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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,*,Welcome,to my class!,高三2部,杨晓玉,Welcome,to my class!,高三2部,杨晓玉,H,o,w to make,your,writing,better,?,让你的作文 起来,“亮”,What,is,a good piece of writing?,1.neat writing,书写,2.content,内容,3.structure,结构,4.language,语言,Good first impression,Well organized and smoothly developed,Everything required included,No,Chinglish,No Grammatical mistakes,U,se,good,words,and more,sentence patterns,一，改变句子的开头方式,二，句型转换,A.,合并为简单句,把其中一句改为分词短语,把其中一句改为介词短语,B.,合并为复合句,三，避免只使用一两个句式，,要灵活运用诸如倒装句、,强调句、主从复合句、分词状语,、,with,复合结构等,.,四，注意使用高级词汇,代替一些单词，以增加文采。,Task1:,Make your language better,一,.,改变句子的开头方式，,不要一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。可以把,状语置于句首,.,2.,The boy is very hungry and he hurried home.,Hungry,the boy hurried home,.,.,Task1:,Make your language better,1.,The volleyball players practiced very hard,to win,the match.,To win the match,the volleyball players,practiced very hard,.,二,.,Transformation of sentences in writing,(,写作中的句型转换,),A.,合并为简单句,1.,把其中一句改为分词,He had finished supper.,He went out to have a walk then.,Having finished,supper,he went,out to have a walk.,2,.,把其中一句改为介词短语,He was brought in.His hands were tied behind his back.,He was brought in,his hands tied,behind his back.,with,B.合并为复合句,1.,T,he Chinese artists were to perform here that night.,The news cheered everyone of us.,（同位从）,The news,that the Chinese artists were to,perform here that night,cheered,everyone of us.,2,.,In recent years,Beijing has been advancing very fast.,All these make peoples lives convenient,pleasant and colorful.,（非限制定从）,wh,ich,In recent years,Beijing has been advancing,very fast,makes peoples lives convenient,pleasant,三,.,在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用,以下句型：,倒装句,强调句,主从复合句,分词状语,With,复合结构,.,感叹句,1.,Though he is wealthy,he works hard.,Wealthy,as,he is,he works hard.,In spite of/Despite,his wealth,he works hard.,2.,He didnt get up until 7 oclock.,It was not until,7 oclock,that,he,got up.,Not until,7 oclock,did he,get up.,3,.It is nice to hear from you again.,How nice,to hear from you again,!,2.,I had a good idea.,A good idea,occurred to/struck/came to,/hit,me.,I,came up with,a good idea.,注意使用词组、习语谚语、表强调的词来代替一些单词，以增加文采。,四,.use“complicated/advanced words”,1.,Ill thank you if you think about my application,Ill appreciate it if,you can,take,my application,into,consideration.,一，改变句子的开头方式,二，句型转换,A.,合并为简单句,把其中一句改为分词短语,把其中一句改为介词短语,B.,合并为复合句,三，避免只使用一两个句式，,要灵活运用诸如倒装句、,强调句、主从复合句、分词状语,、,with,复合结构等,.,四，注意使用高级词汇,代替一些单词，以增加文采。,Task1:,Make your language better,Task2:,Make your structure better,文章结构,1.,In conclusion,we should take into account the problem.(结论),2.,Im against smoking for the following reasons.,First,its harmful to ones health.,Second,its a,waste of money to buy cigarettes.,Last but,not least,it causes air pollution.（顺序）,3.,In addition to,the beautiful scenery,tourists can enjoy a variety of activities.（递进）,2.,有效使用,，过渡自然，连贯通顺，使文章结构紧凑。,1.通常使用,段式。,三,连接词,逻辑角度,合适的过渡性词汇,时间顺序,first,，,second,，,then,，,finally,at last,，,immediately,，,suddenly,，,soon,空间顺序,here,，,there,，,On one side,，,On the other side,，,in front of,，,at the back of,，,next to,对称关系,For one thing,，,for another,，,On the one hand,，,On the other hand,转折关系,but,，,however,，,while,，,though,，,otherwise,因果关系,because,，,since,，,as,，,thanks to,，,as a result(of),条件关系,As long as,，,so long as,，,On condition that,，,if,unless,让步关系,though,，,as,，,even if,though,，,whether,who(what,，,when,，,where)-ever,递进关系,whats more,，,besides,，,to make matters worse,，,whats worse,过渡性插入语,I think,，,Im afraid,，,you know,，,as we all know,A.,Second,twenty years ago,teenagers listened to music with tape recorders.Differently,today we use mp3,mp4 and even mp5 which are easy to take.,B.,Another change is in communication.Instead of writing letters,teenagers nowadays prefer writing e-mails or calling to keep in touch with friends.,C.,First,teenagers of twenty years ago learn from Lei,Feng,and Zhang Haidi,while now we consider Bill Gates and as our role models.,D.,What great changes they are!,E.,Great changes have taken place in teenagers life during the past twenty years.,right order:_,E C A B D,Example:,国外某网站举办新的一轮网上讲座活动，正面向全球中学生征集话题。假设你是新华中学的学生李华，经常访问该网站。现请你用英文给该网站发送一封电子邮件，向其推荐话题。内容包括,:,自我介绍,写信目的,话题：我们应该感恩（,thankful).,推荐理由,预祝活动成功,注意：,1.,词数,100,左右,;2.,邮件格式已为你给出；,3.,邮件出不能出现本人信息；,4.,在答题卡上作答。,My name is Li,Hua,.I am a student and I study in,XinHua,Middle School.I often visit your web,and from it I know you are finding themes from students all over the world.Now,I write this letter because I want to,recommand,a theme.,We should,be,thankful is a good topic.Our father and mother throw thick and thin raise us,we should be thankful to them.Our teachers teach us how to study,leading a lot of knowledge into our head.we should thank to them.as a Chinese,we shoul
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