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H ow to write a good composition?英语书面表达写作指导By 陈 少 杰 书 面 表 达 基 本 步 骤三个步骤 1、 审 题 文 字 信 息图 画 信 息题 材 、 人 称 、 时 态 、 要 点 、 字 数2、 罗 列 提 纲 ， 提 笔 写 作 ：3、 检 查 修 改 ， 规 范 抄 写 H eadingBodyEnding以 点 及 词 ， 连 词 成 句 ， 联 句 成 篇 高 分 作 文 的 标 准 （ 分 ） ： 完 全 完 成 了 规 定 任 务 ； 覆 盖 所 有 内 容 要 点 ； 应 用 了 较 多 的 语 法 结 构 和 词 汇 ; 语 法 结 构 或 词 汇 方 面 有 些 许 错 误 但 为 尽 力 使用 较 复 杂 或 较 高 级 词 汇 所 致 ， 具 备 了 较 强 的 语 言运 用 能 力 ； 有 效 的 使 用 语 句 间 的 连 接 成 分 ， 使 全 文 结 构紧 凑 ； 完 全 达 到 了 预 期 的 写 作 目 的 1.H eading 2.Body 3.Ending 要 点 齐 全 ,表 述 准 确高 级 词 汇短 语 句 子 结 构多 样 化连 词点 题 ， 概 括 性 的 句 子 ， 引 出 话 题总 结 ， 呼 应 主 题 (12届 福 建 省 质 检 书 面 表 达 )每 个 学 生 都 是 独 特 的 ， 都 有 自 己 的才 能 。 某 英 语 报 为 了 给 学 生 提 供 一 个 展 示 和 交 流 特 长 的 平 台 ,以 My Advantage为 题 向 高 中 学 生 征 文 。 请 你 按 所 给 内 容 要 点 写 一 篇 英 语短 文 应 征 。 内 容 要 点 ： 1.你 所 擅 长 的 某 一 个 方 面 （ 如 唱 歌 、 绘 画 、 某 项 运 动 ） ; 2.你 的 特 长 产 生 的 原 因 ,你 平 时 的 做 法 以 及 收 获 ； 3.你 的 看 法 、 体 会 。 注 意 ： 1 短 文 的 开 头 已 给 出 ， 不 计 入 总 词 数 ； 2 词 数 ： 120左 右 。 My Advantage Im good at _* Explain your ideas correctly:2. I am good at jumping long which makes me pround.1.I am good at3.Therefore， not only can I do well in study， but also I can exercise me and make my body become more strongly.4.I than liking to music.5. As far as Im concerned， singing bring me a different life.6. To my surprise， I had made great progress in studying within a month. As a consequence, I fell in love with running.sing songplay basketballreading book Listening to music？ Explain your ideas correctly:1.I am good at sing songplay basketballreading booklistening to music？ ？ ？ ？ ？r ing bookspl ing basketball 2. I am good at jumping long which makes me pround. the long jumpprou3. Therefore， not only can I do well in study，but also I can exercise me and make my body become more strongly.As a matter of fact，stronger 4.I than liking to music.I prefer music rather than anything else.5. As far as Im concerned， singing bring me a different life.scompletely/thoroughly6. To my surprise, running had made a great contribution to my study within a month. As a consequence, I fell in love with running.From then on， 1、 单 词 选 用 ， 拼 写 要 准 确 2、 句 子 要 避 免 汉 式 英 语 。 3、 词 性 要 分 清 。 4、 句 子 成 分 要 摸 清 。 5、 注 意 前 后 时 态 。 6、 名 词 及 动 词 的 数 要 保 持 一 致 。 Explain your ideas correctly: 1.Therefore， not only can I do well in study， but also I can exercise me and make my body become stronger.As a matter of fact， not only can running build me up and make my body increasingly strong，but also it can bring me a more positive effect on my study in return. 2.I prefer music rather than anything else.To music, my preference is beyond description.My preference to music is beyond anything else/description.Nothing is more into me than singing songs. 句 子 结 构 多 样 化1.感 叹 句2.并 列 句（ and/but/so/for)3.复 合 句4.倒 装 句 5.主 动 句 与 被 动 句6.强 调 句7.with复 合 结 构8.分 词9.虚 拟 语 气利 用 不 同 的 句 型 来 表 达 同 一 个 意 思 ， 能 增 加 文 章 的 文 采 。 Express the same meaning in as many ways as you can.1.I argue: “ Singing songs makes us relaxed and broad-minded.”2.We are confident enough to live a happy life with more than an own advantage.3. I could not sing until 13.One day， I was asked to sing in front of my classmates. How nervous I was then! When I heard the clap from classmates and the appreciate from my teacher ， I became confident. From then on， singing became my favorite. (多 考 虑 一 下 语 法 结 构 或 复 合 从 句 哟 ) 4. Singing gives me a complete confidence and makes me well-received and happy5. I couldnt play basketball until I was 17. 1.I argue， “ Singing songs makes us relaxed and broad-minded.”How relaxed and broad-minded it is to sing songs.What singing gives us is a relaxed mood and a broad mind.It is singing that makes us relaxed and broad-minded.Express the same meaning in as many ways as you can. 2. We are confident enough to live a happy life with more than an own advantage.A happier life will belong to whoever makes full use of his advantages.To live a more splendid life, what we call for is to make best of our advantages.Express the same meaning in as many ways as you can. 3. I could not sing until 13.One day， I was asked to sing in front of my classmates. When I heard the clap from classmates and the appreciate from my teacher ，I became confident. From then on， singing became my favorite. Believe it or not， I dare not sing in public until asked to sing. Hearing encouraging words from dear class-mates， singing gradually strengthened my confidence and eventually became my favorite. 4. Singing gives me a complete confidence and makes me well-received and happyNot only does singing give me a complete confidence，but also it makes me well-received and happyThere is no denying that ,as well as being well-received and happy, singing gives me a complete confidence, which is of the greatest importance.There is no denying that singing gives me a complete confidence， as well as being well-received and happy. 5. I couldnt play basketball until I was seventeen. Not until I was seventeen could I play basketball.It was not until the age of seventeen that I could play basketball.Until seventeen， as I was ever dreaming of, if only I had had a gift for playing basketball. Linking words 排 序 过 渡 性 插 入 语对 称转 折因 果条 件 让 步递 进 排 序 过 渡 性 插 入 语对 称转 折因 果条 件 让 步递 进 firstly, secondly, then, finally/at last , last but not leastI think, Im afraid, you know, As we all know, As is known to us allfor one thing, for the other thing, on one hand, on the other handbut, however, while, though, otherwise, yet, on the other hand, on the contrarybecause, since, as, thanks to, as a result (of),owing to, on account of; so, thus, thereforeso/as long as, on condition that, if, unlessprovided that though, as, even if/though, whether, who (what,when, where)everwhats more, besides, to make the matter worse, whats worse, moreover, in addition, furthermore Fill in the blanks with the following linking words. Im good at singing. ,singing is to me what water is to fish. Dating back to my childhood， I wouldnt have fallen into sound sleep without my mothers sweet childrens songs at the bedtime. Hardly can you imagine the magic influence songs and mum had on me at that time. , _， I could not sing in public until asked to sing. Hearing encouraging words from my dear classmates,_, I opened my mouth and fell in love with singing as well as a confident mood_. _the help from teachers and constant practice, it was last term that I took part in the campus cultural festival and won the second prize. _， everybody is unique and has his advantages in some respects. _that _does singing give me a complete confidence,_ it makes me well received and happy. With my advantages， I am confident to enjoy a more splendid future.As to meBut believe it or notsurprisinglyThanks toAs far as I am concerned not onlybutever since thenThere is no denying Ending总 结 主 要 观 点 、 重 复 开 头 或题 目 、 提 出 结 论 、 引 言In short/in brief/in a word/in conclusion， To sum up,All in all,On the whole, Act as a teacher and underline the good points of the following composition. 书 写 工 整 ， 卷 面 整 洁 的 模 范 卷 书 写 是 否 工 整 清 晰 也 会 影 响 答卷 得 分 。 卷 面 不 整 洁 ， 涂 改 多 ；大 小 写 ;标 点 符 号 ;书 写 不 清 ， 得分 会 很 低 ！ Homework 1. improve your own composition. 2.假 如 你 是 福 建 省 某 中 学 高 三 学 生 李 华 ， 拟 参 加 某 英 语 报 社 组 织 的 “ 畅 想 未 来 ， 规 划 人 生 ” 的 征 文 活 动 。 请 根 据 以 下 内 容 要 点 及 要 求写 一 篇 征 文 稿 。 注 意 ： 1.征 文 应 包 含 以 上 内 容 ， 可 适 当 拓 展 ； 2、 开 头 已 给 出 ， 不 计 入 总 词 数 ； 3、 征 文 中 不 能 出 现 考 生 的 具 体 信 息 ； 4、 词 数 ： 120左 右 。* My Plan for the Future Senior year is coming to an end. It is high time for me to think about my future plan._ 内 容 要 点 ： 1、 规 划 内 容 ； 2、 规 划 理 由 ； 3、 实 现 途 径 ；
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