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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,Try to get the,highest marks in writing!,湖南高考英语写作,题目要求：假设你是李平，最近参加了由某电视台举办的中学生英语演讲比赛并获奖，该台准备组织获奖者去北京参加一次英语夏令营活动，现就有关事项，征求你的意见请根据下表所提供的信息，用英语以书信形式给予答复。,活动时间,月日日或月日日,活动内容,参加英语角学唱英语歌曲,听英语讲座表演英语短剧看英语电影教外教学中文,对活动内容的建议或要求,注意：,选择适合你的时间并说明理由,选择两项你喜欢的活动并说明理由,对活动的内容提出至少一个建议或要求,词数左右,信的开头和结尾已经给出,Dear Sir or Madame,考生作品,(I am very glad to be invited to the English summer camp.),I,prefer to,go in August,because I am free at that time.,/,I like to,take part in,English Corner and learn to sing English songs.,/,I like English corner because I want to use English to talk with others.,/,I like English songs because my parents are artists.,/,At the same time,I suggest that all the activities should be organized together and then we will,have a good time,together.,(,Thanks a lot.),Yours truly,Li Ping,优点,：完成了试题规定的任务应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求应用了简单的语句的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，无语法错误，达到了预期的写作目的。,缺点,：没有应用较多的语法结构和词汇，句式单一。对建议的表达缺乏思想性。,Dear Sir or Madame,参考范文,I am very glad to be invited to the English summer camp.,I prefer to go in July because I will have to prepare myself for the new school term in August.It seems all the activities you offer are attractive and meaningful,but Id like to attend the English lectures,from which I can get more information on British and American culture.With the coming of the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games more and more foreigners are eager to know about China.So I hope to teach foreigners Chinese and spread Chinese culture.,Its been a dream for me to visit Beijing.Could you organize a tour around the city during the camp.,Thank you very much,Yours truly,Li Ping,高分作文的标准（分）：,完全完成了规定任务；,覆盖所有内容要点；,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,;,语法结构或词汇方面,有些许,错误但为尽力使用较复杂或较高级词汇所致，具备了较强的语言运用能力；,有效的使用语句间的,连接成分,，使,全文结构紧凑,；,完全达到了预期的写作目的,英语句子的种类,简单句,(The simple sentence),并列句,(The compound sentence),复合句,(The complex sentence),请用合适的并列连词把每组句子合并为一个并列句。,1.I turned on the TV.I watched it.,2.I bought my sister a present.She didnt like it.,并列句,I turned on the TV,and,watched it.,I bought my sister a present,but,she didnt like it.,3.He was tired.He went to bed.,4.The child hid behind his mothers,skirt.He was afraid of the dog.,He was tired,so,he went to bed.,The child hid behind his mothers skirt,for,he was afraid of the dog.,3.He made a promise.He didnt keep it.,He made a promise,but,he didnt keep it.,4.Mary is opening the door.,John is greeting her guests.,Mary is opening the door,and,John is greeting her guests.,请用,括号中所给的词把此组句子连接为一个复合句。,I,still remember the day.I first came to Beijing on that day.(when),I still remember the day,when,I first came to Beijing.,特殊句式,句型,强调句型,倒装句型,复合结构,独立主格结构,省略句型,将下列句子变成强调句或者倒装句,1.I didnt realize the mistake until,I grow up.,(,强调划线部分）,2.We can make our country stronger and stronger in this way.,（,倒装句）,It was,not until I grow up that I realized the mistake,Only in this way can we make our country stronger and stronger.,III.,汉语中逗号与在英语中的作用并非一致,英语中句与句之间的联系绝不依靠逗号,而是借助连接词。缺少连接词,句与句之间也就不存在其合理性,.,例如,:,老师问了我一个问题,我不会回答。,The teacher asked me a question,I couldnt answer it.,The teacher asked me a question,and/but I couldnt answer it.,英语逗号用法与提升英语作文品质,-NMET,考生容易忽视或误用的英语写作常识,Dear Dick,How nice to hear from you again.,You want to know what is going on in schools in China?,In short,things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce learning load.,I dont know about others,but I used to work even at weekends doing endless homework and attending classes,as well,.Now I have more free time.I can,follow my own interests,such as reading books,visiting museums,and taking computer lessons.In the evenings I can watch news on TV or read newspapers.,Whats more,I can go to bed earlier.,As far as I know,everyone is happy about this new arrangement of things.,Best wishes,Li,Hua,其中含逗号用法的情形,:(1)Dear Dick,(2)In short,(3)I dont know about others,but.(4)I can follow my own interests such as reading books,visiting museums,and taking.,(5)Whats more,(6)As far as I know,(7)Best wishes,启示与结论,:,凡逗号出现的场合和时机无不体现英语的使用习惯或固定的表达方式,也与“为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇,具有较强的语言运用能力”,以及实现“上下文的连贯性,即有效地使用语句间的连接成分,全文结构紧凑,语言的得体性”这些重要的考试要求相关。以逗号为主线,研读流畅、精采表达的各种方式,有可能使得写作快速步上新的台阶,从而收到事半功倍的效果。,【,要点,1】,插入语前后须用逗号隔开,1.It is,after all,due to his negligence.,毕竟这是由于他的疏忽,2.She is,as I have told you before,very fond of collecting stamps.,就像我以前告诉过你的她很喜欢集邮,3.I am,therefore,very careful when crossing the road.,因此我过马路时非常小心,4.They,Mr.and Mrs.White,will be there in Beijing tomorrow.,他们（怀特先生和太太）明天就到达北京,5.He is,to be exact,sixteen years old and is not old enough to join the army,.,确切的说，他才十六岁，还没有达到参军的年龄,【,要点,2】,副词从句和逗号,(1),句首的副词从句用逗号隔开。,If it rains tomorrow,I will not go.,明天下雨的话，我就不去了。,When they met,they used to nod to each other.,他们见面时,会互相点头。,(2),副词从句出现在主句之后,一般不用逗号，但附加的语意强时，就用逗号。,He is loved by all,because he is honest.,他人很诚恳，受到大家的爱戴。,He works hard,so that he may pass.,他很用功，想必能考及格。,(3),短的住所、时间副词从句可不用逗号。,When it rains he stays at home,下雨时他待在家里。,When passing(=When he was passing)he looked in.,他路过时顺便进来坐了一会儿。,精 彩 范 文 赏 析,My Opinion on
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