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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,Better Your Writing,Better?,How?,Fuqiao,Middle School,Wang,Jingyu,Lead-in,Pre-writing,What/How about,Lets,We should,We shouldnt,Give advice in different ways,What can we do to solve the problem?,Its better for us to,Wed better,Dont forget to,Dont,学校提倡环保运动。假如你是,Amy,，准备以“,What Can We Do for the Environment”,为题，写一篇保护环境的英语演讲稿,内容包含：,1.,在购物时用布袋子替代塑料袋；,2.,离开教室前应关灯；,3.,最好走路或骑自行车上学；,简述理由：保护环境，减少污染，节约能源等,注意：,1.,词数：,90,词左右。开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数。,2.,文章中不能出现真实姓名和校名,.,参考词汇,:cloth bag;plastic bag,Hello,everyone.Im Amy.,Thank you for your listening!,While-writing,While-writing,话题,篇章构成,（共,_,段）,1._,2._ 3._.,体裁,_,(A.,演讲稿,B.,书信,C.,调查报告,),人称,时态,字数,Examine the topic.,（审题）,3,Beginning,Main body,Ending,A,First Person(,第一人称,),90,Simple present tense(,一般现在时,),Protecting the environment,Outline sample,Topic,Beginning,:,Main Body,:,topic sentence,:,（主题句）,suggestion 1,:,suggestion 2:,Ending,:,Tip1,:Writing an outline helps to organize your ideas better.,suggestion 3:,Its nice to speak about what we can do for the environment.,do something to,use cloth bags,turn off the lights,walk or ride a bike to school,hope,Sample1,Hello,everyone.Im Amy,.,Its nice to speak about what we can do for the environment.,We can use cloth bags.We cant use plastic bags when we go shopping.It helps to protect the environment.We should turn off the lights before we leave the classrooms.We should save energy.,We can walk or ride a bike to school.It will be better.We should try our best to reduce pollution.We should reduce waste.,Even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment.I believe we can make the world a better place to live.,Thank you for your listening!,句型应避免重复,While-writing,1.We can use cloth bags.We cant use plastic bags when we go shopping.,2 We should turn off the lights before we leave the classrooms.We should save energy.,We can use cloth bags,instead of,plastic bags when we go shopping.,Dont forget,to turn off the lights before we leave the classrooms,in order to,save energy.,Better your sentences.,While-writing,Better your sentences.,Tip,2,:,U,se,better words and,sentence,s,.,3.We can walk or ride a bike to school.It will be better.,4.We should try our best to reduce pollution.We should reduce waste.,It will be better,if,we walk or ride a bike to school.,It will be better,for,us,to,walk or ride a bike to school.,We should,try our best to,reduce pollution,and,waste.,Hello,everyone.,Im Amy.Its nice to speak about what we can do for the environment.,_,we can use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when we go shopping.It helps to protect the environment._,dont forget to turn off the lights before we leave the classrooms in order to save energy._,it will be better if we walk or ride a bike to school.We should try our best to reduce pollution and waste.,_,even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment.I believe we can make the world a better place to live.,Thank you for your listening!,What kind of words do we need to make the speech better?,Linking words,(,过渡词,),Linking words:,表并列：,表递进,:,表转折,;,表因果：,表层次：,表时间：,表列举：,表观点,:,表总结：,and,as well as,both and,either or,not onlybut also,neithernor,whats more,besides,in addition,but,however,yet,after all,while,because,so,therefore,as a result,firstly,secondly,thirdly,next,at last,before,after,while,when,then,for example,such as,like,for one thing,for another thing,in my opinion,I think that,in all,in a word,in general,Try to choose proper linking words,_,the food we eat at home is cleaner and safer._,eating at home doesnt cost much money._,it helps family members become closer,_preparing food at home is _,fun,_,meaningful,.,_,it encourages more communication in the house.,because,in my opinion,first,finally,besides,not onlybut also,First,Besides,because,Finally,but also,not only,In my opinion,Hello,everyone.,Im Amy.Its nice to speak about what we can do for the environment.,_,we can use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when we go shopping.It helps to protect the environment._,dont forget to turn off the lights before we leave the classrooms in order to save energy._,it will be better if we walk or ride a bike to school.We should try our best to reduce pollution and waste.,_,even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment.I believe we can make the world a better place to live.,Thank you for your listening!,Make the speech better by using linking words.,(You can do it in different ways),Firstly,Secondly,Whats more,In a word,_,Firstly,we can use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when we go shopping.It helps to protect the environment.,Secondly,dont forget to turn off the lights before we leave the classrooms in order to save energy.,Whats more,it will be better if we walk or ride a bike to school.We should try our best to reduce pollution and waste.,.,Try to use,a topic sentence,to make it better.,We should do something to protect the environment.,What Can We Do for th
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