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,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,0,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,0,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,0,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,0,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,0,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,0,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,0,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,0,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,0,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,0,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,0,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,0,2021年3月广州一模读后续写,巧克力的故事,2021年3月广州一模读后续写 巧克力的故事,1,第二节 读后续写（满分,25,分）,355 words,阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。,It took place in a teachers family.One day,Ben was playing basketball in the living room after school,when he accidentally threw the ball at a vase sitting on the shelf.The vase dropped to the floor and a large piece broke off.What made Ben more upset was that the vase was not a common decoration but an antique,which was handed down through generations from the 18th century.It was also his mothers favourite possession.To cover his terrible action,the terrified boy glued the pieces together hastily and put the vase back to its place.,As the mother herself dusted the vase every day,she naturally noticed the cracks(裂纹)that evening.To her surprise,the repair work was actually very good.At dinner time,she asked her boy if he broke the vase.Fearing punishment,the suddenly inspired boy said that a neighbors cat jumped in from the window and he couldnt drive it away no matter how hard he tried.It raced around the living room and finally knocked the vase off its shelf.,第二节 读后续写（满分25分）355 words 阅读下面短,2,His mother was quite clear that her son was lying,for all the windows were closed before she left for work each morning and opened after she returned.,However,in the face of her sons nervous eyes and the suspicious looks of the other family members.Bens mother remained calm.She realized she shouldn,t just simply blame and punish her son for lying.She came up with another idea.,Before going to bed,the boy found a note from his mother in his room,asking him to go to the study at once.The boy thought he would now be punished but,as he had already lied,he was determined to deny everything to the end,no matter how angry his mum became.,In the study,calmly bathed in the light,his mother,s face showed no sign of anger.On seeing her son push open the door and cautiously enter,she took a chocolate box out of a drawer and gave him one.,His mother was quite clear tha,3,Read for characters,Read for conflicts,Read for plot,Read for emotional,changes,Read for theme,1,2,3,4,5,5 Rs for Continuation Writing,Read for charactersRead for co,4,Read for,C,haracters,Read,1,Ben,Mother,calmly bathed in the light,his mothers face showed no sign of anger.,naughty,Ben was playing basketball in the living room after school,when he accidentally threw the ball at a vase sitting on the shelf.,as he had already lied,he was determined to deny everything to the end,no matter how angry his mum became.,the suddenly inspired boy said that a neighbors cat jumped in from the window and he couldnt drive it away no matter how hard he tried.,quick-minded,rebellious,Bens mother remained calm.,She realized she shouldnt just simply blame and punish her son for lying.,She came up with another idea.,calm,;,intelligent;,patient,A teacher,It took place in a teachers family.,Ben wouldnt admit his fault easily.,Bens mother would lead him to admit his fault instead of forcing him.,Read for CharactersRead1BenMot,5,Read,Read for,C,onflict,.,However,in the face of her sons nervous eyes and the suspicious looks of the other family members.Bens mother remained calm.She realized she shouldnt just simply blame and punish her son for lying.She came up with another idea.,Before going to bed,the boy found a note from his mother in his room,asking him to go to the study at once.The boy thought he would now be punished but,as he had already lied,he was determined to deny everything to the end,no matter how angry his mum became.,In the study,calmly bathed in the light,his mothers face showed no sign of anger.On seeing her son push open the door and cautiously enter,she took a chocolate box out of a drawer and gave him one.,Ben was determined not to tell the truth while his mother wanted to make him admit.,The conflict was solved by a box of chocolate.,2,ReadRead for Conflict.Howeve,6,Read for Plot,Read,key sentence:,She realized she shouldn,t just simply blame and punish her son for lying.,.s,he took a chocolate box out of a drawer and gave him one,(p1),Ben broke the valuable vase by accident and glued it.,the beginning,Main development,Resolution,the ending,(p2)Ben lied but his mom could tell his lie.,Climax,(p3-p4)Mom,asked Ben to go to the study and Ben was determined to deny everything to the end.,(p5)Bens mom had a talk with him,with a box of chocolates.,(p6)Bens bad attitude disappeared.,3,This chocolate is a reward for.,With some chocolates in hand.,Ano
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