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标题文本,正文级别 1,正文级别 2,正文级别 3,正文级别 4,正文级别 5,#,概要写作,文本内容与结构解读,写作思路解读,写作思路微技,能之小句关系把握策略,表达微,技能之次要点处理篇,牛刀小试,参考范文欣赏,概要写作,1,体裁：,主题：,结构：,1.文本内容与结构解读,体裁：主题：结构：1.文本内容与结构解读,2,体裁：说明文,主题：,The smart clothes and its application,结构：,Para 1,Para 3&4,Para 2,Para 5,1.文本内容与结构解读,体裁：说明文主题：The smart clothes a,3,阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇,60,词左右的内容概要。,British shoppers buy 2.15 million tons of clothing and shoes annually,yet UK citizens have an estimated 30 billion worth of unused clothing at the back of the wardrobe.But new technology could see the end of that,with the garments（衣服）themselves reminding the owners of their existence.,“Smart clothes”could help us clear out our wardrobes（衣柜）by sending messages or tweeting（发推文）us if they havent been worn for a good while.If these messages are ignored,the garments will get in touch with a clothing charity and ask to be reused,with an organization automatically sending out donation information.They could be programmed for a public sale where they are sold to whoever offers the highest price on eBay.,Academics at Birmingham City University are developing the“connected wardrobe”to encourage more suitable clothes consumption.The concept sees garments tagged,using washable contactless technology.,Mark Brill,senior lecturer at the university,said,“Think of the surprise when an owner suddenly receives bids for items that they didnt know were in their wardrobe.”“The connected wardrobe is a practical pleasant concept to encourage people to think about their clothing consumption.Finally,I hope it will encourage more appropriate fashion consumption,”he added.“Perhaps we can even move away from the idea of ownership of clothing.When weve worn them enough,the items will pass themselves on to their next keeper.”,It follows in the footsteps of the“Internet of Things”-a concept that sees ordinary household items connecting to the Internet in order to share information.Now,the“Internet of Clothes”will see that neglected garments will tweet and text the owners,“asking”to be worn depending on the weather and frequency of wear.Clothes will keep track of other information,such as who owned them previously,as well as how much they originally cost,who made them and how much the worker was paid for them.,The working process,phenomenon,Other functions,The purpose,The meaning,阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。,4,写作思路解读,Para.1:British shoppers buy 2.15 million tons of clothing and shoes annually,yet UK citizens have an estimated 30 billion worth of unused clothing at the back of the wardrobe.,But,new technology could see the end of that,with the garments（衣服）themselves reminding the owners of their existence.,概述主题内容：据新科技报道，久未穿着的衣服将能提醒衣物主人他们的存在。（要点1）,写作思路解读Para.1:British shopper,5,写作思路解读,Para.2:“Smart clothes”could help us clear out our wardrobes（衣柜）by sending messages or tweeting（发推文）us if they havent been worn for a good while.If these messages are ignored,the garments will get in touch with a clothing charity and ask to be reused,with an organization automatically sending out donation information.They could be programmed for a public sale where they are sold to whoever offers the highest price on eBay.,具体说明细节：若信息未被主人理睬，则有衣物慈善机构和组织发送更多信息推送，帮助旧衣服在,eBay,上进行拍卖销售（要点,2,）,写作思路解读Para.2:“Smart clothes”,6,写作思路解读,Para.3:Academics at Birmingham City University are developing the“connected wardrobe”to encourage more suitable clothes consumption.The concept sees garments tagged,using washable contactless technology.,Para.4:Mark Brill,senior lecturer at the university,said,“Think of the surprise when an owner suddenly receives bids for items that they didnt know were in their wardrobe.”“The connected wardrobe is a practical pleasant concept to encourage people to think about their clothing consumption.Finally,I hope it will encourage more appropriate fashion consumption,”he added.“Perhaps we can even move away from the idea of ownership of clothing.When weve worn them enough,the items will pass themselves on to their next keeper.”,具体说明事物的目的意义：学者研发这项技术旨在鼓励人们恰当的衣物消费理念和物主身份观念。（要点,3,）,写作思路解读Para.3:Academics at Bi,7,写作思路解读,Para.5:,It follows in the footsteps of the“Internet of Things”-a concept that sees ordinary household items connecting to the Internet in order to share information.Now,the“Internet of Clothes”will see that neglected garments will tweet and text the owners,“asking”to be worn depending on the weather and frequency of wear.Clothes will keep track of other information,such as who owned them previously,as well as how much they originally cost,who made them and how much the worker was paid for them.,进一步说明事物产生的背景和附加功能：这种“网络衣物”紧跟网络分享理念，会自动发送信息要求衣物主人来穿着，而且将会跟踪关于服装成本产地及物主信息。（要点4）,写作思路解读Para.5:It follows in t,8,写作思路解读,然后，我们可以将这些要点串起来，连成一篇涵盖所有要点的概要写作：,New technology could put an end to a wardrobe with lots of unused garments by sending information to their owners.(Point 1)“Smart clothes”could ask owners to wear them,or many messages are sent to organizations to sell those unused clothes.(Point 2)Academics announced that it is developed to encou
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