pass the math exam again.开头句开头句：1. My high school life will be colorful and wonderful.2. Hello, I am. in No.1 Middle School!中间句中间句：1. Its difficult but interesting. 2. I take the subway to school and it takes 25 minutes.3. The early bus takes him to school. 4. The bus ride usually takes about 25 minutes. 5. Last weeks talent show in our class was a great success.6. Studying grammar is a great way to learn a language.7. I have learned a lot by that way.8. We have a lot of rules at my school/home. 9. You have given me so much help that I will never forget.10. The school life is very busy and exciting. There are many activities in our school, such as. 结尾句：结尾句：1. Our school is clean and beautiful. There are many trees and flowers around.2. Our teachers have taught us a lot. They not only teach us how to learn, but also teach us how to be a useful person in society.典例剖析典例剖析（2014河池）河池） 三年的初中生活即将结束，你马上就三年的初中生活即将结束，你马上就要进入高中学习，请以要进入高中学习，请以My life in the high school 为题，根据下表所提供的信为题，根据下表所提供的信息和提示词，用英语写一篇小短文，畅息和提示词，用英语写一篇小短文，畅想自己未来的高中生活。想自己未来的高中生活。内容要点内容要点校园校园1. 校园（校园（campus）宁静而美丽，）宁静而美丽，教室宽敞明亮，是学习的好地方。教室宽敞明亮，是学习的好地方。老师老师2. 老师知识渊博，严格要求学生又老师知识渊博，严格要求学生又关爱学生。关爱学生。内容要点内容要点同学同学3. 与同学友好相处与同学友好相处。学习学习4. 自主学习和积极参与小组学习，自主学习和积极参与小组学习，力争学习取得进步力争学习取得进步 。课外活动课外活动 5. 积极参加各种课外活动，保持身积极参加各种课外活动，保持身体健康。体健康。提示词：提示词： peaceful（宁静的），（宁静的），knowledgeable（知识渊博的），宽敞明（知识渊博的），宽敞明亮（亮（wide and bright）, care for（关爱），（关爱），learn by oneself（自主学习），（自主学习），take an active part in（积极参加），（积极参加），group work（小组学习），（小组学习），out-of-class activities（课外活动）（课外活动）要求要求: 1. 短文必须陈述你的高中校园、老师、同学、短文必须陈述你的高中校园、老师、同学、学习和课外活动五个方面的内容，每个方面用学习和课外活动五个方面的内容，每个方面用23句话表述；句话表述； 2. 所给的提示词都必须用上（可适当发挥），所给的提示词都必须用上（可适当发挥），词数词数80左右（不含已给出句子的词数）；左右（不含已给出句子的词数）； 3. 短文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名；短文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名； 4. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。My life in the high school My junior school will be over. And Im going to my high school in September. I think my high school life will be colorful and meaningful. The campus of my high school will_ Wonderful high school life! I cant wait!【审题指导审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，提取信息：细读所给的文字提示，提取信息：1.1.短文必须陈述你的高中校园、老师、同学、短文必须陈述你的高中校园、老师、同学、学习和课外活动五个方面的内容，每个方面学习和课外活动五个方面的内容，每个方面用用2-32-3句话表述，写作时用第一人称。句话表述，写作时用第一人称。2.2.应使用一般将来时。应使用一般将来时。3.3.词数词数8080词左右，不得出现真实姓名、校名词左右，不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。和地名。【范文点评范文点评】My life in the high school My junior school will be over. And Im going to m y h i g h s c h o o l i n September. I think my high school life will be colorful and meaningful.展望高中生展望高中生活会很有意义、活会很有意义、丰富多彩。丰富多彩。colorful和和meaningful充充分体现了作者分体现了作者对高中生活的对高中生活的憧憬。憧憬。 The campus of my high school will be peaceful and beautiful. The classroom will be wide and bright. It must be a good place to study. The teachers will be know-ledgeable. They will be strict with the students but they care for them, too. I will get along well with分别从校园、分别从校园、老师、同学、学老师、同学、学习、课外活动几习、课外活动几个方面介绍自己个方面介绍自己的高中生活。介的高中生活。介绍 中 运 用 了绍 中 运 用 了peaceful and beautiful, wide and bright, be knowledgeable, my classmates. I will learn by myself and take an active part in group work. And I will try my b e s t t o m a k e b i g progress. I will take part in all kinds of out-of-class activities and keep fit.get along well with, learn by myself , take an，active part in, make big progress, keep fit等短语，等短语，使文章的表现力使文章的表现力更加丰富。更加丰富。Wonderful high school life! I cant wait！总结全文，说总结全文，说明自己的高中生明自己的高中生活将会很精彩。活将会很精彩。
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