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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,Unit 2 Writing,What makes a successful person?,Both Lang Lang and Benjamin Franklin have certain qualities to be successful.Do successful people have something in common?,What makes a successful person?,Main points,Tense,Words&phrases&sentences,Conjunctions,Ending,Both Lang Lang and Benjamin Franklin have certain qualities to be successful.Do successful people have something in common?,Main points-,how many parts?,1.,2.,3.,4.,适当发挥,2.Tense,-the,simple present,tense,李美慧,10,分,梁嘉茵,10,分,黄浚源,10,分,蔡惠琳,10,分,10,分作文,Congratulations,！,林安娜,胡泳雯,余芷颖,陈天韵,陈伊俐,陈倩琳,罗智锟,骆燕珊,徐思婷,程星舒,郭凤茹,9,分作文,Congratulations,！,Good sentences:,Im interested in detective stories because I think they are very interesting.,When someone is in trouble,I will give him a hand.,Being kind to friends and doing more exercise are important too.,Althought it is rather difficult,I still want to try my best to make it come ture.,Good sentences,I hope to work as a detective like sherlock Holmes so that I can not only protect the innocent but also find the guilty.,It is interesting to find out more and more clues,but I think its very difficult to find out the result of the case.,I hope that experience and knowledge will be helpful for my work.,Good sentences:,I trust that my future is bright.,I thint it is wonderful and it is an important part of my daily life.,Knowledge is the key to opening the successful door.,I will try my best to make our city no criminals.,I am too keen on reading detective stories to forget eating and sleeping on holidays.,Good sentences:,Sherlock Holmes is one of the most famous detectives in the world.,because a detective can not only protect innocent but also find out the guilty.,I am a student who enjoys reading detective stories very much.,Lets correct some wrong sentences.,I must,study hard,have a warm,heart to help other people,get on well,with my classmate and,do more,exercise.,I,very like,reading the,After I,reading,the stories,Im,a school boy,who calls Li Ming,and,likes,reading the detective stories very much.,5.I,should try,my best to study,help,others,and,can get,well on classmates now.,Im very,like reading about detective stories.,I go to the Middle school to study and I am a student.,（无语。）,so I,am,hard study,and,give,a hand to others.,9.Through I,maybe dont,work as a detective,.,10.I like reading detective stories very much.,B,ecause,they are so interesting.,11.To be a detective in the future,I,not only need,a hope but also need hard work.,My name is Li Ming.Im a middle school student.Let me,introduce,myself,to,you.,Im keen on,reading the detective stories.The character,who I like best,is Sherlock Holmes.I,hope to become,a detective,like,him in the future,in order to,protect the innocent,as well as,find out the guilty.,To realize my dream,I must study hard,from now on,.,In addition to this,I must get on well with my classmates too.I should,give a hand to,others,in need,and do more exercise.I hope that,the series of things I do,will,be helpful,to my work in the future.,All the above is,the introduction of myself.So this is mea student,who has a dream of,being,a detective.,
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