资源描述
单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,0,作文专题,求助信,作文专题求助信,1,I am writing this letter to ask you to do me,Im writing to ask whether you can help me.,I have some difficulty/trouble in doing,I find it difficult for me to do sth.,Faced with/Facing so much difficulty,I have to turn to you for some,help.,It would be very helpful if you could do me a favor.,I really dont know what to do and expect you to give me your advice.,I have no idea what I should do and long for your advice.,I would be grateful if you could give me some suggestions on how to.,I would appreciate it if you could offer me some help.,必备句子,I am writing this letter to as,2,指导老师:,1.,现在我写信请你帮我一个忙。,2.我遇到的三个间题很困扰我,首先 另外最困扰我的是,3.不幸的是,我觉得做某事十分/非常难。,4.我想知道你能不能帮我解决这些困难。如果你能帮助我,我真,的很感激。,5.面对上述问题,我渴望得到你的帮助。请你给我一些建议。,Now I am writing to ask you to give me a hand/do me a favor/lend me a hand.,Unfortunately,Ifind/feelitquite/extremely difficult/hard to do,sth,I,am encountering three problems which trouble me a lot.To begin with,Whats more,What troubles me most is,检查背诵,Facedwiththeaboveproblems,Iamanxioustogetyourhelp.Wouldyouplease offermesomeadviceon.?,I wonder if,you,can help me with these difficulties.I really appreciate it if you could help me,.,指导老师:1.现在我写信请你帮我一个忙。Now I am w,3,指导老师:,简介,Step 1 analyze the requirements(,认真审题,),Step 2,draw up an outline(,谋篇布局,),Step 3,organize the sentences(,联句成篇,),Step 4,get the article polished up(,锦上添花,),Step 5,check the mistakes(,查漏补缺,),求助信是当个人遇到一些自己无法解决的问题,或困难时向别人请求帮助的一种书信。,指导老师:简介Step 1 analyze the req,4,指导老师:,典例分析,剖析,(2016年新课标全国卷I)假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教Ms Jenkins 写信,请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。,注意:,1.词数100左右;,2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。,指导老师:(2016年新课标全国卷I)假定你是李华,暑假想去,5,审题,时态,人称,提纲,Para 1,Para 2,Para 3,一般现在时,第一、第二人称,问候对方,+,介绍自己,+,点明目的,描述困难,+,恳求帮助,表示感谢,+,期盼回复,谋篇布局,时态人称提纲Para 1Para 2Para 3一般现在时第,6,指导老师:,Dear Ms,Jenkins,Im one of your students,Li Hua from Class Two,.,Im writing to ask for,your help,.,This summer I intend to take up a part-time job in a foreign company,through which,I would like to broaden my horizons,gain some working experience and meet new friends.My application and resume have been prepared and I sincerely hope you can help me polish them.,Firstly,Im wondering if,you can help add some contents.,Besides,if there are,some mistakes in them,I hope you can help correct them.,Lastly,I attach some materials,whose format,had better be changed and hope you can help.,I would appreciate it if you could,take the trouble to do so much for me.,I look forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.,Yours truly,Lihua,高级短语,高级句型,指导老师:Dear Ms Jenkins,高级短语,高级句型,7,指导老师:,联句成篇,高级短语,做某事有困难,给某人帮助,寻求帮助,渴望做某事,因某事感激某人,提供一些有益的指导,费心地去做某事,为某事做准备,让某人失望,忙于做某事,havetrouble/difficulty(in)doingsth.,dosb.afavor/givesb.ahand,askforhelp/,turn to sb for help,beanxious/eagertodosth./longtodosth.,begrateful/thankful/appreciativetosb.,forsth.,offersomeconstructiveguidance,takethetroubletodosth.,makepreparationsfor.,letsb.down,bebusy/occupied/engagedindoingsth.,指导老师:联句成篇高级短语havetrouble/diff,8,指导老师:,高级句型,1,.not only.but also 倒装句,在外企工作不仅能开阔我的视野,,,还能帮我交到新朋友。,N,ot only can,w,orking in a fore,i,gn company broaden my horizons,but also,it,can,help me make,new friends.,2.,非谓语,我写给你这封信,希望你能给我一些建议。,Im writing you the letter,hoping you can give me some,advice,.,3.从句,我写这封信的目的是我想向你寻求帮助。,(the reason why.is that.),The reason why I write this letter is that I want to ask you for help.,这是我第一次写申请信。,(This is the first time that.),This is the first time that I have written an application letter.,我不知道我应该注意什么,这使我很苦恼。,(,非限制性定语从句,),I,dont know what I should pay attention to,which makes me very,upset,.,I have no idea,Working in a foreign company can not only broaden my horizons,but also it can help me make new friends.,指导老师:高级句型I have no ideaWorking,9,指导老师:,Dear Ms,Jenkins,Im one of your students,Li Hua from Class Two,.,Im writing to ask for,your help,.,This summer I intend to take up a part-time job in a foreign company,through which,I would like to broaden my horizons,gain some working experience and meet new friends.My application and resume have been prepared and I sincerely hope you can help me polish them.,Firstly,Im wondering if,you can help add some contents.,Besides,if there are,some mistakes in them,I hope you can help correct them.,Lastly,I attach some materials,whose format,had better be changed and hope you can help.,I would appreciate it if you could,take the trouble to do so much for me.,I look forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.,Yours truly,Lihua,注意过渡,衔接,表顺序:,first of all,to begin with,whats more,in addition,besides,moreover,last but not least,表观点:,as far as I am concerned,,,in my opinion,其他:,on the one hand,,,on the other hand,for one thing,,,for another,查漏补缺,注意标点和格式等,指导老师:Dear Ms Jenkins,注意过渡,衔接表顺,10,指导老师:,必背模板,Dear_,I am writing to formally request to _(请求的内容).,The reason for _is that_(给出原因).I_,so I _(给出细节).I would also like to request _(提出进一步的要求).I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused.Thank you for your attentio
展开阅读全文