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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,书面,表达,变换句式,Writing a composition is just like making a sandwich.,a composition,topic sentence,（主题句）,supporting sentences,（扩展句）,ending,（结尾句）,过渡词：,first,second,finally,and,besides,also,but,however,whats more,Which composition feels more attractive,why?,Attention,1.,格式,2.,人称,3.,时态,4.,要点,5.,语法,6.,字数,7.,书写,词汇,句型（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）,1.,覆盖了所有的,要点,2.,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,3.,有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑,4.,语言得体,要点全,连接词,如何算是一篇好文章？,语言地道，规范,My English Learning,It is six years since,I began to learn English.,With the help of my teachers and classmates,I have,made progress,in my English.,Now Im,doing well,both,in,writing and reading in English.,But I still find,it,hard,to learn English,such as some difficult idioms.,Difficult as it is,I have,made up my mind,to master this useful language by my hard work.,请看范例,从上述例子同学们可以明白什么样的句子叫,“规范的英,语句子”,。,其实，,“规范的英语句子”就是,我们经常讲的三种,句子,：,A)Simple sentence:,Hearing the news,he was happy.,B)Compound sentence A:,He gave me a book,but,I forgot to bring it back home.,C)Compound sentence B:,What he is doing,has nothing to do with me.,=When he heard the news,he was happy.,Here are 3 ways to make sentences:,I.,巧妙运用短语，写出规范的简单句：,1),借助名词短语做同位语,如：,李立，男，,19,岁，,1986,年生；籍贯：广东。,Li Li,a boy of 19,was born in Guangdong in 1986.,2),借助介词短语做定语,如：,李飞，男，,10,岁，棕色短发，身穿白色茄克。,Li Fei is a ten-year-old boy,with short brown hair and a white jacket,.,如：,有了,Tom,的帮助，我们很快就找到了他们的村子。,With the help of Tom,we soon found their village.,4),借助非谓语动词短语做定语或状语,如,：,他们站在大树下，等待着总统的到来。,They are standing under the big tree,waiting for the president,.,3),借助介词短语做状语,II.,巧用连接词，写出规范的并列句：,如：,他给我钱，我不要。,I was just walking down the street corner,when,I saw you.,如：,我刚到拐角处，就见到你啦。,He gave me,money,but,I refused.,III.,用好从句和引导词，写出规范的复合句：,1),名词,性,从句,如：,老师生气。原因：,王明迟到。（主语从句）（表语从句）,That Wang,Ming,came late to school,made the teacher very angry.,What made the teacher very angry was,that Wang Ming came late to school,.,There was a heated discussion on,whether students should use Ipad in class.,如,:,有个激烈的讨论。,关于：学生是否应该在课堂上实用,Ipad.,The news,that our team won in the match,made all of us excited.,如,:,消息使我们都兴奋。,消息内容：我们队在比赛中获胜。,如：,中国，地处亚洲东部；特点：地大物博、人口众多。,China,which lies in the east of Asia,is a great country,with,a large area and population,as well as,rich natural resources.,3),状语从句,如：,雷锋还活在我们心中，我深受感动。,I was deeply moved by this,because I know Lei Feng is still living in our hearts,.,2),定语从句,4),其他句式,，增强语句表现力,1.We,were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.,（感叹）,_we were to see crops and vegetables growing well!,2.Radio broadcasts didnt begin until 1920,.,（强调）,It was_.,3.He never speaks about his own family,.,（倒装）,Never_.,4.A notice is saying”Please Save Water”on the wall,.,（倒装）,On the wall_.,5.Though he is a child,he knows a lot,.,（倒装）,_.,How glad,not until 1920 that radio broadcasts began,does he speak about his own family,is a notice saying”Please Save Water”,Child though/as he is,he knows a lot,1 When he,had finished supper,he went out to have a walk then.,（使用,V-ing,形式）,.,2,.To his surprise,the little girl knows so many things.,（使用名词性从句）,3,.Though Im weak,Ill make the effort.(,使用倒装句,),Having finished supper,he went out to have a walk then.,What,surprises him,is that,the little girl knows so many things.,Practice,怎样使用较丰富的句式,Weak as I am,Ill make the effort.,5.I passed the physics exam because of your help.(,用虚拟语气）,I,couldnt have passed,the physics exam,but for,your help.,4.He did not know what had happened,until he had read the news in the newspaper,.(,使用强调句型,),It was,not until he had read the news in the newspaper,that,he knew what had happened.,6.She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.(,使用过去分词,),7,.They sang and laughed as they went back to school.(,使用,V-ing,形式,),8.I,wont believe what he says.,（使用状语从句）,Followed by many students,she walked out of the lab.,Singing and laughing,they went back to school.,No matter what he says,I wont believe.,No sooner had he come,back from Beijing,than,he was sent abroad.,10,He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.,(,使用倒装句,),Study hard,and,youll make rapid progress.,9,.,If you study hard,you will make rapid progress.,（用并列句）,1.Shooting was originated as a means of survival.It developed into a sport only in the late 19th century.,(,非谓语,),2.,The sport was first appeared in 1896,and it was ever suspended during the 1904 and 1928 Games.(,定语从句,)3.The sport returned to the Olympic only four years.(,句型,)4.However,women were not allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting until 1968.(,倒装或强调,)5.As the sport became more and more popular,it has grown steadily from just 3 shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today.(,with,复合结构,),Shooting,originated as a means of survival,developed into a sport only in the late 19th century.,The sport,which first appeared in 1896,was ever suspended during the 1904 and 1928 Games.,It was only four years before the sport returned to the Olympic.,However,not until 1968 were women first allowed to compete in the,Olympic shootin