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Click to edit Master title style,Edit Master text styles,Second level,Third level,Fourth level,Fifth level,留学文书写作技巧全解,问题（一）：特点不清,中国学生总是给美国招生官造成选择困难。,团队精神（美国）,（,Teamwork,）,VS,人多力量大（中国）,Earth. Fire. Wind. Water. Heart!,Captain Planet,supposes that the world is made up of these five elements. Were familiar with the previously-noted set and with actual elements like hydrogen, oxygen, and carbon, but select and explain another small group of things (say, under five) that you believe compose our world.,人多力量大,中国,团队精神,美国,美国招生官希望申请人是这样的,而中国学生写的文书是这样的,总结：,你可以是怪物，但不能没特点。,问题（二）：素材不足,中国学生容易在自身特点的方向上素材薄弱，竞争力不足。,素材的数量和质量，就是你在这个方向上的高度。,总结：,你在你的特点上，算不算一号人物？,问题（三）：思想性弱,Old,Reflect on a time when you challenged a belief or idea. What prompted you to,act,?,New,Reflect on a time when you questioned or challenged a belief or idea. What prompted your,thinking,?,Old,Discuss an accomplishment or event, formal or informal, that marked your transition from childhood to adulthood within your culture, community, or family.,New,Discuss an accomplishment, event, or,realization,that sparked a period of personal growth and a,new understanding,of yourself and others.,Old,N/A,New,Describe a,topic, idea or concept,you find so engaging that it makes you lose all track of time. Why does it,captivate,you?,The lateNew York Timesphotographer Bill Cunningham once said Fashion is the armor to survive the reality of everyday life. I dont think you could do away with it. It would be like doing away with civilization. Tell us about your “armor.”,总结：,用思想的高度，,撬开名校大门。,问题（四）：,预示性差,总结：,好的文书，能把你散落在过去、现在和未来的珠子（个人经历），串连成美丽的项链。,问题（五）：方向模糊,“其实,你在,哈佛的本科四年里，我们最担心的就是学生能不能找到他愿意为之付出一生的方向”,。,福斯特（哈佛大学校长）,Explain your interest in the major you selected and describe how you have recently explored or developed this interest inside and/or outside the classroom. You may also explain how this major relates to your future career goals.,UIUC 2017-2018,年主文书题目,“,我们在阅读学生文书的时候，最感兴趣的就是他们如何表述他们的学术兴趣与方向,”,。,约翰,霍普金斯大学招生官,Why are you drawn to studying the major you have selected? Please discuss how your interests and related experiences have influenced your choice.,-Cornell Admissions Essay,特点挖掘,素材产出,思想深化,产生连接,未来方向,问题（六）：写作技巧,孵化系统,素材提升,线下顾问,优质文书,棒呆文书孵化服务简介,传统顾问服务,单顾问,顾问受其专业知识局限,单一的线下人工模式,头脑风暴时间有限,文书素材时常不足,费用：,20,万以上,棒呆文书孵化服务,多顾问,微课覆盖所有学科专业,线下,+,线上高效模式,系统内无限头脑风暴,素材产出量增加三倍,费用：,6,万,文书孵化一条龙服务，解决文书的所有难题：,确定方向,挖掘特质,产出素材,深化思想,连接未来,写作技巧,
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