2018秋冀教版八年级上册英语作业课件：Unit5 单元同步作文指导

Unit 5 My Future 冀教版 单元同步作文指导 本单元话题是谈论未来本单元话题是谈论未来，所以常用将来时态或表示推测的情态动词。本单所以常用将来时态或表示推测的情态动词。本单元的话题作文常见的有谈论未来的职业、梦想、生活元的话题作文常见的有谈论未来的职业、梦想、生活，或者谈未来的朋友、或者谈未来的朋友、家人以及为了实现未来的梦想给自己或他人的建议。在谈论未来时可以和现家人以及为了实现未来的梦想给自己或他人的建议。在谈论未来时可以和现在的生活进行比较在的生活进行比较，所以也常用到比较级。所以也常用到比较级。 话题概述 请根据下表提示请根据下表提示，以“以“My Dream”为题写一篇英语作文为题写一篇英语作文，在英语课上交在英语课上交流。流。 典题回放 Dream I want to be. Reasons Be interested in.good at. Ways to achieve my dream Work hard at school； Find out how successfully people did it. 注意：短文必须包括以上三部分内容，需要陈述理由和方式。表中右栏仅供参考，也可以发挥；词数80 左右。 1明确审题：这是一篇书写个人未来梦想的作文。明确审题：这是一篇书写个人未来梦想的作文。 2分析要点：分析要点：1) 梦想是什么；梦想是什么； 2) 为什么会有这样的梦想；为什么会有这样的梦想； 3) 如何实现自己的梦想。如何实现自己的梦想。 3选定人称：主要是第一人称。选定人称：主要是第一人称。 4确定时态：一般现在时。确定时态：一般现在时。 写作指导 本单元写作中常用的句型或表达：本单元写作中常用的句型或表达： 1Maybe I will . 2I want /hope/ wish to be a/an. 3I might be a.when I grow up. 4His dream is to be. 5She gave me some advice about the future. 6No matter what happens, I will always be your friends. My dream I want to be a writer.Im interested in writing and good at it.Writing has been part of my life.Through writing, I can find pleasure of life. I can achieve my dream by working hard.It is also important to find out how people did it successfully so that I will be successful quickly.I decide to hold onto my dream till I succeed. 佳作示范 Jim梦想成为一名记者梦想成为一名记者，他认为这是一件有趣的工作。因为他可以认识许他认为这是一件有趣的工作。因为他可以认识许多人多人，他将挣许多钱他将挣许多钱，他将为他父亲买一幢有花园的房子。为了梦想他将努他将为他父亲买一幢有花园的房子。为了梦想他将努力学习和工作。力学习和工作。 请以请以Jims ambition为题写一篇为题写一篇80词左右的作文。词左右的作文。 实战演练 Jims Ambition Jim has an ambition.In the future，he is going to be a reporter.He thinks to be a reporter is very interesting because he is good at talking to people and he would meet many different people.He would make a lot of money and become rich. When he becomes rich，he will buy a big house with a beautiful garden for his parents.And he will buy another small house for himself.He will travel with his friends.Because he thinks friends are very important in his life. So from now on，he will study and work hard to make his dream come true.