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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,概要写作,Summary writing,高考新题型,What is a good summary?,概要写作评分标准第五档（,2125points,）：,1.,理解,准确,，涵盖,所有要点,2.,准确,使用相应的,语法结构和词汇,3.,完全,使用,自己的语言,。,(60-80W),4.,有效,地使用了语句间的,连接成分,，使概要结构紧凑,contents(,内容,),language skills(,语言,),structure(,结构,),Once upon a time,industrial goods were made to last forever.If you bought a car or a stove,it was a once-in-a-lifetime investment.You paid good money for it,and you took care of it.,Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldnt last a long time.It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them.This has led directly to the“throw-away society”which is a great waste of the earths resources.Just think of the cars that are traded daily,just because they are out of style.Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is bought.And we shoppers have to pay for that material!,Our industrial society has turned us into spoiled children.This wastefulness has got us into the great trouble we are in now.When we have no resources left,then we will start to take care of what we have.But why cant we act before this happens?Why cant we try to build a society in which the prevention of waste is a virtue?,（,182W,）,Step 1.,Understand the whole passage and grasp the key points.,Once upon a time,industrial goods were made to last forever.If you bought a car or a stove,it was a once-in-a-lifetime investment.You paid good money for it,and you took care of it.,Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldnt last a long time.It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them.This has led directly to the“throw-away society”which is a great waste of the earths resources.Just think of the cars that are traded daily,just because they are out of style.Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is bought.And we shoppers have to pay for that material!,Our industrial society has turned us into spoiled children.This wastefulness has got us into the great trouble we are in now.When we have no resources left,then we will start to take care of what we have.But why cant we act before this happens?Why cant we try to build a society in which the prevention of waste is a virtue?,概要写作难点,1,How to get the key points quickly and correctly?,(,如何快速、准确地捕捉要点,),抓住主题句或关键信息，忽略次要信息,Para 1,：,Once upon a time,industrial goods were made to last forever.If you bought a car or a stove,it was a once-in-a-lifetime investment.You paid good money for it,and you took care of it.,detailed example,忽略具体事例,topic sentence,概要写作难点,2,How to express the key points by using your own words properly?,(,如何灵活诠释，规避抄袭的嫌疑,),characteristics,Once upon a time,industrial goods were made,to last forever,.,_,industrial goods,were made _.,Some time ago;In the past;Decades ago,to be used for a long time,to function well for a long time;durable,近义词替换,You,paid good money for,it,and you,took care of,it.,Decades ago,industrial goods were made,durable.,spent much money on,treasure,treat it kindly,You,spent much money,on,it and,treasure,it.,Decades ago,industrial goods were made,durable,You,spent much money on,it and,treasure,it.,Para1.,use it carefully,Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldnt last a long time.It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them.This has led directly to the“throw-away society”which is a great waste of the earths resources.Just think of the cars that are traded daily,just because they are out of style.Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is bought.And we shoppers have to pay for that material!,topic sentence,detailed examples,characteristics,result,忽略具体事例,Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldnt last a long time.It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them.This has led directly to the“throw-away society”which is a great waste of the earths resources.Just think of the cars that are traded daily,just because they are out of style.Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is bought.And we shoppers have to pay for that material!,1.Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldnt last a long time.2.It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them.3.This has led directly to the“throw-away society”which is a great waste of the earths resources.,Modern Industry,made us believe,convinced,not permanent,Modern industry,has,convince,d,us that products,are,not permanent.,short-lived,近义词替换,2.It is cheaper to throw them away than to,repair them.,To throw them away,is cheaper than to repair them.,It is,more expensive,to repair them than to throw them away.,改变主语（形式主语）,正话反说、反话正说,This has led directly to the“throw-away society”which is a great waste of the earths resources.,which has resulted in,a great waste of the earths resources.,改变句式,result in,Modern industry,has,convince,d,us that prod
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