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,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,书面表达,假定你是李华，一个英国中学文化交流团要来你校交流。请你代表校学生会给对方写一封电子邮件，介绍活动安排。内容包括：,1.上午参观学校；,2.下午听中国古代文化的讲座；,3.晚上文艺演出。,注意：1.词数100 左右,2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯,。,审题：,三段式,Para3:,结尾：期待对方的到来,Para1:,自我介绍，写信背景及目的,Para2:,内容要点,人称、时态、体裁,作文评分说明：,一、覆盖所有要点，结构完整（15分）,Para 1.自我介绍，写信背景,（得知对方来我校交流）2分,写信目的（介绍活动安排）2分,Para2.上午参观学校 3 分,下午听中国古代文化的讲座 3 分,晚上文艺演出 3 分,Para3.期待对方的到来 2 分,二、是否有适当增加的内容部分，拓展,内容是否合理等。3分,三、字体是否工整，卷面是否整洁，字,数是否够行数（10-12行）2分,四、没有书信格式或书信格式错误的扣,1分。,五、语言表达能力强。（衔接自然；使,用或尽力使用高级词汇，句型）4分,作文评分说明：,一、覆盖所有要点，结构完整（,15分,）,Para 1.自我介绍，写信背景（得知对方来我校交流）,2分,写信目的（介绍活动安排）,2分,Para2.上午参观学校,3 分,下午听中国古代文化的讲座,3 分,晚上文艺演出,3 分,Para3.期待对方的到来,2 分,二、是否有适当增加的内容部分，拓展内容是否合理等。,3分,三、字体是否工整，卷面是否整洁，字数是否够行数,（10-12行）,2分,四、没有书信格式或书信格式错误的扣,1分,。,五、语言表达能力强。（衔接自然；使用或尽力使用高,级词汇，句型）,4分,Dear friends,Im Li Hua,chairman of our school Student,s Union.,Im honored to tell you our arrangements for your visit to our school.,In the morning when you arrive,we will show you around our school.So you can get a general idea about our school.Next,there will be a report on Chinese ancient culture in the afternoon.The speaker will introduce some great ancient people,as well as their books,ideas and influences on Chinese history.Chinese ancient inventions and other achievements will also be mentioned.Later on,we will hold an evening party,where we can put on various performances,such as singing and dancing.,Looking forward to your coming!,Yours Li Hua,Im honored to tell you our arrangements,for your visit to our school.,自我介绍,2,分,写信目的,2,分,In the morning,Next,in the afternoon,Later,on,参观学校,3,分,听讲座,3,分,文艺演出,3,分,期待到来,2,分,15,分,Dear friends,Im Li Hua,chairman of our school Student,s Union.,Im honored to tell you our arrangements for your visit to our school.,In the morning when you arrive,we will show you around our school.So you can get a general idea about our school.Next,there will be a report on Chinese ancient culture in the afternoon.The speaker will introduce some great ancient people,as well as their books,ideas and influences on Chinese history.Chinese ancient inventions and other achievements will also be mentioned.Later on,we will hold an evening party,where we can put on various performances,such as singing and dancing.,Looking forward to your coming!,Yours Li Hua,show,you around our school.,where we can,put on various performances,there will be a report,on Chinese ancient culture in the afternoon.,+4,分,So you can get a general,idea about our school.,speaker will introduce some great ancient people,as well as their books,ideas and influences on Chinese history.Chinese ancient inventions and other achievements will also be mentioned.,such as singing and,dancing.,+3,分,as well as,Enjoy some writings,C,C,C,B,B,B,A,A,A,A,You need at least an A to get the writing score.,Read the following passages and point out what is not perfect enough.,Firstly,in the morning we will take you to visit our school.Therefore,we can communicate some culture to you.Secondly,we will go to listen to a lecture which is about Chinese ancient culture in the afternoon.In this way can you learn more about Chinese culture.Last but not least,we will have a wonderful art performance in the evening which will show you an unique Chinese culture.I hope that you will introduce some English culture to us and I would appreciate it if you could show your kindness.,How to expand details:,result,结果,aim,目的,example,举例,cause,原因,(because,since,for,as,),(as a result,so that,),(,which,),1.,2.,3.,4.,5.,6.,(such as,for example,),(aiming at,;in order,to,.,）,从句解释,details,具体内容细节,Dear friends,Im Li Hua,chairman of our school Student,s Union.,Im honored to tell you our arrangements for your visit to our school.,In the morning when you arrive,we will show you around our school.So you can get a general idea about our school.Next,there will be a report on Chinese ancient culture in the afternoon.The speaker will introduce some great ancient people,as well as their books,ideas and influences on Chinese history.Chinese ancient inventions and other achievements will also be mentioned.Later on,we will hold an evening party,where we can put on various performances,such as singing and dancing.,Looking forward to your coming!,Yours Li Hua,where we can,put on various performances,So you can get a general,idea about our school.,speaker will introduce some great ancient people,as well as their books,ideas and influences on Chinese history.Chinese ancient inventions and other achievements will also be mentioned.,such as singing and,dancing.,details,细节,result,结果,example,举例,从句解释,1.,show/take sb.around+,地点,带,sb.,参观某地,2.get a general idea about.,大致了解,.,3.A as well as B (A/B,均为词组，短语,),4.,put on performances,表演节目,5.Im honoured to tell you sth.,6.There be./There will be.,有,.,7.,主语,+,被动语态,(be done),8.where,引导的定语从句,知识储备：,good phrases/sentences,Please,recite the composition,after class.,Homework,Thank you!,
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