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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,假如你是李华，你打算参加你校下周要举行的题为“I Have an Ideal University”的英语演讲比赛，你已经写完初稿，请根据以下提示用英语给你的外教Miss Joan写一封邮件。,1.参加大赛目的；,2.请她帮忙纠正发音、润色语言等；,3.约定拜访时间、地点。,注意:,1.词数100左右；,2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；,假如你是李华，你打算参加你校下周要举行的题为,1,How to write a letter of advice,2,审 题,1.,文体,：求助信,2.,人称,：第一、二人称,4.,结构,：三段式,3.,时态,：一般现在时,总,分,总,审 题1.文体：求助信 2.人称：第一、二人称,3,1.Para,1:,寒暄和写信,目的（请求帮助）,(express your feeling&purpose),2.Para,2:,清晰陈述请求帮助的具体内容。,(give details),3.Para,3:,表达希望,(希望得到帮助),(express your hope),3,Paras,1.Para 1:寒暄和写信目的（请求帮助）2.Para 2,4,Express,each paragraph,properly,and,accurately,Express,5,求助信是当个人遇到一些自己无法解决的问题或困难时向别人请求帮助的一种书信。通常包括三部分内容：,1.,表明写信目的，请求帮助。,2.,要清晰陈述请求帮助的具体内容。,3.,希望得到帮助。注意语气委婉、真诚，并要向收信人表示感谢。,文体概述,求助信是当个人遇到一些自己无法解决的问题或困难时向别人请求,6,做某事有麻烦,_,2.,给某人帮助,_,3.,寻求帮助,_,4.,遇到一些问题,_,5.,面临困难,_,have trouble/difficulty(in)doing sth,do sb a favor/give sb a hand,ask for help/seek for help,encounter some problems,be faced with difficulties,常用语块,have trouble/difficulty(in)d,7,6.,忙于做某事,_,7.,为某事做准备,_,8.,集中精力,_,9.,学以致用,_,10.,让某人失望,_,let sb down,be busy doing sth/be engaged in doing sth,prepare for sth,concentrate on/focus on,putinto use,6.忙于做某事 let sb downbe bu,8,11.,克服恐惧,_,12.,取得巨大的进步,_,13.,渴望做某事,_,14.,提供一些有建设性的指导,_,15.,因某事感激某人,_,be grateful to sb for sth,overcome the fear,make great progress,be anxious to do sth/long to do sth,offer some constructive guidance,11.克服恐惧 _,9,我写信想请您帮我一个忙。,2.,我遇到三个困扰我的问题。首先，,其次，,最困扰我的是,3.,不幸的是，我觉得做某事很困难。,3.Unfortunately,I find/feel it quite difficult/hard to do sth,1.I am writing to ask you to do me a favor/give me a hand.,2.I am encountering three problems which trouble me a lot.To begin with,Whats more,What troubles me most is,套用句式,3.Unfortunately,I find/feel,10,4.,面对以上的问题，我渴望得到你的帮助。你能给予我一些关于,的建议吗？,5.,我想知道你能否帮助我解决这些问题。如果你能帮助我，我将感激不尽。,4.Faced with the above problems,I am anxious to get your help.Would you please offer me some advice on?,5.I wonder if you can help me with these difficulties./I really appreciate it if you could help me.,4.面对以上的问题，我渴望得到你的帮助。你能给予我一些关于,11,Firstly,/Secondly,/Thirdly,First of all,/To begin with,/To start with,Besides,/In addition,/Whats more,Finally,/Last but not least,For one thing,/For another,On the one hand,/On the other hand,.,Linking words and phrases,过渡词语,给出多个建议,，可以用上：,Firstly,/Secondly,/Th,12,Please write the model of a letter of,advice in groups.,write the model in groups,write the model in groups,13,Apply,Apply,14,Dear Joan,I am Li Hua,one of your students.Plan to participate in the English Speech Contest to be held in our school in next week which topic is about“I Have an Ideal University”,I am writing to ask you to do me a favor.,To improve my spoken English and my skill in making public speech,I want grasp this great opportunity.I had finished my draft and I am wondering if you can help me polish the language or solve problems in your pronunciation as well.Is it possibly for me to call you at 3 pm.this Saturday in your office?I know you have the busy schedule and Id appreciate it if you could consider it.,Looking forward to your reply.,Yours,Li Hua,1.习作修改并背诵：,Dear Joan,1.习作修改并背诵：,15,假如你是李华，最近在写一篇关于北美原住民(native American)文化习俗的论文，但国内有关的英语参考书较少。请给你的美国笔友Mike写封信，请他帮你买几本这方面的书。内容包括：,1.买书的原因；,2.对书的要求(如数量、寄送时间等)；,3.付款方式。,注意：1.词数100左右；,2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,2,.完成习作,假如你是李华，最近在写一篇关于北美原住民(native A,16,Dear Mike,How is everything getting along with you?I am writing _(ask)a favor _you in the hope that you will be so kind to help me.,Recently_(我正在写一本关于北美原住民文化和习俗的论文),but I am _(stick)as not many English reference books are available in China.Therefore,would you please buy some_ me in America _(如果你方便的话)?Two or three books are just enough,and _,_ (如果你可以在11月9日前把它们寄送给我，我会非常感激).,As to the _(expensive)of books and postage,I will transfer them to your account via online banks.Looking forward to your early reply.,Yours,Li Hua,习作完成,Dear Mike,习作完成,17,(2016年全国卷1)假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外资公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Ms.Jenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。,注意:1.词数100左右;,2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。,Homework,(2016年全国卷1)假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外资公司兼,18,Thank you,Thank you,19,
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