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TaskThe person who has influenced me most !Who is the person influenced you most? My grandfather!He is Michael Jackson!My math teacher Jack.Pre-writingfriendlycleverfairpatientcuriouspolitecreativekindhard-workingPre-writing* Who has influenced the writer most?* How old is her father?* What is her father like?* What has her father done since 1990?* What surprised the author?* What does the author realize now?Her father.He is in his fifty.She realizes that her father has a heart full of love.He is kind and helpful.He has donated blood many times.Her father has decided to donate his body for medical research after his death.Mr Wu is asking each of the Class 1, Grade 9 students to write about the person who has influenced him or her most. He shows them an article. Answer the following questions.A ARead the article and summarize(总结总结) the main points about the writers father.WhoWhat does he/she look likeWhat is special about him/herWhat do you think of him/herWhat has he/she donePre-writingRead and summarize. Para2 a person who has influenced me mostPara2Para1Para3Para4Part 1Part 2Part 3While-writingFind out the structure(结构结构). Para1Para2Para3Para4general information about the personqualities and examples opinions about the personWriting Tip1:We can use some examples to support our ideas.Look through the article again and underline some useful expressions: is the person who has influenced me most. is in his/her twenties/ thirties/ forties/You will not find anything unusual about him/her until has always been kind/ helpful/To my surprise, When I was a little girl/boy, I could not understandNow I realize thatWhile-writing 1. My father is in his fifties.in one s fifties 在五十多岁时在五十多岁时（fifties 前前可插入可插入 early, late, mid-, middle）类似表达：类似表达：in ones teens/ twenties/ thirties/ forties/ 她有二十五、六岁。她有二十五、六岁。 She was in her mid-twenties. 他当时已经快八十岁了。他当时已经快八十岁了。 He was then in his late seventies. PractisePractise用所给单词的适当形式填空。用所给单词的适当形式填空。The most _ (surprise) thing is that he has been fired after working there for only half a month.句中的句中的to everyones surprise意为意为“令大家惊令大家惊讶的是讶的是”。 令我吃惊的是，他没有告诉我就去日本了。令我吃惊的是，他没有告诉我就去日本了。To my surprise, he went to Japan without telling me.PractisesurprisingWhile-writingWhich kind of person has influenced you most?1. pop stars 2. sports stars3. movie stars 4. your family members5. your friends 6. policeman7. soldiers 8. 1. 整体性：结构清晰（如：是否分段），正确使整体性：结构清晰（如：是否分段），正确使用标点符号，书写端正。用标点符号，书写端正。2. 优美性：语句连贯、优美（如：使用一些关联优美性：语句连贯、优美（如：使用一些关联词，时间状语，形容词，副词等）。词，时间状语，形容词，副词等）。3. 完整性：要点齐全，适当拓展。完整性：要点齐全，适当拓展。4. 准确性：语法正确，语句通顺。准确性：语法正确，语句通顺。How to write a good article?Post-writing Writing Tip2:评 价 要 素分值 15内内 容容要点齐全，条理清晰，有观点，有要点齐全，条理清晰，有观点，有支撑事例支撑事例7表表 达达时态正确，语句通顺时态正确，语句通顺,句子优美句子优美5细细 节节单词拼写，大小写，标点正确，书单词拼写，大小写，标点正确，书写端正写端正3Post-writing HomeworkHomework1. Finish the article.2. Preview the new words and expressions in Unit 5.
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