高中英语作文教学课件

,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,英语写作讲解,高考作文类型：,A.,数据说明类文章,B.,提示议论文类文章,C.,看图说话类文章,影响高考英语书面表达得分的几个,因素,1.,语篇信息是否完整,2.,行文是否连贯流畅，语言是否得体。,3.,是否使用高级词汇,4.,是否使用复杂句,5.,卷面整洁,书写工整,写作基本步骤：,仔细审题，列举大纲。,围绕要点，写出句子。,添加过度，确保连贯。,先求正确，再求灵活。,认真眷写，卷面整洁。,现在正是春暖花开的春游时节。你校学生以“高三学生要不要参加春游活动”展开了讨论。请根据以下讨论结果，写一篇短文。,的学生认为,的学生认为,应该春游,不应该春游,接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健康,高考临近，没有心情玩,活动是精神放松，大脑休息，有利于学习,春游耽误学习,How to write a good composition,Introduction(topic),Body,(supporting ideas),Conclusion,Can you list the outline of the writing?,The outline of the writing:,Conclusion paragraph:,Introduction paragraph:,Point 2,Body,Point 1,supporting idea 1,supporting idea 2,supporting idea 1,supporting idea 2,Key words:,1.introduction(topic):,高三学生（,senior 3 students,）,春游,(go spring outing,）,讨论（,discussion,）,2.body(supporting ideas):,接触自然（,be,close to nature,）,呼吸新鲜空气（,breathe some fresh air,）,精神放松（,relax themselves,）,大脑休息（,rest their brains,）,高考临近（,with college entrance examination drawing near,）,没心情玩（,dont feel like going,）,耽误学习,(,waste the time,),3.conclusion:,in my opinion,Key words:,中学生,middle school students,身体差,in a poor state of health,In bad condition,充足的睡眠,enough sleep,加强锻炼，增加户外活动,take more exercise and do more outdoor activities,定时吃饭少吃零食,have three meals,regularly,eat,less non-staple,food.,讲卫生,Form/develop the habit of hygiene,主题句的内容要明确具体，语言简洁，开门见山，句式力争多样性,How will you start you passage?,问句：,从句：,Introduction:,（,sample,）,Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing?,We have had a heated discussion.,巧用过渡句，过渡词，理顺文章的逻辑关系,Pay special attention to the transition sentences:,Opinions,are divided on the question.,What will you say？,Your answer？,The body part,Point1:65%,的人认为应该春游（亮明观点）,Sentence pattern:,Most of us(about 65%)hold the opinion that,since it tends to,which is unfavorable to,Most students,about 65%,are,for,the idea that Senior 3 students should,go spring outing,.,Reason1,：接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健康,Sentence pattern:,They think it good to do,sth,/,sth,do good to,sth,In their opinion,it is of great benefit to do,sth,Eg:They,think it good for their health to,be close to,nature and breathe some fresh air,Reason 2:,活动是精神放松，大脑休息，有利于学习,（注意：两个观点之间的连接）,递进,whats more,；,besides;moreover;in addition,；,furthermore,Eg,:they can,relax,themselves for a while and,rest,their brains,so that,they will be more energetic.,Conclusion:,小段总结，进一步亮明观点，前后呼应,。,Eg,:They think it will,do good to,their students.,Point 2:,的学生认为不应该春游（亮明观点）,注意：使用过渡句，自然衔接句子和段落（承上启下）,Sentence pattern:,However,others prefer to,Some others have just the opposite opinion.,On the other hand.,Eg,:On the other hand,about 35%students are,against,the idea.,Reason 1:,高考临近，没有心情玩,Sentence pattern:,They say/believe/hold the opinion that.,Eg,:,They say that with college entrance examination,drawing near,they dont,feel like going,anywhere.,Reason 2:,春游耽误学习,（注意：两个观点之间的连接）,Eg:,Besides,they think,going spring outing,will,take at least,a day,off.,They cant,afford,the time.They think they should,fix their attention on,their studies,Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing?We have had a heated discussion.Opinions are divided on the question.,Most students,about 65%,are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing.They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and whats more,they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic.They think it will do good to their students.,On the other hand,about 35%students are against the idea.They say that with college entrance examination drawing near,they dont feel like going anywhere.Besides,they think going spring outing will take at least a day off.They cant afford the time.They think they should fix their attention on their studies,表示观点对比类写作套语,A.,总起,:,Opinions are divided on this question.,Different people hold different/opposite opinions.,People have taken/adopted different attitudes towards,People have different opinions on this problem.,People take different views on this question.,B.,表达观点一,:,of them hold the opinion that.,of them are in favor of the idea that,People who are for the idea think,C.,表达不同观点之间的衔接,:,However,of them hold a different view./of them hold the opposite opinion.,People who are against it dont think so.,However,every coin has two sides.,Different from those.,people think.,On the other hand,people think.,D.,结尾常用套语,:,In my opinion/Personally,As far as Im concerned,In short/in brief/in a word,Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing?We have had a heated discussion.Opinions are divided on the question.,Most students,about 65%,are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing.They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and whats more,they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic.They think it will do good to their students.,On the other hand,about 35%students are against the idea.They say that with college entrance examinati