基础写作课件之正反观点对比-娄甦

,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,基础写作评分标准,Criteria,Marks,Content,（,内容）,(,是否包括所有提示要点,是否用,5,句话表达全文）,Language,（,语言）,(,观点表达是否清晰、明确，句子是否得当,),Coherence,（,连贯）,（是否用恰当的连词，副词，短语来衔接句子）,As for me,I think that,people could be more enjoyable when shopping online carefully.,There are different opinions about whether,people should go shopping online.,However,others hold the opposite opinion that,people cant experience the goods in advance,，,and worse,still,they are easy to be cheated,because it is difficult to,guarantee,the quality of the goods.,Whats more,It is a fashionable and new way of shopping.,Some people think that,shopping online is more convenient and it can help people save much time.,-,-,如何写好正反观点对立的文章？,-,首先抓好结构,There are different opinions about whether,people should go shopping online.,Some people think that,shopping online is more convenient and it can help people to save much time.,Whats more,It is a fashionable and new way of shopping.,However,others hold the opposite opinion that,people cant experience the goods in advance,，,and worse,still,they are easy to be cheated,because it is difficult to,make sure of,the quality of the goods.,As for me,I think that,people could be more delighted when shopping online carefully.,Writing structure-,How to write an essay(,议论短文,),(In my opinion，I think-,/,As for me,I think-/,Personally,I think-,.,),(There are different opinions,about whether-,.,),(Some people think that-,.,Whats more/Moreover-,.,However,other people hold,the opposite opinion that-,.,and worse still-,.,),The theme of the essay,(,陈述议论的主题,),Opinion 1,Opinion 2,Reasons 1,2,Reasons 1,2,Personal opinion,注意事项：,条理要清晰，观点明确；,文章必须包括,所有提示要点,，同时切记用,5,句,连篇；,运用适当的连词，副词，短语等来,衔接,句子；,注意,人称，时态,，,议论文形式以现在时为主,.,注意语言的,规范,，尽量避免语法和拼写错误！表达多样化，避免重复。,假如你叫李华，是顺德的一名中学生。,最近，当地政府正计划实施快速公交和桥梁建设，结果引起人们的广泛争议,。请你根据人们不同的观点，给当地报社写一 封信，反映这一情况,。,赞成观点,反对观点,能够解决交通问题，方便人民生活；,有助于发展经济，提高人民生活水平；,有助于提高顺德作为现代化旅游城市的形象,1.,会造成环境污染,2.,会产生噪音，打扰居民平静的生活；,3.,时常造成交通堵塞。,1.,最近，当地政府正计划实施快速公交和桥梁建设，结果引起人们的,广泛争议,。（提出陈述的问题）,Recently the local government,has decided,to build BRT,which has caused,a heated discussion,among,the local people.,2.,有的人赞成这一做法，认为这能够解决交通问题，方便人民生活；（提出一种观点,+,理由,1,）,Some agree,that we should carry out the construction project,because,it can solve some traffic problems and make our life convenient and comfortable,。,3.,（此外），这将有助于发展经济，提高人民生活水平及顺德作为现代化旅游城市的形象（理由,2,3,）,Besides,it helps,promote,the economy and improve peoples living environment as well as,the image of,Shunde,as a,modern tourist city,(in the southeast of Guangdong province.),4.,（然而），反对者认为此工程建设会造成会造成环境污染时常造成交通堵塞。（提出第二种观点,+,理由,1,2,）,But,others believe that the construction work may cause air pollution and traffic jams may appear now and then.,5.,（更糟的是）会产生噪音，,打扰,居民平静的生活（理由,3,）,Whats worse,the people who,are against,the construction think that the noise produced by the work will,disturb,peoples peaceful life.,正反观点对比常用表达和句型,1.Different people hold different opinions on/concerning.,2.People take different,attitudes towards,3.There are different views about whether,4.Opinions on.,vary/differ,from person to person,.,练习：,1.,不同的人对于是否该在顺德建立华侨城有不同的看法。,2.,最近，关于是否应该取消英语听说考试，在学生中引发了激烈的讨论。,总起,:,提出问题（讨论的背景）,1,.,Different people hold different opinions concerning the issue of building OCT in,Shunde,2.Recently,there has been,a heated discussion/debate,among students,on whether,the Listening and Speaking Test should be canceled.,陈述第一种观点,第一种观点论述,1,论述,2,(,句型多样，各有千秋,),1.Some people believe/,hold the belief that,.As it can,not only.but also.,2.Those who are,in favor of,_,maintain/insist,that_.Moreover,_.,3.Some people,approve of,maintaining that.,陈述第二种观点,（,注意不同观点之间的衔接,）,对立观点论述,1,论述,2,1.Other people,however,believe/argue that_,，,due to the fact that_1,_.Whats worse,_2_,2.,On the other hand/,those who,are against/oppose/object to/disapprove of/,_insist that_1_.Furthermore,_2_,3.On the contrary,other people,hold a different view,insisting that_1_.Worse still,_2_,自己的观点论述,(possible part in basic writing),1.,As I see it,either_ or _ has its advantages and disadvantages,so the most important thing is_,2.,As far as I am concerned,_ is a good choice,for the reason that,_.,3.,Personally/From my point of view,its more advisable(,可取的，合理的,)to _,as_.,Task:Writing,最近，你们班就“,高中生是否应该在学校使用手机”,举行了激烈的辩论，同学们意见不一。请你用英语写一篇短文，介绍同学们的不同观点，并表达你的看法。,赞成的理由,反对的理由,自己的看法,更好与朋友家人交流,获取最新新闻,设置闹钟,查字典,放松,心不在焉,造成近视、,缺乏睡眠，感到疲倦，影响学习,辐射影响健康,写作内容,1,文章必须包括所有提示要点,但不要逐条译成英语,;,2,请根据以上提示，最后谈谈你的观点；,写作要求,只能用,5,个句子表达全部的内容。,Lets try!,