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,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,#,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,#,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,#,Composition,My School Life,1,CompositionMy School Li,中考作文评分标准,第五档（,13-15,分）要点全：行文连贯，语言流畅，基本无误,（词汇拼写错误,2,个以内或语法错误,1,个）；,第四档（,10-12,分）要点全：语言可读性强，语言错误少,（词汇拼写错误,4,个以内或语法错误,2,个以内）；,第三档（,7-9,分）要点全：语言可读性较强，语言错误较多,（与要点提示内容相关，词汇错误,6,个以内或语法错误,3,个以内）,第二档（,4-6,分）要点不全，语言可读性较差（与要点提示内容相关的句子形式，有,3-4,个基本完整的句子，其余句子表达式问题严重）；,第一档（,0-3,分）要点不全，语言无可读性（与要点提示内容相关的词汇，有个别支离破碎的句子形式，均不完整成句）。,2,中考作文评分标准第五档（13-15分）要点全：行文连贯，语言,A:What do you usually do at school/after class?,B:I,always,I,usually,I,sometimes,I,hardly ever,I,never,A:What do you think of your school life?,Lets,talk about your,school life,.,B:Its busy/interesting/wonderful/colorful/fantastic boring/terrible/so-so,3,A:What do you usually do at s,My school life,My name is BethI study in No.1 Middle School.My school is very big and beautiful.I want to say something about my school life.My school life is busy but pleasant.,We have six classes every day.I like all the classes，because my teachers can make the classes lively and interesting.My favorite subject is English,so I join English club every weekI can speak English with many other students thereIts very interesting and exciting.I think its helpful for me to learn English well.And my English teacher,Ms.Zhang,is very kind and patient.She is like our sister.She often helps us with study and encourages us to work hard.We all love her very much.After class,I always play chess and discuss math problems with my classmatesThey are outgoing and clever.Whats more?I often take part in all kinds of activities,because I want to improve my abilities.,In a word，I love my schoolI love my lessons，my friends and my teachersI find my school life is more and more meaningful and colorful,4,My school lifeMy name is Bet,五步法：,五美,四连,三列,二构,一审,书面,表达,5,五步法：五美四连三列二构一审书面5,Step by step,1.,审,2.,构,3.,列,4.,连,5.,美,文体,_,时态,_,人称,_,连字成句，连句成段,在有把握的情况下,，变换句型，灵活使用长短句和复合句，升华中心思想，使文增色。,把握文章框架结构，,必要时,适当增加细节,列出要点,6,Step by step1.审文体_ 时态_,一,.,Read the Title(,审题）,文体,_,时态,_,人称,_,记叙文,一般现在时,第一人称（,I/We,）,7,一.Read the Title(审题）文体 _,二,.Structure,（结构）,开头,中间,结尾,My School Life,（,怎么样,.,（,具体,.,(,情感：期待，热爱，收获,8,二.Structure（结构）开头 My School L,Beginning,开头,（,怎么样,.,interesting/enjoyable,colourful&meaningful,busy but pleasant,have a lot of fun,.,My school life,9,Beginning 开头（怎么样.interesting,My School Life,Teachers,Classmates,School Activities,Study,10,My School Life TeachersClassm,Ending,结尾,My school life,(,情感：期待，热爱，收获,I believe/l hope +,从句,How/What+,感叹句,结构初现：抛出观点,展开描述,总结（点题、升华感情）,11,Ending结尾My school life(情感：期待，,12,12,Teachers,kind/friendly,Humorous,have a strong sense of responsibility/,be strict with,patient,help /encourage me to improve my study,三,.,Make a list(,列,),列出要点,13,Teacherskind/friendlyHumoroush,14,14,Classmates,outgoing,dicuss problems together,help/encourage each other,smart&hardworking,15,Classmatesoutgoingdicuss probl,16,16,Activities,sports meetings,Art Festival,join the clubs,take part in different competitions,17,Activitiessports meetingsArt F,Activities,fun&interesting,useful/meaningful,:,To improve our abilities,relax ourselves,make more friends,develop our interests or habits,18,Activitiesfun&interestingusef,spend,on sth/(in)doing sth,Although,尽管,so,that,如此,.,以致。,in order to/so that,为了,How/What(,感叹句）,be proud of,take(an active)part in (,积极）参加,be interested in,比较级,quicker,more exciting,not only,but also,when,从句,三,.,连：,连字成句，连句成段,19,spend on sth/(in)doing sth三,20,20,My School Life,第二段,Body(,正文,),Study,C,lassmates,A,ctivities,T,eachers,第一段,Beginning:,interesting/enjoyable,colourful&meaningful,busy but pleasant,have a lot of fun,Ending,结尾：,情感升华：期待，热爱，收获,I believe/l hope +,从句,How/What+,感叹句,21,My School Life第二段Body(正文)Study,临考如何提高写作能力,：,适当加强阅读量,读得越多，在潜移默化中，你提高英语写作能力的速度也就越快,背诵经典文段,在平时阅读训练及范例作文中把一些,经典,文段整理到本子中，抽时间背诵，不能不说是积极备战，快速提高写作成绩的一条捷径背，可以加强语感，使自己的表达更地道,加强练习,加强实际写作练习至关重要我们练习的重点是文章是否切题，行文是否流畅，有无严重语法错误等,22,临考如何提高写作能力：适当加强阅读量读得越多，在潜移默,23,23,24,24,
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