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书面表达突破(五)阐述主体类原题再现据统计,目前我国有数以百万计的中学生在国外求学。面对中学生“出国热”这一现象,社会对此有不同的看法。请你以“Studying Abroad”为题,写一篇短文简单分析这一现象并谈谈自己的看法。注意：词数为100左右。写作模板学生习作Nowadays, there are more and more现象. It is estimated that现象的具体数据. Why have there been so many现象？ Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows： The first one is原因1. The second one is 原因2. In my opinion,我的观点If支持自己观点的理由 Studying AbroadNowadays,there are more and more middle school students studying abroad. It is estimated that tens of thousands of Chinese students are studying in foreign countries. Why have there been so many middle school students studying abroad? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows： The first one is that many parents believe that education abroad is far better than the domestic. And at least students can learn the foreign language faster and better. The second one is that many people in our country have become much wealthier than before. They have the money to send their children to study abroad. In my opinion, sending children studying abroad is not a bad matter.If they like to study there,they can acquire a lot of things.名师点评本文是用三段论的方式进行写作的,第一段提出问题,其中用了It is estimated that.和Why have.等较为复杂的句式；第二段说明理由,用词确切,如far better than the domestic应为较高级的词汇；第三段发表自己的看法,使用了含有条件状语从句的复合句,使文章的档次得以提高。总之,该文要点齐全,符合要求,但美中不足的是第三段中sending children.matter若改为it is not a bad matter sending children studying abroad 则更常见一些。仿写训练请你围绕“建设节约型社会,从我做起”的主题,根据下面的要点提示,用英语写一封倡议书。要点如下：1节约用水,避免不必要的浪费；2节约用电,离开时确保关掉灯及其他电器；3节约纸张等学习用品；4提醒父母及亲朋好友节约能源。注意：1词数为100左右；2倡议书的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数；3内容可适当发挥,要注意行文连贯。Dear fellow students,Our government is aiming to build an “economized society” 【参考范文】Dear fellow students,Our government is aiming to build an “economized society”I think it is every citizens duty to achieve this goal.As middle school students,what should we do?We should focus our attention on details in our life.We should form the habit of saving water,especially when we brush our teeth and wash hands,and never leave water running unnecessarily.Meanwhile,we ought to save electricity.Whenever we leave classrooms or our homes,make sure that the lights and some electrical equipment have been turned off.Never keep the lights on in the daytime if unnecessary.We should also save every piece of paper as well as other materials.Whats more,we should remind our relatives and good friends as well as our parents to save energy.Dear fellow students,lets spare no effort to take action.补偿练习1完形填空Our teacher,Miss Chua,is nearing retirement.However,she still commands our great 1 for being an excellent teacher.She has short hair that is gradually 2 white,an indication that age is creeping on her.The wrinkles (皱纹) that line her face 3 of years of hard work and selfless devotion to her students.She wears a pair of glasses through which her kind eyes are always 4 fixed upon us with affection and consideration.She looks splendid in her 5 clothes which she will not throw away for something more 6 ,reflecting a thrifty (节俭的) nature.Through her,we have learned to be more careful with 7 .Not only that,she has also taught us the 8 of filial duty (孝道) by setting us a good 9 of looking after her eightyfive years old mother.All her life,she has never 10 her duty towards her family and her students.For much of her life,she has been working hard,displaying a 11 of discipline and an attitude of industry which she is presently 12 to fix in our mind.As her parents could not afford to 13 her to university,she saved hard and managed to graduate 14 a master degree from a British university.This is an inspiration to usthat absolute 15 leads to eventual fulfillment of dreams.Miss Chua is totally committed to the 16 of her students.Armed with a keen insight into the teaching process,she never fails to 17 our minds and most important,her gift to us has been the development of a good 18 of English.The day when Miss Chua 19 school and retires,I will send her a thousand flowers with the message “Youve 20 us well.” I will never forget her.She has made a great impact on my life and on my English.1A.support Battention Crespect Dview答案C解析根据下文的描述可知这位老师是一位各方面都很优秀的老师,因此应该得到我们的尊敬(respect)。2A.changing Bturning Cappearing Dshowing答案B解析老师年龄大了,因此头发渐渐变白了。turn white变白。3A.tell Bspeak Ctalk Dthink答案B解析本题容易误选A项。tell of宣布,不符合题意。本题应该选择speak of表示“表明,说明”,这里是指她脸上的皱纹表明了她多年的辛劳和无私的奉献。4A.sharply Bsuddenly Cgenerally Dgently答案D解析从下文的“with affection”可知老师的目光是温柔的。5A.matching Bexpensive Cdry Dnew答案A解析从下文的“a thrifty nature”可知老师是节俭的,因此她的穿着打扮很朴素得体。matching相称的；协调的。6A.valuable Bfashionable Ccomfortable Davailable答案B解析根据下文的“reflecting a thrifty nature”可知她很节俭,不会去追求时髦。7A.friends Bstudies Ctime Dmoney答案D解析从很节俭的老师身上学生应该学到的是不乱花钱：be more careful with money。8A.virtue Blesson Cmethod Dtechnique答案A解析孝敬老人也是老师教给学生的一种美德。virtue品德;美德。9A.goal Bexample Cpattern Dstandard答案B解析老师以自己的实际行动给学生树立了一个孝敬老人的典范。set sb.a good example给某人树立一个好榜样。10A.performed Bdone Cignored Dhad答案C解析老师一生中都没有忽视过她对家庭和学生的责任。ignore忽视。11A.process Bneed Cseries Dsense答案D解析老师对工作的态度展示了一种纪律观念(a sense of discipline)。12A.trying Bwilling Clearning Dgetting答案A解析老师在教学中努力让我们牢记它们。因此应该选择trying。13A.send Baccompany Ctake Dbring答案A解析老师读书时家里很穷,供不起她去读大学。故选A项。14A.upon Bto Cfor Dwith答案D解析graduate with a master degree毕业时获得了硕士学位。15A.development Bdetermination Cdecoration Ddistinction答案B解析她靠自己的决心成功地实现了自己的梦想。16A.talent Bsuccess Cexperience Dentertainment答案B解析她对学生的成功尽心尽力。17A.charge BconcentrateCchallenge Dchange答案C解析从上句可知老师对教学有很深的洞察力,因此选C项。challenge our minds指挑战我们的思维能力。18A.appreciation BwritingCcommand Dskill答案C解析在她的教育下我们对英语知识的掌握有了很大的进步。command掌握。19A.leaves BentersCquits Dattends答案A解析老师退休离开学校的那天。20A.protected BshowedCguarded Dguided答案D解析老师对学生的教育是通过引导(guide)的方式。补偿练习2短文改错1(2009温江第二次模拟)One day Mr. White made a very nice models plane.1.modelsmodelAll his children liked it very much and wanted to play it2.play后加withfirst. They quarreled as they could not agree with 3.each other. Mr. White thought hard and then he has4.hashadan idea. He got his children together, said “This plane5.saidsaying或said前加andis only for best child. He or she never quarrels with Mother6.best前加theand always helps doing housework.”The children looked7.doingdoat him sad when they heard their fathers words. Then they8.sadsadlyhad an idea. The eldest brother said, “We think of it is only9.去掉offor you, Dad!”With the word, the children ran away.10.wordwords2(2009太原第二次模拟)What happens to me that day is just unbelievable. The first1.happenshappenedthing to go wrong was all the parking spaces were taken, so I2.was后加thathad to park on the grass and hoped that I wouldnt get parking3.get后加a/theticket. When I went to the admission office, it was already a4.ittherelong line of students waiting. At the time it was my turn, two of5.AtBythe course I needed were filled, so I had to go back to my advisor6.coursecoursesand make out a whole new timetable. Although I do sign up for7.dodidall my courses, but I missed my lunch. The next thing to go wrong8.去掉butwas that the bookstore had sold out all the textbooks required. I was9.wondering what else could possible happen when I saw a policeman10.possiblepossiblystanding beside my car and writing out a ticket.
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