内容和形式的完美结合(09高考书面表达)课件

*,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,2009福建省高考英语书面表达,高二英语备课组,内容和形式的完美结合,Evaluation only.,Created with Aspose.Slides for.NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.,Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.,1,2009福建省高考英语书面表达内容和形式的完美结合Eva,最开放的命题,最有话可说,最深刻的寓意,最完美的结合（内容与形式）,2009书面表达命题特点（新课程）,Evaluation only.,Created with Aspose.Slides for.NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.,Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.,2,2009书面表达命题特点（新课程）Evaluation on,试题分析,1.提示形式：思路图,2.体裁：议论文、记叙文不限,3.四个要点：,1）微笑的好处,2）对父母或对朋友微笑,及原因,3）对自己微笑,及原因,4）总结,4.人称：以第一人称为主,5.时态：现在时；过去时+现在时,Evaluation only.,Created with Aspose.Slides for.NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.,Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.,3,试题分析1.提示形式：思路图Evaluation only.,内容要点以及语言结构,1.说明“the advantage of smiles”可写两点以上,Smiling can cut down the distance between you and the other people.,Smiling can make us cheerful/keep us young.,Smiling will clear up misunderstanding/difficulties.,Smiling can help us to relax/to forget our worries and enjoy ourselves/to escape the pressure.,2.对父母、朋友微笑可用实际事例说明why,以表感恩之心。,3.对自己微笑，用实际事例说明why.,4.总结：一句话即可（一两句也可）,In a word,we can smile as often as possible to make our life colorful.,Evaluation only.,Created with Aspose.Slides for.NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.,Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.,4,内容要点以及语言结构1.说明“the advantage o,数据分析：,08、09年高考书面表达得分情况,年份,第五档,（21-25）,第四档,(1620),第三档,（11-15）,第二档,（6-10）,第一档,（1-5）,0分,08年,6.18,50.78,24.37,6.26,6.58,5.49%,09年,348%,423%,3178%,8%,857%,579%,“三率”及标准差,年份,平均分,及格率,优秀率,标准差,08,14.27,66.96%,12.28%,5.69,09,1331,5737%,688%,573,Evaluation only.,Created with Aspose.Slides for.NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.,Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.,5,数据分析：08、09年高考书面表达得分情况 年份第五档第,三、存在问题分析,错误类型,典型错误案例,审题不清,要点不全,1.把smile at my parents 写成my parents like smiling,2.文章要求4个方面,很多学生只局限于advantages of smiling，遗漏了其它要点。,3.有的学生甚至写,我父母或朋友或我喜欢,微笑。,My parents prefer to smile,because smiling is friendly.,Certainly we can get along with others with smiling.So my parents love smiling.,4.,有的学生没有注意“,parents or friends,”中的“,or,”等。,Evaluation only.,Created with Aspose.Slides for.NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.,Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.,6,三、存在问题分析错误类型典型错误案例审题不清1.把smil,错误类型,典型错误案例,成分残缺,缺乏完整,句子没有谓语，有的没有主语或宾语等。,1）If I happy,I smile;,2）They give me help when I in trouble.,只有枝干,没有血肉,有的学生只写零星要点，而没有进行有效拓展。,例如，针对,advantage(s),只写,There are advantages of smiling.It benefits us a lot.It plays a very important part in our life.,表面上看起来很漂亮，其实没有,实质性,的内容。几个形容词,“happy,、beautiful、confident”从头到尾不断重复使用，,空洞乏味。（too general,not specific）,Evaluation only.,Created with Aspose.Slides for.NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.,Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.,7,错误类型典型错误案例成分残缺 句子没有谓语，有的没有主语或宾,错误类型,典型错误案例,搭配不当,引起歧义,1.将,be good to误,用,为be good for。,2.,欲表达“,In a word,smiling is good for us.,”,结,果写成,“,In a word,smiling,is good to,us.,”,“be good for sb”是“do good to”是“对某人有好处”的意思，然而“be good to sb”的意思是“对友善”。,词类不分,意义模糊,代词的使用混乱,名词形容词不分现象严重。,1）Be,cause a smile have many available to,you,body and,you,healthy,；,2),Because smile can make you more,confidence,I know I can get over the,difficult,.,Evaluation only.,Created with Aspose.Slides for.NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.,Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.,8,错误类型典型错误案例搭配不当1.将be good to误用为,错误类型,典型错误案例,缺乏一致,结构混乱,很多学生的文章结构零散，有的时态与信息要求不一致;有的主谓不一致，例如，I will smile with my parents when they was tired in works.,缺乏连词,结构松散,忽视了语篇的衔接语连贯，整篇文章没有使用任何连词。,滥用从句,晦涩难懂,有的学生在一段话就用了十分累赘的4个定语从句。,书写潦草,不知所云,有的学生做题规范较差，字迹潦草，影响了信息的传递，评卷老师评分很费力。,（评卷老师很生气，后果很严重。）,语言冗长,偏离主题,允许紧扣主题适当发挥，但不能随意发挥。过于随意发挥，有画蛇添足之感,。,Evaluation only.,Created with Aspose.Slides for.NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.,Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.,9,错误类型典型错误案例缺乏一致很多学生的文章结构零散，有的时态,亮点（,开头、推展句及结尾）,1.开头引人入胜，扣人心弦,1),引用谚语式,As an old saying goes,a smile makes a,young man.,There is an old saying goes,youll be young,if you always smile.,2)疑问式,Do you think a smile will make people,beautiful?,Would you like to smile?As we all know,we,can benefit from smile a lot.,Evaluation only.,Created with Aspose.Slides for.NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.,Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.,10,亮点（开头、推展句及结尾）1.开头引人入胜，扣人心弦Eva,3),概括式,As we know,smiling is good for our health.,Its universally acknowledged that smiling,is of great benefit to our daily life.,4）,例举式,There are many advantages of smiling.,For instance,smiling can help me to have,a happy feeling.,It is good for us to smile.For example,smiling can release the pressure from study and life,which helps us.,Evaluation only.,Created with Aspose.Slides for.NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.,Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.,11,3)概括式Evaluation only.11,亮点（,开头、推展句及结尾）,2.推展句内容丰富，行文连贯,1)I often smile at my parents or friends sincerely because I want to express my love and appreciation to them.Without their care and help,I would not have a good life.Whats more.,2)In our daily life,we should smile at our parents to let them know we are in good condition.Besides,we should also smile at our friends,which will make them feel that they are treasured as well as trusted.,3)Besides,I always smile at mys