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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,看图作文,Look and Write,看图作文Look and Write,1,英 语 作 文 的 评 分 标 准,四档文：,内容不完整，语言表述错误很多，不能完整地 表达思想。可得,0-5,分,三档文：,内容完整，重点描述合理，但表述不充分，层次结构不合理，语言不够流畅，字迹不够工整，5-6处语法或拼写错误；字数不足。可得,6-8,分,二档文：,内容完整，重点描述比较充分，层次结构比较清晰，语言比较流畅，字迹工整，有3-4处语法或拼写错误；字数符合要求。可得,9-11,分,一档文：,内容完整，重点描述清楚、合理，表达充分，层次结构清晰，字迹工整，可读性强，语言流畅，仅有1-2处语法或拼写错误；字数符合要求。可得,12-15,分,英 语 作 文 的 评 分 标 准四档文：内容不完整，语言表,2,看图作文可采用以下几个步骤,：,1、理解图意，确立情景,2、注意所给的中英文提示,3、明确时态，理顺思路,4、连词成句，然后再连句成文,5、反复审核，修改错误,看图作文可采用以下几个步骤：,3,假设下面五幅图画描述的是你在,5,月,3,日,(,星期五,),的一段亲身经历。请你根据画面内容，写一篇80字左右的日记。,假设下面五幅图画描述的是你在5月3日(星期五)的一段亲身经历,4,英文日记注意事项,1.人称：第一人称,2.时态：一般过去时,3.文章内容要描述完整，表达充分,英文日记注意事项1.人称：第一人称,5,今天下午我去看电影.,go to a movie,go to the cinema,see a film,Its a fine day today.,this afternoon,I went to a movie happily this afternoon.,今天下午我去看电影.go to a movieIts a,6,在路上,我看到一个手提箱从一辆自行车上掉了下来.,On the way,I found/saw a case,fall,down from/off a mans bike.,on the way,fall down from/fall off,see/find+复合宾语,在路上,我看到一个手提箱从一辆自行车上掉了下来.On the,7,我捡起箱子,并向骑车人大声喊叫,但他却没听见,走远了.,I picked up the case and shouted to the man,but he didnt hear me and rode away.,pick up,shout to,ride away,我捡起箱子,并向骑车人大声喊叫,但他却没听见,走远了.I p,8,于是,我拦了一辆出租车去追赶失主.,I stopped a taxi to to catch up with the man.,stop a taxi,catch up with,于是,我拦了一辆出租车去追赶失主.I stopped a t,9,我终于追上了失主,并把箱子还给他.,失主非常的感动,他拿出一些钱来感谢我,但被我拒绝了.,I caught up with him at last and gave the case back to him.,The man took out some money to thank me,but I refused.,give back/return,refuse,我终于追上了失主,并把箱子还给他.失主非常的感动,他拿出一些,10,May 3rd,Friday,Fine,This afternoon,I went to see a film.On the way,I saw a case fall off a mans bike.I picked up the case and shouted to the man to stop.But he didnt hear me and rode away.,I stopped a taxi and got into it with the case.And we caught up with the man.I gave the case back to him.The man thanked me very much and wanted to give me some money.But I refused.,May 3rd,Friday,11,句子的种类,句子的种类,12,I picked up the case.,I shouted at the man loudly.,After picking up the case,I shouted to the man loudly.,把其中一句改为介词短语,I picked up the case.After pic,13,But he didnt hear me and rode away.,But he rode too fast to hear me.,I stopped a taxi as quickly as I could in order to catch up with the man.,适当选择固定句型,I wanted to catch up with him,so I stopped a taxi quickly.,But he didnt hear me and rode,14,文章结构,文章结构,15,May 3rd、2016，,Friday Fine,This afternoon,I went to see a film.On the way,I saw,The man thanked me very much and wanted to give me some money.But I refused.,It was such an interesting movie that I couldnt wait to enjoy it.,Although I missed the movie,I was very happy to help others.,May 3rd、2016，Friday,16,Practice,假设下面六幅图画描述的是你在4月3日(星期一)的一段亲身经历。请你根据画面内容，写一篇80字左右的日记。,Practice,17,Key words and phrases.,go to school,on the way,find,wallet,pick up,owner,phone book,bus stop,give back,refuse,Key words and phrases.go to sc,18,Bye bye!,If we work harder,our dreams will come ture!,Bye bye!If we work harder,19,
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