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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,10.地点介绍,晨读背诵,1.neighbor,与,为邻,2.be made up of/consist of,由,组成,3.be located/situated in/near,坐落在,4.serve as,当,用,5.with/has a history of,有,的历史,相关短语,6.with/has a population of,有,人口,7.cover an area of,面积有,.,8.the third largest city,第三大城市,9.be famous for,以,而著名,10.be well-known for/as,因为,/,作为,而出名,11.on its east lies,东边有,12.a fantastic place,一个极好的地方,13.be rich/abundant in,盛产,14.a three-,storeyed,building,一栋三层楼的房子,1.,I would like to introduce,my hometown,to you,.,我向你介绍一下我的家乡。,2.My hometown,neighboring,Hong Kong,is located in,Guangdong Province.,我的家乡,毗邻香港,位于广东省。,相关句式,3.Guangzhou,a city,with a population,of,about thirteen million,has a history of,more than 2,200 years.,广州,拥有一千三百人口的一座城市,有三百多年的历史了。,4.,Covering a total area of,7,434 square kilometers this city,has a population of,about ten million.,这座城市占地面积达,7,434,平方公里,人口大约是,10,000,000,。,5.It,is rich in,natural sources,such as,coal and gold,and has mild climate.,它自然资源得天独厚,有丰富的煤和金矿,而且气候温和。,6.Our school,is no longer what it used to be,.,我们学校再也不是过去的样子了。,技巧点拨,1.,介绍或描述地点的基础写作,通常以表格形式来呈现写作点。该类表格通常有两列,其中一列概括事物特征、属性,另一列对此特征、属性展开描述。学生必须重新组织表格内容,不能死板地依据表格从左到右翻译,如不能写成“,The location of Guangzhou is in the south of China”,这样不地道的句子,相应的表达应该是,:Guangzhou lies in the south of China.,2.,确定时态。介绍地点等描述基本特征的文章通常使用一般现在时。,3.,避免开头指代不明。若文章没有给出写作对象或设定情景，避免用,it,作主语引导第一句,而应该具体写出描述的对象，如,the Great Wall,Hong Kong,等。但如果整篇文章 多处用“,it”,等作主语,文章会稍显逊色,所以在写作过程中,可根据文意适当变换主语,如改写为,the place,the city,等。,典型例题,你将带领一个外国旅游团参观长城，请根据以下的信息要点，用,5,个规范的英语句子写一篇长城的简单介绍。你的介绍应包括全部信息要点，介绍的开头已经给出，不计入,5,个句子中。,【,信息要点,】,历史,有两千多年的历史。,特点,世界上最长的城墙,长,6000,多千米,;,建筑材料主要为石头,砖头,修建工作都是人工进行,;,主要用于防御外来入侵者,沿墙每隔几百米就有烽火台,(watchtower),。,现状,世界著名旅游景点之一，每年吸引许多外国游客到长城观光旅游。,写作要求,只能使用,5,个句子表达全部的内容。,评分标准,句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。,例题导写,1.,按顺序写作。学生应该按照表格内容,(,即“历史、特点、现状”,),的先后顺序进行写作，这样既可避免重整顺序而浪费时间,也避免错改顺序而给老师带来阅卷困难。,2.,草拟提纲、简单翻译是写作重要步骤之一。请翻译要点：,(1),有,(,多久,),的历史,_,It has a history of.,(2),世界最长的城墙,_,(3)6000,多千米长,_,(4),由石头,砖头做成,_,(5),由人工修建,_,be constructed by hand,the longest wall in the world,6000 kilometers long,be made of stones and bricks,6),防御外来入侵者,_,_,(7),每隔几百米,_,every few hundred meters,prevent the country from being invaded;,defend the country against foreign invaders,(8),著名旅游景点之一,_,_,(9),吸引许多外国游客,_,one of the famous scenic spots;one of the,famous places of interest;one of the famous,tourist attractions,attract many foreign visitors,3.,规范表达名词。如果名词修饰语过长,应转用“,a/an/the+,名词,+of”,的表达,例如,“,两千多年的历史”应该写成“,a history of two thousand years”,而不能写成“,two thousand years history”,。,4.,变换表达,丰富句式。,请按要求完成句子：,(1)It is more than 6000 kilometers in length,_(“,是世界上最长的城墙”,使用非限制性定语从句,),(2)It was the Great Wall _ _in ancient times.(“,帮助人们防御外来入侵者”,使用强调句,),that helped people fight,against the foreign invaders,which makes it the longest wall in the world,(3)_,_,there were watchtowers every few hundred meters along the wall.(“,长城主要用于防御外来入侵者”,使用原因状语从句,),(4)The Great Wall is one of the well-known places of interest on earth,_,_.(“,每年吸引许多外国游客到长城观光旅游”,使用非谓语结构,),As the Great Wall was built to defend people,against the invaders,appealing to a large,number of foreigners every year,(5)The Great Wall is _ a famous historical attraction _ it attracts hundreds of thousands of foreign visitors each year.(,使用“如此,以致”的句型表达,),(6)So _that it attracts hundreds of thousands of visitors home and abroad every year.(“,长城如此吸引”,使用倒装句,),attractive is the Great Wall,such,that,参考范文,Ladies and Gentlemen,，,Welcome to the Great Wall.The Great Wall,which is more than 6,000 kilometers long,is the longest wall in the world.It has a history of more than 2,000 years.It is made of stones and bricks and almost all the construction was done by hand without any machine.,As the wall was built to defend the country against foreign invaders,there were watchtowers every few hundred meters along the wall.Now,the Great wall is one of the most famous places of interest in China and it attracts many foreign visitors every year.,能力提高,1.,请根据中文提示,完成有关地点介绍的语汇积累。,(1),位于,_,(2),靠近,_,_,next to/close to,in the,neighborhood of,neighboring.,be located/situated in,；,lie(s)in,(3),有,(,多少,),人口,_,_,(4),有,(,多久,),历史,_,It has a population of.;With a population,of.,sth,.;The population has reached.,It has a history of.;With a history of.,，,sth,.,(5),占,(,多大,),面积,_,_,(6),表达“容量”,The hotel _(,拥有,)120 rooms;The building can _(,容纳,)5000 people.,cover an area of.(square kilometers/,square meters),possesses,hold,(7),是,(,多少,),长,/,宽,/,深,It is._/_/_.=It is.in _/_/_.,(8),著名景点,a place of _,a historical _,a scenic spot,(9),表达“吸引、著名”,sth,._sb.;,sth,.be_ (,形容词,);,be famous _(,因,而著名,);,be famous _(,作为,而著名,),as,long,wide,deep,length,width,depth,interest,attraction,attract/appeal to,attractive/appealing/wonderful,for,2.,请根据中文,完成短文。,Guangzhou,the third largest city in China,also known as City of Flowers,serves as the capital city of Guangdong and(1)_ _(,政治，经济，科学，教育，文化中心,).(2)_ _(,全市面积,7434.4,平方公里,),it is home to more than 11 million people.,Covering/With an area of 7434.4,square kilometers,the centre of its,political,，,economic